THE PATRIOT
EXT. COWPENS - PRE-DAWN
Martin sits, sewing. He finishes the final repair on
Gabriel's flag. He appraises his handiwork. Though
stained and tattered, the flag is intact.
Martin stands on the crest of a shallow rise, looking out
at the British lines, barely distinguishable in the faint
light. Above him, stars are visible, but they're fading
in the light of the pre-dawn glow from the horizon.
Martin scans the disappearing stars, searching out the
NORTH STAR, but in the increasingly harsh light of this
day, he can't find it. He turns his eyes back to the
battlefield.
EXT. COWPENS BATTLEFIELD - DAY
The sun has risen but a heavy ground fog limits visibility
to a few dozen yards. Men move like ghosts.
THE CAMERA finds waiting squadrons of men but in the mist
there is no overview, just separate detachments:
An orderly regiment of CONTINENTAL CAVALRY, mounted,
waiting, steadying their horses.
Two long lines of blue-uniformed CONTINENTAL INFANTRY...
Massed squares of CONTINENTAL INFANTRY RESERVES...
The American Command, including Morgan, Lee and several
other officers, attended by riders and runners...
And, finally, MARTIN AND HIS MEN, who stand in the middle
of a long line of Patriot militia in the center of a long,
valley-line depression. Martin stands next to DeLancey.
They stand silently, unable to see anything other than
each other and the gently slope of the dew-covered grass
in front of them.
They're all grim. They know what's coming.
Then, the SOUND OF A SINGLE DRUM, heard but unseen, coming
from over the slope...
Then, MORE DRUMS, more and more, A COMPETITION OF DRUM
BEATS...
Martin's men listen, turning their heads, trying to
imagine what is happening on the other side of the rise in
front of them.
MARTIN turns to DeLancey.
MARTIN
How old were your daughters?
DeLancey looks closely at Martin and realizes, with some
surprise, that he's willing to answer. He speaks softly.
DELANCEY
I had two daughters... Violette was
twelve... Paulette was ten. They
had green eyes.
MARTIN
You have my sympathy.
DELANCEY
Thank you.
They stand silently next to each other.
EXT. BRITISH LINES - DAY
Tavington, surrounded by his officers, stands on a low
hill, trying, with the aid of a spyglass to catch the
first view of the battlefield as the morning mist begins
to burn off. Through the fog, he just makes out the
American lines.
TAVINGTON
Unless I'm dreaming, I think I see
irregulars at their center.
Tavington smiles.
EXT. LOW MEADOW - COWPENS - MORNING
Martin and his men wait.
A STRANGE SOUND. Soft, muted. The men turn their heads,
listening, their eyes shifting.
They hear the SOUND OF HUNDREDS OF BOOTS ON WET GRASS,
advancing...
THE CAMERA WATCHES THE FACES OF MARTIN AND HIS MEN as they
listen to an unseen army approaching.
THEN, THEY SEE IT... A MASSIVE WALL OF RED appears over
the rise in front of them... hundreds of Redcoats, in
perfect formation, marching in lockstep, straight for
them.
Martin sees the fear on his men's faces, but none of them
move...
The BRITISH DRUMS GROW LOUDER AND LOUDER... it's almost
enough to drive a man to flight... almost.
The CAMERA explores the faces of Martin's men... all are
frightened but all are motionless.
Closer and closer, the British line approaches... The
American's don't move...
Then, the BRITISH LINE STOPS...
At a flurry of commands, the Redcoats ready their muskets,
then aim...
Still, Martin and the Americans don't move... DEAD
SILENCE...
Then, a single, thin voice calls out from the British
lines...
BRITISH VOICE (O.S.)
Fire!
IN A THUNDEROUS, MASSIVE VOLLEY, three thousand British
muskets fire simultaneously... just as the entire line of
AMERICAN MILITIAMEN DIVE TO THE GROUND...
Many Americans are saved by the move but many, many others
are torn apart by the British musketballs...
THE AMOUNT OF SMOKE IS INCREDIBLE... it obscures
everything. Each musket spits out a billow of think white
smoke a dozen feet in front of it and hundreds of them
just fired. The massive, opaque white cloud quickly
spreads over the entire battlefield.
The astonished Redcoats instantly reloading...
The AMERICANS RISE, shoulder arms and FIRE A THUNDEROUS
VOLLEY into the British ranks.
Scores of REDCOATS FALL, but the line of well-trained
regulars remains intact as rear ranks fill in the front...
A RACE TO RELOAD... the Redcoats have a slight
headstart... Balls... wadding... tamp... prime the pan...
cock... as fast as they can possibly reload... a REDCOAT
DRUM BEATS "FIRE WHEN READY," a command repeated by the
BRITISH BUGLE...
The Redcoats win the race... RAISES THEIR MUSKETS... FIRE
A ROLLING VOLLEY...
SCORES OF AMERICAN MILITIAMEN FALL... but still the line
holds... second rank men fill the gaps, still loading...
Then, loaded, as one, the AMERICANS RAISES THEIR MUSKETS
AND FIRE A DEVASTATING VOLLEY INTO THE BRITISH RANKS...
decimating the Redcoats...
The Redcoats are staggered but then see the Americans turn
in DISORDERLY PANIC and FLEE... the surprised, grateful
Redcoats rally, some laugh...
ON A RISE BEHIND THE BATTLEFIELD, TAVINGTON, watches
through his spyglass, trying to get a sense of what's
happening through the spreading cloud of musket smoke. He
barks to his SIGNALMAN...
TAVINGTON
Fix bayonets... dispatch the Green
Dragoons.
The Signalman raises his semaphore flags and snaps the
message.
MARTIN AND HIS MEN are caught in the middle of the chaotic
retreat...
THE BRITISH LINE advances at a quickstep, bayonets
fixed... from behind them, THE GREEN DRAGOONS appear, at a
full gallop, Tavington at their head...
THE BATTLEFIELD
It's an astonishing sight... total madness... hell... a
painting by Hieronymous Bosch...
The mass of the British infantry charges after the fleeing
Patriot militiamen... the Redcoat infantry grows
disorderly as it runs...
TAVINGTON AND THE BRITISH CAVALRY THUNDERS to the head of
the Redcoats, closing in on the fleeing Patriots. The
cavalry swords are drawn and raised for a slaughter...
THEN SUDDENLY, stepping into view from behind a low, grass
covered rise, a SOLID LINE OF BLUE APPEARS, rock solid...
It opens up, allowing the fleeing Patriots to pass through
it like water... then it closes again, becoming a solid
blue wall...
MARTIN, HIS MEN AND THE ENTIRE MASS OF FLEEING MILITIA
STOPS DEAD, turns and joins the blue American line...
A flurry of orders, then the BLUE WALL ERUPTS WITH A
VOLLEY of musket fire that stops the disorderly British
advance in its tracks...
Hundreds of Redcoats fall instantly...
Hundreds of Green Dragoons and their horses fall with
them...
The effect of the volley is devastating... the American
timing is perfect...
Again, the amount of SMOKE is astonishing... visibility
drops to less than twenty feet in most places... drifting
smoke opens up glimpses of the battle here and there but
it is primarily a battle of sound... men simply follow the
men in front of them...
The Blue Continentals advance in an orderly manner from
both flanks onto the Redcoats, trapping them...
MARTIN FIRES one of his pistols... draws his tomahawk...
hacks... killing one Redcoat after another...
No remorse, no hesitation, no pity... his tomahawk sinks
into the stock of an upraised British musket and is pulled
from his hands...
Martin quickly kills the Redcoat with his pistol...
THEN, THROUGH THE SMOKE, MARTIN CATCHES A GLIMPSE OF
TAVINGTON...
Martin freezes... his eyes locked on Tavington who is
fighting a pitched battle, making his way toward the
perimeter of the field, trying to escape back to the
British lines...
Seeing nothing but Tavington, Martin hurriedly tears open
his weapons pouch and pulls out one of the bullets made
from Thomas' lead soldiers...
As he loads the pistol, his eyes still trained on
Tavington, DeLancey runs up...
DELANCEY
COLONEL! OUR LINE!
Martin finishes reloading... distracted he turns to
DeLancey for an instant...
DELANCEY
OUR LINE IS FALTERING...
Martin takes a quick glance at the Continental line,
seeing...
An onslaught of Redcoats and a smaller number of Patriots
who are losing ground, their lines breaking up...
The PATRIOT STANDARD BEARER, a burly sergeant, sees the
Redcoat reinforcements and starts backing up...
MARTIN IS TORN...
He looks to Tavington, seeing him distracted, vulnerable
but too distant a target for the pistol...
DeLancey can't wait, he runs off...
Martin sees the Patriot line... beginning to retreat...
the Patriot Standard Bearer, carrying the Old Glory,
looses his nerve, joins the retreat...
Martin takes a last look at Tavington and turns away,
heading over toward the retreating Patriots...
Moving against the growing tide of retreat, shoving the
men, bumped by others, as more and more Americans join the
retreat...
Then, Martin sees the standard bearing Sergeant passing...
MARTIN
Stop... hold the line!
The Sergeant tries to bull past, but Martin blocks his way
and GRABS THE FLAG from him...
The Sergeant holds on but a FOREARM TO THE HEAD from
Martin dislodges the flag from his grasp...
Martin holds the flag high and races back, against the
tide of retreating Patriots...
MARTIN
HOLD THE LINE! HOLD THE LINE!
Only Martin moves against the tide, then...
Several Patriots stop... then others...
Martin, single-mindedly tears through them, daring them to
follow, not caring if they do...
One Patriot takes off after Martin, then another...
The retreat slows... then turns...
The Patriot force, led by Martin, SLAMS INTO THE Redcoat
line...
Hand-to-hand... some musket... some swords... many
bayonets and musket stocks...
Martin plants the flag in the dirt... and plants himself
right next to it...
He fires his pistol, killing a Redcoat... grabs a downed
sword... kills two more Redcoats...
The tide turns...
A pair of Redcoats back up from the Patriot vanguard...
then other Redcoats disengage...
Several Redcoats turn... stumbling away... a few run...
those who don't are killed by the men around Martin...
The Redcoats break into a full retreat, which turns into a
rout as another mass of Patriots bursts through the smoke
and joins the line...
The Patriots sees the retreating Redcoats intercepted by
another detachment of Patriots... the tide fully turned...
the battle is won...


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