PITCH BLACK
An icy hand grips her heart. Soundlessly, Fry backtracks her
chain, but...
Something shadows across the exit. It stops her cold.
Her hand finds something new. She angles it to the light. It's
one of Zeke's boots -- with a bit of Zeke still in it.
CLICKITY-CLICKITY-CLICKITY....
The whole chamber is coming alive around her, shadows unfurling,
skulking the perimeter, circling.
Something impales the boot out of her hand, reclaiming it. It
was faster than a lightning-strike.
A paralyzed beat before...
Fry makes her move, rolling back into the shaft of daylight and
springing straight up into...
INT. SPIRE - DAY
The spire. Bracing against the walls, Fry tries to "walk" her
way up -- but her chain goes taut. Did it catch on something?
Or did something catch it? Fry starts pounding the earthen walls.
FRY
Here! I'm in HERE, HERE, HERE!
EXT. GRAVE-SITE - SPIRED HILLS - DAY
IMAM
Did you hear....
They drop down and suspend their heads over the bloody grave,
listening. Nothing now.
INT. SPIRE - DAY
FRY
I'm over here in the --
Something tugs on her chain.
FRY
Oh, God....
CLOSE on her feet. Kicking hard at the walls, trying to gouge
out footholds.
A stronger tug. Fry loses altitude, slipping closer to...
The MADLY CLICKING LAIR below.
She tries to jettison her belt -- but can't brace herself up and
undo the belt. Suddenly...
Something explodes near her head. Daylight appears, followed by
faces, human faces. They're breaking through the spire with the
pick-ax. Hands reach inside...
EXT. SPIRED HILLS - DAY
...and birth her into daylight. Overlapping:
JOHNS
We got you...it's okay, it's okay...we got
you now....
IMAM
The child heard you before any of us could
even....
SHAZZA
Did you find him? You find Zeke?
FRY
(half insane)
...wasn't Riddick...it was...it was...
goddamn, that was stupid....but wasn't
Riddick. Somethin' else down there that
got Zeke and nearly got --
Her. She flies back into the spire. Something's still got the
chain.
The others grab at flailing limbs. It's a tug-of-war now, human
hands on one end, unseen "hands" on the other -- and the humans
are losing. Until...
Imam unsheathes his blade...
And slices through Fry's belt.
INT. SPIRE - DAY
As the chain falls down the spire. Without Fry.
INT./EXT. CRASH SHIP - DAY
FAST SHOTS: Survivors packing up O2, liquor, umbrellas, the
Koran -- whatever qualifies as "essential" on this planet. Amid
the activity, Audrey pauses to look at...
The spired hills.
INT. BATTERY BAY - CRASH SHIP - DAY
Fry and Imam pull a power cell from the ship's battery bay,
THUMPING it down on the deck.
IMAM
One is all?
FRY
For now.
INT. CARGO HOLD - DAY
At his personal locker, Johns digs out a box of shotgun shells.
He bypasses the blue-metal shells for a red-metal one. There's
something special about it -- though what, we can't be sure.
INT. MAIN CABIN - CRASH SHIP - DAY
A shadow falls over Riddick. He doesn't look up.
RIDDICK
Found somethin' worse than me, huh?
JOHNS
We're movin'. And I'm just wondering if
I shouldn't lighten the load right now.
Now their eyes meet. Johns RATCHETS HIS SHOTGUN and points it
at Riddick's head.
RIDDICK
Woof, woof.
The SHOTGUN EXPLODES. CAMERA PANS off of Johns to show
Riddick still alive. The shotgun discharged next to his head and
blew off his wrist chains.
JOHNS
Want you to remember this moment, Riddick.
The way it coulda gone and didn't.
RIDDICK
(deaf)
Say that again.
JOHNS
Here's the deal. You work without the
chains, without the bit -- without the
shivs. You help us get off this rock....
RIDDICK
For what? The honor of goin' back to some
asshole of a cell?
JOHNS
Truth is, Riddick, I'm tired of this
head-up shit. I wanna be free of you as
much as you wanna be free of me.
A beat. The future rearranges in Riddick's head.
RIDDICK
You'd cut me loose, Boss?
JOHNS
Only if we both get outta this alive.
And there may be a way.
He offers a hand to help Riddick up, to seal the deal.
RIDDICK
(staring at hand)
My recommendation: Do me. Don't take
the chance that I'll get shiv-happy on
your wannabe ass. Ghost me, Riddick.
Would if I were you.
JOHNS
If you were me, I'd kill us both. C'mon,
you wanna sit at the grown-up table or not?
A beat. Riddick reaches out for the hand -- and grabs the
shotgun with his off-hand. A blur of movement. Suddenly Johns
is staring at the eyes of his own shotgun.
RIDDICK
Want you to remember this moment.
He pumps shotgun, spitting blue shells over Johns. He drops the
emptied gun and walks away.
EXT. PLANET - DAY
EXTREMELY WIDE: Blue sun setting, yellow and red sun rising.
The survivors trek for the settlement. Fry and Imam lug the
power cell between them, but the real load is shouldered by...
Riddick. Promoted from murderous monster to beast of burden,
he tows a drag-sled heavy with cargo.
PARIS
(to Johns)
So just like that. Wave your little wand
and he's one of us now.
JOHNS
Didn't say that. But least this way I
don't have to worry about falling asleep
and not wakin' up.
IMAM
Well, I feel we owe Mr. Riddick amends.
SHAZZA
Oh, right. Let's all line up and beg his
forgiveness. Right you are.
IMAM
At least give the man some oxygen....
JOHNS
He's happy just bein' vertical. Leave him
be.
AUDREY
So I can talk to him now?
JOHNS/SHAZZA
(in unison)
No.
Paris drops a wine bottle. Trailing, Riddick collects it.
PARIS
Paris P. Ogilvie. Antiquities dealer,
entrepreneur.
RIDDICK
(shaking hands)
Richard B. Riddick. Escaped convict,
murderer.
Instead of returning the bottle, Riddick opens it and drinks.
Paris hurries to catch up to the others.
PARIS
You know, if I owned Hell and this
planet...I believe I'd rent this out and
live in Hell.
EXT. THE GAUNTLET - DAY
FRY'S POV: Of spires high above us.
The group falls silent as they transit the canyon, all eyes on
the spires. Fry stops short, hearing...
CLICKITY-CLICK.
Neck hairs rise -- but soon the sound vanishes. The group starts
moving again, faster.
CLICKITY-CLICKITY-CLICK.
Are they being stalked? Nervously, Fry traces the sound back
to...
Beads dangling from the belt of Pilgrim #1. Whenever he moves,
the STRINGS CLACK together.
EXT. SKIFF - DAY
PARIS
I mean, usually I can appreciate antiques,
but, uh....
The survivors have reached the settlement. Fry is trying to get
the power cell aboard the skiff as the others walk its exterior.
JOHNS
Little ratty-ass.
FRY
Nothing we can't repair -- so long as the
electrical adapts.
SHAZZA
Not a star-jumper.
RIDDICK
Doesn't need to be. Use this to get back
up to the Sol-Track Shipping Lanes, stick
out a thumb. You'll get picked up.
(to Fry)
Right?
Fry looks from Riddick to Johns. "How did he know that?"
FRY
Little help here?
They muscle the power cell aboard. Riddick starts to follow, but
Johns blocks. He doesn't want Riddick inside.
JOHNS
Check those containers for me. See what
we can patch wings with.
EXT. SETTLEMENT - DAY
With religious fervor, the Chrislams are repairing the moisture-
recovery unit -- the machine Allah led them to.
INT. SKIFF - DAY
START on the battery bay. Hands are adapting the power cell to
the skiffs older electrical system. Soon...
Lights wink on throughout the ship.
FRY
Okay, that should buy us a sys-check.
But we'll need more cells.
JOHNS
How many?
FRY
15 6-gigs here...90 gigs total...other
ship carries 20-gig cells, so...five.
Five total to launch.
JOHNS
25 kilos each, huh?
SHAZZA
Old sand-cat outside. See if I can't get
it up and chuggin'.
JOHNS
Do it. And if you need an extra hand,
tap our problem child out....
(looking out)
Where's Riddick?


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