PITCH BLACK
EXT. CRASH SHIP - DEEP DUSK
A second darkness sweeps over the survivors. Now they all stop,
beholding...
EXT. SPIRED HILLS - DEEP DUSK
Something pouring from the spire-tops. Backlit by coronal light,
it first seems to be smoke or ash -- but soon we realize these
are living things, HATCHLINGS SQUEALING IN DELIGHT over their
first nightfall.
EXT. CRASH SHIP - DEEP DUSK
JOHNS
Jesus, how many can there....
They keep coming, filling the sky with thick waves. Mercifully,
the hatchlings seem to be moving away. But now one wave cleaves
from another -- and does a quick about-face.
PARIS
Just a suggestion, but perhaps we should
flee.
FRY
Cargo hold, everyone in the cargo hold.
lesgo, lesgo, lesgo.
They run. Reach the cargo hold. Turn back to see...
Riddick and Shazza still coming. Hearing the SQUEALING WAVE
descending on them...
Riddick and Shazza hit to the dirt. Hatchlings torrent just
inches overhead.
CLOSE on Shazza. Horrified. Hard to breathe. Like being
underwater.
CLOSE on Riddick. He watches in awe, no more frightened that a
kid lying on his back looking up at the stars. Experimenting, he
eases a bone-shiv into the hatchlings. Instantly it's whittled
down to nothing. It's like a river of razor blades.
The hatchling keep coming. Shazza whips a panicky look at the
cargo hold. Can she make it? Should she even try?
AUDREY
Tell her to stay there. Stay down.
SHAZZA, JUST STAY DOWN!
Shazza starts worming toward the cargo hold. Suddenly the
hatchings vanish. A beat. Is it safe? Shazza gets to her
feet...
FRY
No, no, NO, NO, NO....
...and the wave is back, enveloping Shazza.
INT./EXT. CARGO HOLD - DEEP DUSK
Standing in the mouth of the cargo container, the others get a
last glimpse of Shazza as she flies by the doors, caught up in
the funnel-cloud of hatchlings. Then she's simply gone.
EXT. CRASH SHIP - DEEP DUSK
Still on the ground, Riddick checks left and right like someone
about to cross a busy street. Now he gets up, smacks his hands
clean, strolls for the hold. Behind him...
A rising GANG-CLICKING.
CLOSE on Fry. She knows the sound better than anyone.
EXT. SPIRED HILLS - DEEP DUSK
The spires are crumbling, torn down from within.
EXT. CRASH SHIP - DEEP DUSK
Reaching the cargo hold, Riddick turns around for one last look.
PUSH IN as he sheds goggles -- and looks at the world with his
jaguar eyes.
RIDDICK'S POV: In degraded image, we see the predators -- adult
hatchlings -- emerge from the spires. They're large, mammalian,
hammer-headed. They CLICK with echo-location, sounding out the
world they haven't inhabited in 60 years.
FRY
What is it? What's happening?
RIDDICK'S POV: The predators launch from the hills, gliding,
SOUNDING, searching.
RIDDICK
Like I said. Ain't me you gotta worry
about.
EXT. SKY - DEEP DUSK TO NIGHT
The rim of the planet overtakes both suns. The world goes dark.
INT. CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
Vault-like DOORS BOOM CLOSED.
The survivors are locked inside the only secure part of the ship.
Somehow they've been reduced to neanderthals huddling in their
cave, listening to the howls of the sabertooths.
AUDREY
What if...what if she's still out there...
still alive....
JOHNS
Well, I don't want to jump to conclusions
here...but 'member that boneyard? These
just might be the fuckers that killed
every other living thing on this planet,
okay? Chances of Shazza knockin' on that
door anytime soon are just about zero
squared.
FRY
(agreeing)
I saw the cut-marks on the bones. Wasn't
a natural die-off.
IMAM
Quiet, please. Everyone.
Imam is listening at the cargo door. The others pile up
alongside, ears tuned like radar. CLICKING SWEEPS PAST outside.
AUDREY
(whispering)
Why do they do that? Make that sound?
IMAM
Perhaps the way they see. With sound,
reflecting back.
FRY
(realizing)
Echo-location. That's what it is....
Now MORE CLICKING -- behind them. Lights whip around to find...
Nothing. Only the door of an open container about halfway down
the tunnel-like hold.
A volley of looks. "How the fuck could one get in here?"
FRY
Breach in the hull. I dunno.
More CLICKING. Johns realizes they expect him to check it out.
JOHNS
I'd rather piss glass.
RIDDICK
Well, you got the big gauge.
JOHNS
Wanna rag your fat mouth?
AUDREY
Maybe it's just their beads again. Imam,
are you still --
IMAM
No, no, no, I do not believe --
JOHNS
C'mon, man, you're drivin' everybody
bugfuck with those things. Why don't you
just lose the goddamn....
More CLICKING -- along with the sound of TOPPLING CARGO.
RIDDICK
Big beads.
Butching up, Johns sucks on his breather and shimmies toward...
The open container. Leading with his shotgun, he FIRES blindly
around the door. Something SQUEALS -- then silence. Johns eases
his head and a light around the door to spot...
Hatchlings on the ground, blasted into dog food.
JOHNS
(to others)
Okay. We're okay. Just some small ones
that musta --
Something WHOOSHES for his head, swinging like a scythe. It
catches his shotgun, DISCHARGING IT, giving us...
A flash-image of an adult predator. Up close.
In one thin second, Johns is back with the others.
JOHNS
Very big beads.
PARIS
Not staying in here another....
He goes for the main-door lever, ready to flee into the night.
Fry lunges for him.
FRY
Christ, you don't know what's out there!
PARIS
I know what's in here!
IMAM
Everybody come, this way and we should be
safe. Hurry, please....
INT. FIRST CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
Imam shepherds them into a container. The door slams closed.
At first, only the sound of MOUTHS SUCKING BREATHERS. Then a
SCRATCHING.
Johns fumbles with a cutting torch. Gets it burning. Adjusts
the gasses to illuminate...
The door. Scythe-like blades are probing joints. Suddenly HEAVY
BLOWS drive everyone back.
RIDDICK
(to Johns)
Can you do sumpin' else with that?
'Sides holding it in my fucking face?
Taking the hint, Johns starts cutting the common wall between
containers. It's a race between the sparks of his cutter and the
blades of the predators.
INT. SECOND CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
An burn-outline appears in the common wall. Johns kicks out the
escape hatch. Audrey speed-crawls through first as...
INT. FIRST CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
Predators shred into the container right behind them, CLICKING,
sweeping, hunting.
INT. THIRD/FOURTH CONTAINERS - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
SERIES OF SHOTS: Again and again, they burn a new escape hatch
just as the predators break into the container being vacated,
always entering darkness.
INT. FIFTH CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
Inside their fifth container now, Johns torches away. Fry and
Paris use cargo to block the entrance hole -- then block the
cargo with their bodies.
Riddick adds his weight -- until he notices pepper-shot in the
cargo. Suspecting the worst, he leaves the others behind...
PARIS
Hello, hello?
...and moves to the front of the container where darkness
prevails. Something SQUISHES underfoot. He slips off goggles.
RIDDICK'S POV: Of dead hatchlings on the floor. This is the
open container, the one where Johns found predators.
Sensing energy, Riddick lifts his face.
RIDDICK'S POV: Of an adolescent predator. It squats atop cargo,
eating a hatchling. A heavy bone-blade crowns its skull.
Sensing Riddick, it sweeps the area with INQUISITIVE CLICKS.
PREDATOR POV: Of Riddick.
(NOTE: The PREDATOR POV is a crude image that gives impression
without detail. We're "seeing" what the predator hears with
echo-location. Think of a sonagram that strobes and wraps its
subject in 3-D space.)
Oblivious, the others kick out the new escape hatch. Audrey,
Fry, and Johns worm through. Imam and Pilgrim #2 hang back.
"Where's Riddick?"
He's in a stare-down with a predator.
Searching, Pilgrim #2 rounds a corner -- and finds his head
caught in a vice-like grip.
RIDDICK
Don't. Move.
RIDDICK'S POV: As a second predator appears above them. This
one reaches down with its scythe blade...
And gently probes the two men. It wants know what they're made
of.
CLOSE on the pilgrim's shoes. Over-running with piss.
More blades descend, moving over them like surgical instruments.
One test-slices Riddick's shirt.
INT. SIXTH CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
In the next container, Fry waits anxiously. Hissing through the
escape hatch:
FRY
Imam? Where are they?
INT. FIFTH CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
CLOSE on a predator's scythe blade. It test-slices the pilgrim's
skin. Blood wells up. All CLICKING CEASES.
IMAM (O.S.)
Hasan?
FRY (O.S.)
Riddick?
TIGHT on the pilgrim -- more scared now that the clicking has
stopped. Losing his nerve, he bolts.
RIDDICK
No....
The predators are on him, just blurs in the dark. DEATH-SCREAM.
RIDDICK'S POV: A third predator appears above him.
Making his move, Riddick darts around cargo and heads for the
escape hatch as...
Fry's light catches him square in the face. Blinded, Riddick
HOWLS and stumbles forward. Fry's light leaps deeper to hit...
The predator right behind him. With a similar reaction, the
beast HOWLS and flails back.
HOLD on Fry for a time-stopped moment. What stopped it? Was it
really her? Suddenly a SHOTGUN EXPLODES beside her head. Jacked
up, Johns is BLASTING shadows.
FRY
Stop it, stop it, STOP IT!
JOHNS
'Sokay, 'sokay. I killed it.
They give him a look. "Sure you did." Suddenly a CARCASS SLAMS
to the floor, sending everyone jumping back in a perfect splash-
pattern. "Christ, he did kill one."
Fry reclaims her dropped light and beams it on the carcass.
Wherever the light strikes it, the flesh chars and steams.
FRY
There....
PARIS
Like the light is scalding it.
FRY
It hurts them. Light actually hurts
them....
VULTURE SOUNDS from the two O.S. adolescents, fighting over the
scraps of the pilgrim.
IMAM
Is that...Hasan?
Riddick nods.
JOHNS
We'll burn a candle for him later. C'mon.
INT. SIXTH CONTAINER - CARGO HOLD - NIGHT
Cargo has been shoved against the door and walls. The survivors
gather around Fry's handlight. Audrey -- tough little Audrey --
has been reduced to a shivering lump of mush.
FRY
...one cutting torch...one handlight here,
two more in the cabin...I think two
more....
PARIS
Spirits. Anything over 45 proof burns
well.
FRY
How many bottles?
PARIS
Not sure. Ten?
FRY
Those umbrellas, the ones that mist.
Would they burn?
(reading his face)
If you got a receipt?
PARIS
Possibly.
FRY
Awright. So maybe we'll have enough light.
JOHNS
Enough for what?
Now she challenges him to be the mind-reader.
JOHNS (CONT'D)
Oh, lady. If you're in your right mind,
I pray you go insane.
FRY
(to others)
We can stick to the plan. If we get four
cells back to the skiff, we're off this
rock.
PARIS
I hate to kill a beautiful theory with an
ugly fact, but that sand-cat won't run at
night.
FRY
We'll have to carry the cells...drag
them...whatever it takes.
Troubled faces. Is it just our imagination? Or is the light on
the floor growing dimmer?
AUDREY
You mean...tonight? With all those things
still out there?


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