PITCH BLACK
RIDDICK'S POV: Another predator lands to drink. Then another.
Their backs are to us, but the pool is turning into a major
gathering place.
Soon they all can hear CLICKING above the RAIN. Their nightmare
is far from over.
RIDDICK
Get behind me.
RIDDICK'S POV: Of a half-dozen predators shifting places at the
pool. A slim gap appears.
RIDDICK
When I go, we go. Full-throttle.
CLOSE on their hands, gripping each other.
RIDDICK
Ready...ready....
RIDDICK'S POV: The gap between predators widens into a passage.
A gauntlet within a gauntlet.
Riddick runs. Linked like paper dolls, the others follow blindly.
RIDDICK'S POV: Of a predator turning to "stare" over its
shoulder.
PREDATOR'S POV: Of Riddick bearing down fast.
The survivors hit the water like lawn mowers on legs, crashing
through, scattering water and predators alike, managing to
reach...
The muddy rise. Audrey loses her grip on the others...
And starts back-sliding. She CRIES OUT, turning the head of...
Riddick. He catches Audrey as her legs hit the pool. He muscles
her back up the rise and heaves her over the top, sending her
slip-sliding down the other side.
RIDDICK
You know the way!
Not waiting for him, Fry and Imam disappear over the rise.
RIDDICK'S POV: Of the predators. Regrouping. Crawling up the
rise at us.
EXT. NIGHT
Fry, Imam, and Audrey run hard, glow-worm lights bouncing wildly.
RIDDICK'S POV: Chasing them.
PREDATOR'S POV: Chasing Riddick.
EXT. SETTLEMENT - NIGHT
Fry, Imam, and Audrey reach the settlement. They spill around a
corner and see...
The light of the skiff.
EXT. SETTLEMENT - NIGHT
RIDDICK'S POV: Ahead of us, we see Fry, Imam, and Audrey
vanishing around the corner. BREATHING LIKE A RACEHORSE, we
follow in their steps, storming around the same corner. Suddenly
a predator is right there, right in our face.
PREDATOR'S POV: Of Riddick skidding to a stop. He snaps a look
up.
RIDDICK'S POV: Of another predator perched gargoyle-like on the
building. It SPEED-CLICKS at us.
PREDATOR'S POV: Of Riddick slowly pulling two shivs. Bracing
himself. Ready to blade it out.
EXT. SKIFF - NIGHT
Imam and Audrey stagger aboard. Safe in the light of the
headbeams, Fry turns back, panting, waiting.
Waiting.
IMAM
Captain....
He wants her to board the skiff. Fry gives it another beat, eyes
sweeping the dark rain. And just when we think it's over for
Riddick -- TERRIBLE SCREAMS are heard from both man and predator:
There's a helluva fight going on out there. Close out there.
Fry snatches the glow-worms off Imam's neck...
And plunges into the darkness, homing in on the SOUNDS until...
A blade flashes in her face. She ducks and spots...
Riddick. Bloody, muddy, he's down on his knees, still trying to
fight off the shadow-beasts that swirl and slash all around him.
Around them both.
FRY
It's me, it's me, it's me!
She gets the light around his neck. Now we see his face
clearly -- and see a very human expression there: Fear. Fry
grabs his armpits and tries to pull him up.
FRY
C'mon, Riddick -- said I'd die for them,
not you.
He gets his feet under him. Gripping each other, they start
moving, turning like dancers in a macabre waltz, hoping the
predators can't fix on Riddick's blood.
FRY
Just 10 steps...keep turning, keep
turning...that's right...others're already
'board, waitin' for us right now...five
steps...c'mon, almost there, Riddick...
almost there...we're almost --
Something jolts them. ALL CLICKING STOPS.
EXTREME CLOSEUPS: Searching each other's eyes. Someone just got
slashed from behind, slashed bad. But who?
RIDDICK
Not for me....
In an eyeblink she's gone, ripped from his arms. There was no
scream. No cry. No final words. Just...
Blackness.
EXT. PLANET'S ORBIT - NIGHT
Out of the blackness, a spot of fire races toward us. It
resolves into the skiff, fabric wings burning off as it hits
escape velocity.


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