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英语剧本《2001太空漫游》

时间:2007-10-27 22:01:32来源: 作者:
2001: A Space Odyssey (1968)
by Stanley Kubrick and Arthur C. Clark.
Revised draft, 12/14/65.

TITLE					    PART I

					    AFRICA

					    3,000,000 YEARS AGO

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A1

VIEWS OF AFRICAN DRYLANDS - DROUGHT



The remorseless drought had lasted now for ten million years,

and would not end for another million. The reign of the ter-

rible lizards had long since passed, but here on the continent

which would one day be known as Africa, the battle for survival

had reached a new climax of ferocity, and the victor was not

yet in sight. In this dry and barren land, only the small or

the swift or the fierce could flourish, or even hope to exist.



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A2

INT & EXT CAVES - MOONWATCHER



The man-apes of the field had none of these attributes, and

they were on the long, pathetic road to racial extinction.

About twenty of them occupied a group of caves overlooking

a small, parched valley, divided by a sluggish, brown stream.



The tribe had always been hungry, and now it was starving.

As the first dim glow of dawn creeps into the cave, Moonwatcher

discovers that his father has died during the night. He did not know

the Old One was his father, for such a relationship was beyond

his understanding. but as he stands looking down at the emac-

iated body he feels something, something akin to sadness. Then

he carries his dead father out of the cave, and leaves him for the

hyenas.



Among his kind, Moonwatcher is almost a giant. He is nearly

five feet high, and though badly undernourished, weighs over

a hundred pounds. His hairy, muscular body is quite man-like,

and his head is already nearer man than ape. The forehead is

low, and there are great ridges over the eye-sockets, yet he

unmistakably holds in his genes the promise of humanity. As

he looks out now upon the hostile world, there is already



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A2

CONTINUED



something in his gaze beyond the grasp of any ape. In those

dark, deep-set eyes is a dawning awareness-the first intima-

tions of an intelligence which would not fulfill itself for another

two million years.



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A3

EXT  THE STREAM - THE OTHERS



As the dawn sky brightens, Moonwatcher and his tribe reach

the shallow stream.



The Others are already there. They were there on the other

side every day - that did not make it any less annoying.



There are eighteen of them, and it is impossible to distinguish

them from the members of Moonwatcher's own tribe. As

they see him coming, the Others begin to angrily dance and

shriek on their side of the stream, and his own people reply

In kind.



The confrontation lasts a few minutes - then the display dies

out as quickly as it has begun, and everyone drinks his fill of

the muddy water. Honor has been satisfied - each group has

staked its claim to its own territory.



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A4

EXT  AFRICAN PLAIN - HERBIVORES



Moonwatcher and his companions search for berries, fruit

and leaves, and fight off pangs of hunger, while all around

them, competing with them for the samr fodder, is a potential

source of more food than they could ever hope to eat. Yet

all the thousands of tons of meat roaming over the parched

savanna and through the brush is not only beyond their reach;

the idea of eating it is beyond their imagination. They are

slowly starving to death in the midst of plenty.



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A5

EXT  PARCHED COUNTRYSIDE - THE LION



The tribe slowly wanders across the bare, flat country-

side foraging for roots and occasional berries.



Eight of them are irregularly strung out on the open plain,

about fifty feet apart.



The ground is flat for miles around.



Suddenly, Moonwatcher becomes aware of a lion, stalking

them about 300 yards away.



Defenceless and with nowhere to hide, they scatter in all

directions, but the lion brings one to the ground.



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A6

EXT  DEAD TREE - FINDS HONEY



It had not been a good day, though as Moonwatcher had no

real remembrance of the past he could not compare one day

with another. But on the way back to the caves he finds a

hive of bees in the stump of a dead tree, and so enjoys the

finest delicacy his people could ever know. Of course, he

also collects a good many stings, but he scacely notices

them. He is now as near to contentment as he is ever

likely to be; for thought he is still hungry, he is not actually

weak with hunger. That was the most that any hominid could

hope for.



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A7

INT & EXT  CAVES - NIGHT TERRORS



Over the valley, a full moon rises, and a cold wind blows down

from the distant mountains. It would be very cold tonight -

but cold, like hunger, was not a matter for any real concern;

it was merely part of the background of life.



This Little Sun, that only shone at night and gave no warmth,

was dangerous; there would be enemies abroad. Moonwatcher

crawls out of the cave, clambers on to a large boulder besides

the entrance, and squats there where he can survey the valley.

If any hunting beast approached, he would have time to get back

to the relative safety of the cave.



Of all the creatures who had ever lived on Earth, Moonwatcher's

race was the first to raise their eyes with interest to the Moon,

and though he could not remember it, when he was young,

Moonwatcher would reach out and try to touch its ghostly face.

Now he new he would have to find a tree that was high

enough.



He stirs when shrieks and screams echo up the slope from

one of the lower caves, and he does not need to hear the



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occasional growl of the lion to know what is happening. Down

there in the darkness, old One-Eye and his family are dying,

and the thought that he might help in some way never crosses

Moonwatcher's mind. The harsh logic of survival rules out

such fancies. Every cave is silent, lest it attract disaster.



And in the caves, in tortured spells of fitful dozing and

fearful waiting, were gathered the nightmares of generations

yet to come.



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A8

EXT  THE STREAM - INVASION



The Others are growing desperate; the forage on their side of

the valley is almost exhausted. Perhaps they realise that

Moonwatcher's tribe has lost three of its numbers during the

night, for they choose this mourning to break the truce. When

they meet at the river in the still, misty dawn, there is a

deeper and more menacing note in their challenge. The noisy

but usually harmless confrontation lasts only a few seconds

before the invasion begins.



In an uncertainly-moving horde, the Others cross the river,

shieking threats and hunched for the attack. They are led

by a big-toothed hominid of Moonwatcher's own size and age.



Startled and frightened, the tribe retreats before the first

advance, throwing nothing more substantial than imprecations

at the invaders. Moonwatcher moves with them, his mind a

mist of rage and confusion. To be driven from their own

territory is a great badness, but to lose the river is death.

He does not know what to do; it is a situation beyond his

experience.



Then he becomes dimly aware that the Others are slowing



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A8

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down, and advancing with obvious reluctance. The further they

move from their own side, the more uncertain and unhappy

they become. Only Big-Tooth still retains any of his original

drive, and he is rapidly being seperated from his followers.



As he sees this, Moonwatcher's own morale immediately

revives. He slows down his retreat, and begins to make

reassuring noises to his companions. Novel sensations fill

his dim mind - the first faint precursors of bravery and

leadership.



Before he realizes it, he is face to face with Big-Tooth, and

the two tribes come to a halt many paces away.



The disorganized and unscientific conflict could have ended

quickly if either had used his fist as a club, but this

innovation still lay hundreds of thousands of years in the

future. Instead, the slowly weakening fighters claw and

scratch and try to bite each other.



Rolling over and over, they come to a patch of stony ground,

and when they reach it Moonwatcher is on top. By chance,



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he chooses this moment to grab the hair on Big-Tooth's scalp,

and bang his head on the ground. The resulting CRACK is

so satisfactory, and produces such an immediate weakening

In Big - Tooth's resistance, that he quickly repeats it.



Even when Big-Tooth ceases to move for some time, Moon-

watcher keeps up the exhilirating game.



With shrieks of panic, the Others retreat back, across the

stream. The defenders cautiously pursue them as far as

The water's edge.



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EXT  CAVE - NEW SOUND



Dozing fitfully and weakened by his stuggle, Moonwatcher is

startled by a sound.



He sits up in the fetid darkness of the cave, straining his

senses out into the night, and fear creeps slowly into his soul.

Never in his life - already twice as long as most members of

his species could expect - has he heard a sound like this. The

great cats approached in silence, and the only thing that

betrayed them was a rare slide of earth, or the occasional

cracking of a twig. Yet this is a continuing crunching noise

that grows steadily louder. It seemed that some enormous

beast was moving through the night, making no attempt at

concealment, and ignoring all obstacles.



And then there came a sound which Moonwatcher could not

possibly have identified, for it had never been heard before

in the history of this planet.



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A10

EXT CAVE - NEW ROCK



Moonwatcher comes face to face with the New Rock when he

leads the tribe down to the river in the first light of morning.

He had almost forgotten the terror of the night, because nothing

had happened after that initial noise, so he does not even

associate this strange thing with danger or with fear. There

is nothing in the least alarming about it.



It is a cube about fifteen feet on a side, and it is made of

some completely transparent material; indeed, it is not easy

to see except when the light of the sun glints on its edges.

There are no natural objects to which Moonwatcher can

compare this apparition. Though he is wisely cautious

of most new things, he does not hesitate to walk up to it.

As nothing happens, he puts out his hand, and feels a warm,

hard surface.



After several minutes of intense thought, he arrives at a

brilliant explanation. It is a rock, of course, and it

must have grown during the night. There are many plants

that do this - white, pulpy things shaped like pebbles, that

seem to shoot up in the hours of darkness. It is true that

they are small and round, whereas this is large and square;



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A10

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but greater and later philosophers than Moonwatcher would be

prepared to overlook equally striking exceptions to their laws.



This really superb piece of abstract thinking leads Moonwatcher

to a deduction which he immediately puts to the test. The white,

round pebble-plants are very tasty (though there were a few

that made one violently sick); perhaps this square one...?



A few licks and attempted nibbles quickly disillusion him.

There is no nourishment here; so like a sensible hominid, he

continues on his way to the river and forgets all about the Cube.



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A11

EXT CUBE - FIRST LESSON



They are still a hundred yards from the New Rock when the

sound begins.



It is quite soft, and it stops them in their tracks, so that they

stand paralyzed on the trail with their jaws hanging. A simple,

maddeningly repetitious rhythm pulses out of the crystal cube

and hypnotises all who come within its spell. For the first

time - and the last, for two million year - the sound of

drumming is heard in Africa.



The throbbing grows louder, more insistent. Presently the

hominids begin to move forward like sleep-walkers, towards

the source of that magnetic sound. Sometimes they take little

dancing steps, as their blood responds to the rhythms that

their descendants will not create for ages yet.



Totally entranced, they gather around the Cube, forgetting

the hardships of the day, the perils of the approaching dusk,

and the hunger in their bellies.



Now, spinning wheels of light begin to merge, and the spokes

fuse into luminous bars that slowly recede into the distance,



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rotating on their axes as they do; and the hominids watch, wide-

eyed, mesmerized captives of the Crystal Cube.



Then by some magic - though it was no more magical than all

that had gone on before - a perfectly normal scene appears. It

is as if a cubical block had been carved out of the day and

shifted into the night. Inside that block is a group of four

hominids, who might have been members of Moonwatcher's

own tribe, eating chunks of meat. The carcass of a wart-hog

lies near them.



This little family of male and female and two children is gorged

and replete, with sleek and glossy pelts - and this was a

condition of life that Moonwatcher had never imagined. From

time to time they stir lazily, as they loll at ease near the

entrance of their cave, apparently at peace with the world.

The spectacle of domestic bliss merges into a totally

different scene.



The family is no longer reposing peacefully outside its cave;

it is foraging, searching for food like any normal hominids.



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A small wart-hog ambles past the group of browsing humanoids

without giving them more than a glance, for they had never been

the slightest danger to its species.



But that happy state of affairs is about to end. The big male

suddenly bends down, picks up a heavy stone lying at his feet -

and hurls it upon the unfortunate pig. The stone descends upon

its skull, making exactly the same noise that Moonwatcher had

produced in his now almost forgotten encounter with Big-Tooth.

And the result, too, is much the same - the warthog gives one

amazed, indignant squeal, and collapses in a motionless heap.



Then the whole sequence begins again, but this time it unfolds

itself with incredible slowness. Every detail of the movement

can be followed; the stone arches leisurely through the air, the

pig crumples up and sinks to the ground. There the scene

freezes for long moments, the slayer standing motionless

above the slain, the first of all weapons in his hand.



The scene suddenly fades out. The cube is no more than a

glimmering outline in the darkness; the hominids stir, as if



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awakening from a dream, realise where they are, and scuttle

back to their caves.



They have no concious memory of what they had seen; but that

night, as he sits brooding at the entrance of his lair, his ears

attuned to the noises of the world around him, Moonwatcher

feels the first faint twinges of a new and potent emotion - the urge

to kill. He had taken his first step towards humanity.



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A12

EXT cave AND PLAINS - Utopia



Babies were born and sometimes lived; feeble, toothless thirty-

year-olds died; the lion took its toll in the night; the Others

threatened daily across the river - and the trib prospered.

In the course of a single year, Moonwatcher and his companions

had changed almost beyond recognition.



They had become as plump as the family in the Cave, who no

longer haunted their dreams. They had learned their lessons

well; now they could handle all the stone tools and weapons that

the Cube had revealed to them.



They were no longer half-numbed with starvation, and they

had time both for leisure and for the first rudiments of thought.

Their new way of life was casually accepted, and they did

not associate it in any way with the crystal cube still standing

outside their cave.



But no Utopia is perfect, and this one had two blemishes. The

first was the marauding lion, whose passion for hominids

seemed to have grown even stronger now that they were better

nourished. The second was the tribe across the river; for



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somehow the Others had survived, and had stubbornly refused to

die of starvation.



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A13

EXT CAVES - KILLING THE LION



With the partly devoured carcass of a warthog laid out on the

ground at the point he hope the boulder would impact, Moon-

watcher and three of his bravest companions wait for two

consecutive nights. On the third the lion comes,

betraying his presences by a small pebble slide.



When they can here the lion below, softly tearing at the meat,

they strain themselves against the massive boulder. The sound

of the lion stops; he is listening. Again they silently heave

against the enormous stone, exerting the final limits of their

strength. The rock begin to tip to a new balance point.



The lion twitches alert to this sound, but having no fear of these

creatures, he makes the first of two mistakes which will cost

him his life; he goes back to his meal.



The rock moves slowly over the ledge, picking up speed with

amazing suddeness. It strikes a projection in the cliff about

fifteen feet above the ground, which deflects its path outward.



Just at this instant, the lion reacts instinctively and leaps

away from the face of the cliff directly into the path of the



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onrushing boulder. He has combined the errors of over-

confidence and bad luck.



The next morning they find the lion in front of the cave. They

also find one of their tribe who had incautiously peeped out to

see what was happening, and was apparently killed by a small

rock torn loose by the boulder; but this was a small price to

pay for such a great victory.



					  * * * * * * * *



And then one night the crystal cube was gone, and not even

Moonwatcher ever thought of it again. He was still wholly

unaware of all that it had done.



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A14

EXT STREAM - MASTER OF THE WORLD



From their side of the stream, in the never violated safety of

their own territory, the Others see Moonwatcher and fourteen

males of his tribe appear from behind a small hillock over-

looking the stream, silhouetted against the dawn sky.



The Others begin to scream their daily challenge. But today

something is different, though the Others do not immediatly

recognize this fact.



Instead of joining the verbal onslaught, as they had always done,

Moonwatcher and his small band decended from the rise, and

begin to move forward to the stream with a quiet purposefulness

never befor seen.



As the Others watch the figures silently approaching in the

morning mist, they become aware of the terrible strangness

of this encounter, and their rage gradually subsides down to

an uneasy silence.



At the water's edge, Moonwatcher and his band stop. They

carry their bone clubs and bone knives.



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Led by One-ear, the Others half-heartly resume the battle-

chant. But they are suddenly confrunted with a vision that cuts

the sound from their throats, and strikes terror into their

hearts.



Moonwatcher, who had been partly concealed by two males who

walked before him, thrusts his arm high into the air. In his

hand he holds a stoud tree branch. Mounted atop the branch is

the bloody head of the lion, its mouth jammed open with a stick,

displaying its frightful fangs.



The Others gape in fearful disbelief at this display of power.



Moonwatchers stands motionless, thrusting the lion's head high.

Then with majestic deliberation, still carrying his mangled

standard above his head, he begins to cross the stream, followed

by his band.



The Others fade back from the stream, seeming to lack even

the ability to flee.



Moonwatcher steps ashore and walks to One-Ear, who stands



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unsurely in front of his band.



Though he is a veteran of numerous combats at the water's edge,

One-Ear has never been attacked by an enemy who had not first

displayed his fighting rage; and he had never before been attacked

with a weapon. One-Ear, merely looks up at the raised club

until the heavey thigh bone of an antelope brings the darkness

down around him.



The Others stare in wonder at Moonwatcher's power.



Moonwatcher surveys the scene. Now he was master of the

world, and he was not sure what to do next. But he would

think of something.



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					    A SECTION TIMING



			    A1    00.30

			    A2    00.45

			    A3    01.30

			    A4    00.30

			    A5    01.00

			    A6    01.00

			    A7    01.00

			    A8    03.00

			    A9    00.45

			    A10   02.00

			    A11   04.00

			    A12   02.00

			    A13   02.30

			    A14   02.30



					    A SECTION TOTAL: @23 MIN. 00 SECS

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			    TITLE					PART II



							    YEAR 2001



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B1

EARTH FROM 200 MILES UP					 NARRATOR		

						    By the year 2001, overpopulation has

B1a						 replaced the problem of starvation

THOUSAND MEGATON			   but this was ominously offset by the

NUCLEAR BOMB IN ORBIT		   absolute and utter perfection of the

ABOVE THE EARTH,			   weapon.

RUSSIAN INSIGNIA AND

CCCP MARKINGS



B1b							 NARRATOR

AMERICAN THOUSAND			  Hundreds of giant bombs had been

MEGATON BOMB IN ORBIT		   placed in perpetual orbit above the

ABOVE THE EARTH.			   Earth. They were capable of

						    incinerating the entire Earth's

						    surface from an altitude of 100

						    miles.



B1c

FRENCH BOMB						   NARRATOR

					    Matters were further complicated

					    by the presence of twenty-seven

					    nations in the nuclear club. There

					    had been no deliberate or acciden-

B1d						 tal use of nuclear weapons since

GERMAN BOMB				   World War II and some people felt

					    sercure in this knowledge. But to

					    others, the situation seemed

						    comparible to an airline with a

B1f						 perfect safety record; in showed

CHINESE BOMB				  admirable care and skill but no

						    one expected it to last forever.



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B2

ORION-III SPACECRAFT

IN FIGHT AWAY FROM

EARTH, 200 MILES

ALTITUDE.



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B3

ORION-III PASSENGER AREA.

DR. HEYWOOD FLOYD IS THE

ONLY PASSENGER IN THE

ELEGANT CABIN DESIGNED

FOR 30 PEOPLE. HE IS

ASLEEP.



HIS PEN FLOATS NEAR HIS

HAND.



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B4

ORION-III COCKPIT.

PILOT, CO-PILOT.

FLOYD CAN BE SEEN

ASLEEP ON A SMALL

TV MONITOR.

STEWARDESS IS PUTTING

ON LIPSTICK. SHE SEES

PEN.



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B5

STEWARDESS GOES BACK

TO PASSENGER AREA,

RESCUES PEN AND CLIPS

IT BACK IN FLOYD'S

POCKET.



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B6

SPACE STATION-5. THE

RAW SUNLIGHT OF SPACE

DAZZLES FROM THE

POLISHED METAL SURFACES

OF THE SLOWLY REVOLVING,

THOUSAND-FOOT DIAMETER

SPACE STATION. DRIFTING

IN THE SAME ORBIT, WE SEE

SWEPT-BACK TITOV-V

SPACECRAFT. ALSO THE

ALMOST SPHERICAL ARIES-IB



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B7

ORION-III PASSENGER AREA

FLOYD AWAKE BUT GROGGY,

LOOKS OUT OF WINDOW.



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B8

ORION-III COCKPIT.

THE CO-PILOT IN RADIO

COMMUNICATION WITH THE

SPACE STATION.



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B9

THE ORION-III SPACECRAFT

IN DOCKING APPROACH. THE

EARTH IS SEEN IN BREATH-

TAKING VIEW IN B.G.



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B10

INSIDE DOCKING CONTROL.

WE SEE ORION-III MANO-

UVERING. IN BACKGROUND.



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B11

FROM DOCKING PORT WE

SEE THE ORION-III INCHING

IN TO COMPLETE ITS

DOCKING. WE SEE VARIOUS

WINDOWED BOOTHS INSIDE

DOCKING PORT. WE SEE

THE PILOT AND CO-PILOT

INSIDE THE ORION-III

COCKPIT.



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B12

SPACE STATION

RECEPTION AREA



RECEPTIONIST AT DESK.

MILLER ENTERS, HUR-

RYING. HE GOES TO

THE ELEVATOR AND

PRESSES BUTTON. HE

WAITS IMPATIENTLY.



WE SEE ELEVATOR

INDICATOR WORKING



ELEVATOR DOOR OPENS

AND FLOYD IS SEEN

UNSTRAPPING HIMSELF.

THE ELEVATOR GIRL IS

SEATED BY THE DOOR

						    MILLER

						    Oh, good morning, Dr. Floyd.

						    I'm Nick Miller.



						    FLOYD

						    How do you do, Mr. Miller?



						    MILLER

						    I'm terribly sorry. I was just

						    on my way down to meet you. I

						    saw your ship dock and I knew I

						    had plenty of time, and I was on

						    my way out of the office when,

						    suddenly, the phone rang.



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					    FLOYD

					    Oh, please don't worry about it.



					    MILLER

					    Well, thank you very much for

					    being so understanding.



					    FLOYD

					    Please, it really doesn't matter.



					    MILLER

					    Well.. Did you have a pleaant

					    flight?



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, very pleasant.



					    MILLER

					    Well, shall we go through

					    Documentation?



					    FLOYD

					    Fine.



					    RECEPTIONIST

					    Will you use number eight,

					    please?



					    MILLER

					    Thank you, Miss Turner.



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CONTINUED



THEY ENTER PASSPORT

AREA



RECEPTIONIST PRESSES

"ENGLISH" BAR ON HER

CONSOLE AND SMILES

AS FLOYD GOES THROUGH.



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IN AUTOMATED PASSPORT

SECTION. THEY STOP IN

FRONT OF A BOOTH

FEATURING A TV SCREEN

					    

					    PASSPORT GIRL (TV)

					    Good morning and welcome to voice

					    Print Identification. When you see

					    the red light go on would you please

					    state in the following order; your

					    desitination, your nationality and

					    your full name. Surname first,

					    christian name and initial. For

					    example: Moon, American,

					    Smith, John, D. Thank you.



THERE IS A PAUSE

AND A RED BAR LIGHTS UP



					    FLOYD

					    Moon, American, Floyd, Heywood,

					    R.



THE RED LIGHT GOES OFF.

THERE IS A DELAY OF

ABOUT TWO SECONDS AND

THE WOMAN'S FACE

REAPPEARS



					    FLOYD

					    I've always wondered....



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CONTINUED

					    PASSPORT GIRL (TV)

					    (Interrupting)  Thank you. Despite

					    and excellent and continually

					    improving safety record there are

					    certain risks inherent in space

					    travel and an extremely high cost

					    of pay load. Because of this it

					    is necessary for the Space Carrier

					    to advise you that it cannot be

					    responsible for the return of your

					    body to Earth should you become

					    deceased on the Moon or en route

					    to the Moon. However, it wishes

					    to advise you that insurance

					    covering this contingency is

					    available in the Main Lounge.

					    Thank you. You are cleared

					    through Voice Print Identification.



THE LIGHTS GO OFF

AND THE WOMAN'S

FACE DISAPPEARS



THE MEN EXIT THE

PASSPORT AREA



					    MILLER

					    I've reserved a table for you in

					    the Earth Light room. Your

					    connecting flight will be

					    leaving in about one hour.



12/7/65										  b15 

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B13

CONTINUED



						FLOYD

						Oh, that's wonderful.



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B14

INT SPACE STATION - LOUNGE



FLOYD AND MILLER WALKING



					    MILLER

					    Let's see, we haven't had the

					    pleasure of a visit from you not

					    since... It was about eight or

					    nine months ago, wasn't it?



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, I think so. Just about

					    then.



					    MILLER

					    I suppose you saw the work on

					    our new section while you

					    were docking.



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, it's coming along very well.



THEY PASS THE VISION

PHONE BOOTH



						FLOYD

						Oh, look, I've got to make a

						phone call. Why don't you go

						on into the Restaurant and I'll

						meet you in there.



12/7/65										  b17 

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B14

CONTINUED



					    MILLER

					    Fine. I'll see you at the bar.



FLOYD ENTERS PHONE

BOOTH. SIGN ON

VISION PHONE SCREEN

"SORRY, TEMPORARILY

OUT OF ORDER."



HE ENTERS THE SECOND

BOOTH AND SITS DOWN



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B15

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B16

DELETED



PAGES b19 - b22 DELETED



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B17

FLOYD IN VISION PHONE



LITTLE GIRL OF FIVE

ANSWERS



						CHILD

						Hello.



VISION PHONE SCREEN

DISPLAY SIGN 'YOUR

PARTY HAS NOT CONNECTED

VISION'



A FEW SECONDS LATER,

THE SCREEN CHANGES

TO AN IMAGE OF THE

CHILD

					    FLOYD

					    Hello, darling, how are you?



					    CHILD

					    Hello Daddy. Where are you?



					    FLOYD

					    I'm at Space Station Five,

					    darling. How are you?



					    CHILD

					    I'm fine, Daddy. When are

					    you coming home?



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B17

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    Well, I hope in a few days,

					    sweetheart.



					    CHILD

					    I'm having a party tomorrow.



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, I know that sweetheart.



					    CHILD

					    Are you coming to my party?



					    FLOYD

					    No, I'm sorry, darling, I

					    told you I won't be home for a

					    few days.



					    CHILD

					    When are you coming home?



					    FLOYD

					    In three days, darling, I

					    hope.



FLOYD HOLDS UP

THREE FINGERS.



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B17



					    FLOYD

					    One, two, three. Can I

					    speak to Mommy?



					    CHILD

					    Mommy's out to the hair-

					    dresser.



					    FLOYD

					    Where is Mrs. Brown?



					    CHILD

					    She's in the bathroom.



					    FLOYD

					    Okay, sweetheart. Well, I

					    have to go now. Tell Mommy

					    that I called.



					    CHILD

					    How many days until you

					    come home?



					    FLOYD

					    Three, darling. One... two

					    ... three. Be sure to tell

					    Mommy I called.



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B17

CONTINUED



					    CHILD

					    I will, Daddy.



					    FLOYD

					    Okay, sweetheart. Have a

					    lovely Birthday Party

					    tomorrow.



					    CHILD

					    Thank you, Daddy.



					    FLOYD

					    I'll wish you a happy

					    Birthday now and I'll see you

					    soon. All right, Darling?



					    CHILD

					    Yes, Daddy.



					    FLOYD

					    'Bye, 'bye, now, sweetheart.



					    CHILD

					    Goodbye, Daddy.



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B18

VISION PHONE

PROCEDURE FOR

INFORMATION



VISION PHONE

PROCEDURE FOR

DIALLING



					    OPERATOR

					    Good morning, Macy's.



					    FLOYD

					    Good morning. I'd like the

					    Vision shopper for the Pet

					    Shop, please.



					    OPERATOR

					    Just one moment.



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B19

THE PICTURE FLIPS AND

WE SEE A WOMAN STANDING

IN FORN OF A SPECIALLY-

DESIGNED DISPLAY SCREEN



					    VISION SALES GIRL

					    Good morning, sir, may I help you?



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, I'd like to buy a bush baby.



					    VISION SALES GIRL

					    Just a moment, sir.



THE GIRL KEYS SOME

INPUTS AND A MOVING

PICTURE APPEARS ON

THE SCREEN OF A CAGE

CONTAINING ABOUT SIX

BUSH BABIES,

BEAUTIFULLY DISPLAYED

AGAINST A WHITE BACK-

GROUND



					    VISION SALES GIRL

					    Here you are, sir. Here is a 

					    lovely assortment of African

					    bush babies. They are twenty

					    Dollars each.



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B19

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, well... Pick out a nice one

					    for me, a friendly one, and I'd

					    like it delivered tomorrow.



					    VISION SALES GIRL

					    Certainly, sir. Just let us have

					    your name and Bank identification

					    for V.P.I., and then give the

					    name and address of the person

					    you'd like the pet delivered to

					    and it will be delivered tomorrow.



SOME TIME DURING

THIS CONVERSATION,

FLOYD SEE ELENA,

SMYSLOV AND THE

OTHER TWO RUSSIANS

PASS HIS VISION PHONE

WINDOW. ELENA TAPS

AND MIMES "HELLO",

GESTURING TOWARD A

TABLE BEHIND FLOYD

WHERE THEY ALL SIT

DOWN



					    FLOYD

					    Thank you very much. Floyd,

					    Heywood, R.,  First National

					    Bank of Washington. Please

					    deliver to Miss Josephine

					    Floyd, 9423 Dupre Avenue,

					    N.W.14.



12/7/65										  b27 

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B19

CONTINUED



					    VISION SALES GIRL

					    Thank you very much, sir. It

					    will be delivered tomorrow.



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B20

SPACE STATTION 5 - LOUNGE



					    FLOYD

					    Well, how nice to see you again,

					    Elena. You're looking wonderful.



					    ELENA

					    How nice to see you, Hyewood.

					    This is my good friend, Dr.

					    Heywood Floyd. I'd like you

					    to meet Andre Smyslov...



SMYSLOV AND THE TWO

OTHER RUSSIAN WOMEN

STAND UP AND SMILE



THEY SHAKE HANDS

AFTER INTRODUCTION

AND AD-LIB 'HELLOS'



					    ELENA

					    And this is Dr. Kalinan...

					    Stretyneva...



THE RUSSIANS ARE

VERY WARM AND 

FRIENDLY.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Dr. Floyd, won't you join us

					    for a drink?



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B20

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    I'm afraid I've only got a few

					    minutes, but I'd love to.



THERE IS A BIT OF

CONFUSION AS ALL

REALISE THERE IS

NOT ENOUGH ROOM

FOR ANOTHER

PERSON AT THE TABLE.

SMYSLOV OFFERS FLOYD

HIS CHAIR

AND BORROWS

ANOTHER FROM A NEARBY TABLE



					    SYMYSLOV

					    What would you like to drink?



					    FLOYD

					    Oh, I really don't have time

					    for a drink. If it's all right

					    I'll just sit for a minute and

					    then I've got to be off.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Are you quite sure?



					    FLOYD

					    Yes, really, thank you very

					    much.



					    ELENA

					    Well... How's your lovely

					    wife?



12/7/65										  b29 

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B20

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    She's wonderful.



					    ELENA

					    And your charming little daughter?



					    FLOYD

					    Oh, she's growing up very fast.

					    As a matter of fact, she's six

					    tomorrow.



					    ELENA

					    Oh, that's such a delightful age.



					    FLOYD

					    How is gregor?



					    ELENA

					    He's fine. But I'm afraid we

					    don't get a chance to see each

					    other very much these days.



POLITE LAUGHTER



					    FLOYD

					    Well, where are all of you off

					    to?



12/7/65										  b30 

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B20

CONTINUED



					    ELENA

					    Actually, we're on our way back

					    from the moon. We've just

					    spent three months calibrating

					    the new antenna at Tchalinko.

					    And what about you?



					    FLOYD

					    Well, as it happens, I'm on

					    my way up to the moon



					    SMYSLOV

					    Are you, by any chance, going

					    up to your base at Clavius?



					    FLOYD

					    Yes,as a matter of fact, I am.



THE RUSSIANS

EXCHANGE

SIGNIFICANT

GLANCES



					    FLOYD

					    Is there any particular reason

					    why you ask?



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B20

CONTINUED



					    SMYSLOV

					    (pleasantly)  Well, Dr. Floyd,

					    I hope that you don't think I'm

					    too inquisitive, but perhaps

					    you can clear up the mystery

					    about what's been going on up

					    there.



					    FLOYD

					    I'm sorry, but I'm not sure

					    I know what you mean.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Well, it's just for the past

					    two weeks there have been

					    some extremely odd things

					    happening at Clavius.



					    FLOYD

					    Really?



					    SMYSLOV

					    Yes. Well, for one thing,

					    whenever you phone the base,

					    all you can get is a recording

					    which repeats that the phone

					    lines are temporarily out of

					    order.



12/7/65										  b32 

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B20

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    Well, I suppose they've been

					    having a bit of trouble with

					    some of the equipment.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Yes, well at first we thought

					    that was the explanation, but

					    it's been going on for the past

					    ten days.



					    FLOYD

					    You mean you haven't been able

					    to get anyone at the base for ten

					    days?



					    SMYSLOV

					    That's right.



					    FLOYD

					    I see.



					    ELENA

					    Another thing, Heywood, two

					    days ago, one of our rocket

					    buses was denied permission

					    for an emergency landing at

					    Clavius.



12/7/65										  b33 

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B20

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    How did they manage to do that

					    without any communication?



					    ELENA

					    Clavius Control came on the

					    air just long enough to transmit

					    their refusal.



					    FLOYD

					    Well, that does sound very odd.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Yes, and I'm afaid there's

					    going to be a bit of a row about

					    it. Denying the men permission

					    to land was a direct violation of

					    the I.A.S. convention.



					    FLOYD

					    Yes... Well, I hope the crew

					    got back safely.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Fortunately, they did.



					    FLOYD

					    Well, I'm glad about that.



12/7/65										  b33a 

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B20

CONTINUED



THE RUSSIANS EXCHANGE

MORE GLANCES. ONE OF

THE WOMEN OFFERS

AROUND A PILL BOX.

ELENA AND ANOTHER

RUSSIAN TAKE ONE AND

THE THIRD RUSSIAN

DELCINES.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Dr. Floyd, at the risk of pressing

					    you on a point you seem reticent

					    to discuss, may I ask you a

					    straightforward question?



					    FLOYD

					    Certainly.



					    SMYSLOV

					    Quite frankly, we have had some

					    very reliable intelligence reports

					    that a quite serious epidemic

					    has broken out at Clavius.

					    Something, apperently, of an

					    unknown origin. Is this, in

					    fact, what has happened?



A LONG, AWKWARD

PAUSE



12/7/65										  b33b 

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B20

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    I'm sorry, Dr. Smyslov, but

					    I'm really not at liberty to

					    discuss this.



					    SMYSLOV

					    This epidemic could easily

					    spread to our base, Dr. Floyd.

					    We should be given all the

					    facts.



LONG PAUSE



					    FLOYD

					    Dr. Smyslov... I'm not

					    permitted to discuss this.



					    ELENA

					    Are you sure you won't change

					    your mind about a drink?



					    FLOYD

					    No, thank you... and I'm

					    afraid now I really must be

					    going.



					    ELENA

					    Well, I hope that you and your

					    wife can come to the I.A.C.

					    conference in June.



12/7/65										  b33c 

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B20

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    We're trying to get there. I

					    hope we can.



					    ELENA

					    Well, Gregor and I will look

					    forward to seeing you.



					    FLOYD

					    Thank you. It's been a great

					    pleasure to meet all of you...

					    Dr. Smyslov.



THE RUSSIANS ALL

RISE AND THERE

ARE AD-LIBS OF

COURTESY



FLOYD SHAKES HANDS

AND EXITS



THE RUSSIANS EXCHANGE

A FEW SERIOUS PARA-

GRAPHES IN RUSSIAN



12/7/65										  b33d	  

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B21



ARIES-IB IN SPACE.

EARTH MUCH SMALLER

THAN AS SEEN FROM

SPACE STATION



					    NARRATOR

					    The Aries-IB has become the

					    standard Space-Station-to-Lunar

					    surface vehicle. It was powered

					    by low-thrust plasma jets which

					    would continue the mild acceler-

					    ation for fifteen minutes. Then

					    the ship would break the bonds of

					    gravity and be a free and indepen-

					    dent planet, circling the Sun in an

					    orbit of its own.



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B21a



ARIES PASSENGER AREA.

FLOYD IS ASLEEP, STRETCHED

OUT IN THE CHAIR, COVERED

WITH BLANKETS WHICH ARE

HELD SECURE BY STRAPS



A STEWARDESS SITS AT THE

OTHER SIDE OF THE CABIN,

WATCHING A KARATE

EXHIBITION BETWEEN TWO

WOMEN ON TELEVISION



THE ELEVATOR ENTRANCE

DOOR OPENS AND THE

SECOND STEWARDESS ENTERS

CARRYING A TRAY OF FOOD



SHE BRINGS IT TO THE OTHER

STEWARDESS



					    STEWARDESS ONE

					    Oh, thank you very much.



					    STEWARDESS TWO

					    I see he's still asleep.



					    STEWARDESS ONE

					    Yes. He hasn't moved since we

					    left.



STEWARDESS TWO EXITS,

INTO ELEVATOR



12/6/65										  b34a 

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B21b



ARIES GALLEY AREA.

STEWARDESS EXITS FROM

ELEVATOR, GOES TO

KITCHEN SECTION, REMOVES

TWO TRAYS, WALKS UP TO

THE SIDE OF THE WALL AND

ENTERS PILOT'S

COMPARTMENT



12/6/65										  b34b 

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B22

ARIES-IB COCKPIT.

PILOT, CO-PILOT.



STEWARDESS ENTERS,

CARRYING FOOD



					    PILOT

					    Oh, thank you very much.



					    CO-PILOT

					    Thank you.



STEWARDESS SMILES.



					    PILOT

					    (sighs)  Well, how's it going

					    back there?



					    STEWARDESS

					    Fine. Very quiet. He's been

					    asleep since we left.



					    PILOT

					    Well, no one can say that he's not

					    enjoying the wonders of Space.



					    CO-PILOT

					    Well, whatever's going on up there,

					    he's going to arrive fresh and ready

					    to go.



12/14/65										 b35 

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B22

CONTINUED



					    PILOT

					    I wonder what really IS going on

					    up there?



					    CO-PILOT

					    Well, I've heard more and more

					    people talk of an epidemic.



					    PILOT

					    I suppose it was bound to happen

					    sooner or later.



					    CO-PILOT

					    Berkeley told me that they think

					    it came from contamination on a

					    returning Mars flight.



					    PILOT

					    Yes, well, whatever it is, they're

					    certainly not fooling around. This

					    is the first flight they allowed

					    in for more than a week.



					    CO-PILOT

					    I was working out what this trip

					    must cost, taking him up there

					    by himself and coming back empty.



					    PILOT

					    I'll bet it's a fortune.



12/14/65										 b36	  

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B22

CONTINUED



					    CO-PILOT

					    Well, at ten thousand dollars a

					    ticket, it comes to the better part

					    of six hundred thousand dollars.



					    PILOT

					    Well, as soon as he wakes up,

					    I'm going to go back and talk to

					    him. I must say, I'd like to

					    find out what's going on.



12/14/65										 b36a 

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B23

ARIES-IB IN SPACE.

MOON VERY LARGE.



10/4/65										  b37 

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B24

ARIES-IB PASSENGER

AREA. FLOYD FINISHING

BREAKFAST.



PILOT ENTERS.



					    PILOT

					    Well, good afternoon, Dr. Floyd.

					    Did you have a good rest?



					    FLOYD

					    Oh, marvellous. It's the first

					    real sleep I've had for the past

					    two days.



					    PILOT

					    There's nothing like weightless

					    sleep for a complete rest.



					    FLOYD

					    When do we arrive at Clavius?



					    PILOT

					    We're scheduled to dock in about

					    seven hours. Is there anything

					    we can do for you?



					    FLOYD

					    Oh, no, thank you. The two

					    girls have taken wonderful care

					    of me. I'm just fine.



12/14/65										 b38  

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B24

CONTINUED



					    PILOT

					    Well, if there is anything that you

					    wnat, just give a holler.



					    FLOYD

					    Thank you.



					    PILOT

					    Incidentally, Dr. Floyd, I wonder

					    if I can have a word with you about

					    the security arrangements?



					    FLOYD

					    What do you mean?



					    PILOT

					    Well... the crew is confined to

					    the ship when we land at Clavius.

					    We have to stay inside for the

					    time it take to refit - about

					    twenty-four hours. And then

					    we're going to back empty.



					    FLOYD

					    I see.



					    PILOT

					    I take it this is something to do

					    with the trouble they're having

					    up at Clavius?



12/14/65										 b39 

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B24

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    I'm afraid that's out of my depart-

					    ment, Captain.



					    PILOT

					    Well, I'll tell you why I ask. You

					    see, I've got a girl who works in

					    the Auditing Department of the

					    Territorial Administrator and I

					    haven't been able to get her on

					    the phone for the past week or so,

					    and with all these stories one

					    hears, I'm a little concerned

					    about her.



					    FLOYD

					    I see. Well, I'm sorry about that.

					    I wouldn't think there's any cause

					    for alarm.



					    PILOT

					    Yes, well, I wouldn't have been

					    too concerned about it, except

					    I've heard these stories about the

					    epidemic and, as a matter of fact,

					    I've heard that ten people have

					    died already.



12/14/65										 b40 

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B24

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    I wish I could be more helpful,

					    Captain, but as I've said, I don't

					    think there's any cause for

					    alarm.



					    PILOT

					    Well, fine. Thanks very much,

					    anyway, and I hope you don't

					    mind me asking?



					    FLOYD

					    No, of course, Captain, I can

					    understand your concern.



					    PILOT

					    Well, thank you very much, and

					    please let us know if there is

					    anything we can do to make your

					    trip more comfortable.



12/14/65										 b40a 

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B25

ARIES-IB CLOSER TO MOON



10/4/65										  b41	 

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B26

FLOYD GOES TO ARIES-IB

WASHROOM AND LOOKS AT

THE VERY LONG LIST OF

COMPLICATED INSTRUCTIONS



10/4/65										  b42 

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B27

ARIES-IB CLOSER TO MOON



DISSOLVE:



10/4/65										  b43 

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B28

FLOYD VISITING ARIES-IB

COCKPIT. WEIGHTLESS

TRICK ENTRANCE.



10/4/65										  b44	 

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B29

ARIES-IB ORBITING MOON.



					    NARRATOR

					    The laws of Earthly aesthetics did

					    not apply here, this world had been

					    shaped and molded by other than

					    terrestrial forces, operating over

					    aeons of time unknown to the young,

					    verdant Earth, with its fleeting

					    Ice-Ages, its swiftly rising and

					    falling seas, its mountain ranges

					    dissolving like mists before the

					    dawn. Here was age inconceivable

					    - but not death, for the Moon had

					    never lived until now.



10/4/65										  b45 

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B30

ARIES-IB COCKPIT - THE

CREW AND DOCKING

CONTROL PEOPLE ON THE

MOON GO THROUGH THEIR

DOCKING ROUTINE. THIS

HAS THE RITUALISTIC TONE

AND CADENCE OF PRESENT-

DAY JET LANDING

PROCEDURE. WE ONLY HEAR

DOCKING CONTROL.



10/4/65										  b46 

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B31

ARIES-IB DECENDING.

SEE AIR VIEW OF BASE.



					    NARRATOR

					    The Base at Clavius was the first

					    American Lunar Settlement that

					    could, in an emergency, be

					    entirely self-supporting.



					    NARRATOR

					    Water and all the necessities of

					    life for its eleven hundred men,

					    women and children were produced

					    from the Lunar rocks, after they

					    had been crushed, heated and

					    chemically processed.



10/4/65										  b47 

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B32

A GROUND BUS NUZZLES UP

TO COUPLING SECTION OF

ARIES-IB



10/4/65										  b48	 

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B33

INSIDE GREAT AIRLOCK

ENTRANCE. GROUND BUS

PULLS IN. GIANT DOORS

CLOSE BEHIND IT.



10/4/65										  b49	 

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B34

INSIDE SECOND AIRLOCK.

DOORS OPEN AFTER OUT-

SIDE SECTION DOORS ARE

CLOSED. GROUND BUS

PULLS IN. DOORS CLOSE

BEHIND IT. SEE PEOPLE

WAITING IN GLASSED-IN

SECTION WAITING FOR

SECOND AIRLOCK DOORS

TO CLOSE.



10/4/65										  b50 

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B35

LOW GRAVITY

GYMNASIUM TRICK

WITH CHILDREN.



					    NARRATOR

					    One of the attractions of life on the

					    Moon was undoubtedly the low

					    gravity which produced a sense

					    of general well-being.



10/4/65										  b51 

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B36

CHILDREN IN SCHOOL.

TEACHER SHOWING THEM

VIEWS OF EARTH AND MAP

OF EARTH.



					    NARRATOR

					    The personnel of the Base and their

					    children were the forerunners of new

					    nations, new cultures that would

					    ultimately spread out across the

					    solar system. They no longer

					    thought of Earth as home. The

					    time was fast approaching when

					    Earth, like all mothers, must say

					    farewell to her children.



DISSOLVE:



10/5/65										  b52 

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B37

LARGE CENTRAL

RECEPTION AREA. DOORS

BRANCHING OFF TO DIFF-

RENT MAIN HALLS. SMALL

POND WITH PLASTIC WHITE

SWAN AND A BIT OF GRASS.

A FEW BENCHES WITH THREE

WOMEN AND THEIR CHILDREN

HAVING OUTING.



FLOYD AND WELCOMING

PARTY WALK THROUGH

AFTER EXITING ELEVATOR.

HALVERSON, MICHAELS

AND FIVE OTHERS.



					    FLOYD

					    (voice echoing)  I must congratulate

					    you Halvorsen. you've done wonder-

					    ful things with the decor since the

					    last time I was here.



					    HALVORSEN

					    (voice echoing)  Well... thank you,

					    Dr. Floyd. We try to make the

					    environment as earthlike as possible.



DISSOLVE:



10/5/65										  b53 

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B38

LOW CEILING CONFERENCE

ROOM, "U" SHAPED TABLE

FACING THREE PROJECTION

SCREENS. SEATED AROUND

THE TABLE ARE TWENTY

SENIOR BASE PERSONNEL.



					    HALVORSEN

					    Ladies and gentlemen, I should

					    like to introduce Dr. Heywood

					    Floyd, a distinguished member

					    of the National Council of

					    Astronautics. He has just

					    completed a special flight here

					    from Earth to be with us, and

					    before the briefing he would

					    like to say a few words. Dr.

					    Floyd.



POLITE APPLAUSE. FLOYD

WALKS TO FRONT OF ROOM.



					    FLOYD

					    First of all, I bring a personal

					    message from Dr. Howell, who

					    has asked me to convey his

					    deepest appreciation to all of

					    you for the personal sacrifices

					    you have made, and of course

					    his congratulations on your

					    discovery which may well prove

					    to be among the most significant

					    in the history of science.



POLITE APPLAUSE.



11/25/65										 b54 

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B38

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD (cont'd)

					    Mr. Halvorsen has made known

					    to me some of the conflicting

					    views held by many of you

					    regarding the need for complete

					    security in this matter, and

					    more specifically your strong

					    opposition to the cover story

					    created to give the impression

					    there is an epidemic at the Base.

					    I understand that beyond it being

					    a matter of principle, many of

					    you are troubled by the concern

					    and anxiety this story of an

					    epidemic might cause your

					    relatives and friends on Earth.



					    I can understand and sympathize

					    with your negative views. I have

					    been personally embarrassed by

					    this cover story. But I fully

					    accept the need for absolute

					    secrecy and I hope you will.



					    It should not be difficult for all

					    of you to realise the potential for

					    cutural shock and social

					    disorientation contained in the

					    present situation if the facts

					    were prematurely and suddenly

					    made public without adequate

					    preparation and conditioning.



11/25/65										 b55 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

B38

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    This is the view of the Council

					    and the purpose of my visit here

					    is to gather addition facts and

					    opinions on the situation and to

					    prepare a report to the Council

					    recommending when and how the

					    news should eventually be

					    announced. Are there any

					    questions?



					    MICHAELS

					    Dr. Floyd, how long do you think

					    this can be kept under wraps?



					    FLOYD

					    (pleasantly)

					    I'm afraid it can and it will be

					    kept under wraps as long as it

					    is deemed to be necessary by

					    the Council. And of course you

					    know that the Council has requested

					    that formal security oaths are to

					    be obtained in writing from every-

					    one who had any knowledge of this

					    event. There must be adequate

					    time for a full study to be made

					    of the situation before any con-

					    sideration can be given to

					    making a public announcement.



11/25/65										 b56 

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B38

CONTINUED



					    HALVORSEN

					    We will, of course, cooperate

					    in any way possible, Dr. Floyd.



11/25/65										 b56a 

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B39

SEVERAL SCENIC VIEWS OF

MOON ROCKET BUS SKIMMING

OVER SURFACE OF MOON.



10/5/65										  b57 

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B40

INSIDE ROCKET BUS,

FLOYD, HALVORSEN,

MICHAELS, FOURTH

MAN, PILOT AND

CO-PILOT. ALL IN

SPACE SUITS MINUS

HELMETS.



FLOYD IS SLOWELY

LOOKING THROUGH

SOME PHOTOGRAPHS

AND MAGNETIC

MAPS OF THE AREA.



HE LOOKS OUT OF

THE WINDOW,

THOUGHTFULLY.



11/25/65										 b58 

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B40

CONTINUED



THE PHOTOGRAPHES

ARE TAKEN FROM A

SATELLITE OF THE

MOON'S SURFACE

AND HAVE NUMBERED

OPTICAL GRID

BORDERS, LIKE

RECENT MARS

PHOTOS.



A FEW SEATS

AWAY, MICHAELS

AND HALVORSEN

CARRY OUT A VERY

BANAL ADMINISTRATIVE

CONVERSATION IN LOW

TONES. IT SHOULD

REVOLVE AROUND

SOMETHING UTTERLY

IRRELEVANT TO THE

PRESENT CIRCUMSTANCES

AND VERY MUCH LIKE

THE KIND OF DISCUSSION

ONE HEARS ALL THE

TIME IN OTHER

ORGANIZATIONS.



DISSOLVE:



11/25/65										 b59

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B41

TMA-1 EXCAVATION.

AIR VIEW. ROCKET

BUS DESCENDING.



THERE ARE NO LIGHTS

ON THE ACTUAL EXCA-

VATION, ONLY THE

LANDING STRIP AND

THE MONITOR DOME.



12/14/65										 b60

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B42

LONG SHOT MONITOR DOMES

WITH A BIT OF EXCAVATION

IN SHOT. SIX SMALL FIGURES

IN SPACE SUITS SLOWLY WALK

TOWARD EXCAVATION.



10/5/65										  b61	 

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B43

THE PARTY STOPS

AT TOP OF TMA-1

EXCAVATION.



A SMALL CONTROL

PANEL MOUNTED AT

THE HEAD OF THE

RAMP. MICHAELS

THROWS A SWITCH

AND THE EXCAVATION 

IS SUDDENLY ILLUMINATED.



					    HALVORSEN

					    Well, there it is.



					    FLOYD

					    Can we go down there closer to

					    it?



					    HALVORSEN

					    Certainly.



12/14/65										 b62	 

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B44

THEY START DOWN

WORKING RAMP



					    FLOYD

					    Does your geology on it still

					    check out?



					    MICHAELS

					    Yes, it does. The sub-surface

					    structure shows that it was

					    deliberately buried about four

					    million years ago.



					    FLOYD

					    How can you tell it was

					    deliberately buried?



					    MICHAELS

					    By the deformation between

					    the mother rock and the fill.



					    FLOYD

					    Any clue as to what it is?



					    MICHAELS

					    Not really. It's completely

					    inert. No sound or energy

					    sources have been detected.

					    The surface is made of

					    something incredibly hard

					    and we've been barely able

					    to scratch it. A laser drill



11/25/65										 b63 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

B44

CONTINUED



					    MICHAELS

					    might do something, but we

					    don't want to be too rough until

					    we know a little more.



					    FLOYD

					    But you don't have any idea as

					    to what it is?



					    MICHAELS

					    Tomb, shine, survey-marker

					    spare part, take your choice.



					    HALVORSEN

					    The only thing about it that we are

					    sure of is that it is the first direct

					    evidence of intelligent life beyond

					    the Earth.



SILENT APPRECIATION



					    HALVORSEN

					    Four million years ago, something,

					    presumably from the stars, must

					    have swept through the solar

					    system and left this behind.



11/25/65										 b64 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

B44

CONTINUED



					    FLOYD

					    Was it abandoned, forgotten, left

					    for a purpose?



					    HALVORSEN

					    I suppose we'll never know.



					    MICHAELS

					    The moon would have made an

					    excellent base camp for

					    preliminary Earth surveys.



SOME MORE SILENCE



					    FLOYD

					    Any ideas about the colour?



					    MICHAELS

					    Well, not really. At first glance,

					    black would suggest something

					    sun-powered, but then why would

					    anyone deliberately bury a sun-

					    powered device?



					    FLOYD

					    Has it been exposed to any sun

					    before now?



					    MICHAELS

					    I don't think it has, but I'd

					    like to check that. Simpson,

					    what's the log on that?



11/25/65										 b65 

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B45

INSIDE MONITOR DOME

WE SEE A NUMBER OF

TELEVISION DISPLAYS

INCLUDING SEVERAL TV

VIEWS OF FLOYD AND

COMPANY IN THE

EXCAVATION.



					    SIMPSON

					    The first surface was exposed at

					    0843 on the 12th April... Let me

					    see... that would have been

					    forty-five minutes after Lunar

					    sun-set. I see here that

					    special lighting equipment had

					    to be brought up before any

					    futher work could be done.



11/25/65										 b66 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

B46

TMA-1 EXCAVATION



					    MICHAELS

					    Thank you.



					    FLOYD

					    And so this is the first sun that

					    it's had in four million years.



					    PHOTOGRAPHER

					    Excuse me, gentlemen, if you'd

					    all line up on this side of the

					    walkway we'd like to take a few

					    photographes. Dr. Floyd, would

					    you thand in the middle... Dr.

					    Michaels on that side, Mr.

					    Halvorsen on the other....

					    thank you.



THE PHOTOGRAPHER

QUICKLY MAKES SOME

EXPOSURES



					    PHOTOGRAPHER

					    Thank you very much gentlemen,

					    I'll have the base photo section

					    send you copies.



AS THE MEN SLOWLY

SEPERATE FROM THEIR

PICTURE POSE, THERE

IS A PIERCINGLY POWERFUL

SERIES OF FIVE ELECTRONIC

SHRIEKS, EACH LIKE A

HIDEOUSLY OVER-LOADED

AND DISTORTED TIME SIGNAL.

FLOYD INVOLUNTARILY TRIES

TO BLOCK HIS EARS WITH HIS

SPACESUITED HANDS. THEN

COMES MERCIFUL SILENCE.



11/25/65										 b67 

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B47

VARIOUS SHOTS OF

SPACE MONITORS,

ASTEROIDS, THE SUN,

PLUTO, MARS.



					    NARRATOR

					    A hundred million miles beyond

					    Mars, in the cold lonliness

					    where no man had yet travelled,

					    Deep-Space-Monitor-79 drifts

					    slowly among the tangled orbits

					    of the asteroids.



					    NARRATOR

					    Radiation detectors noted and

					    analyzed incoming cosmic rays

					    from the galaxy and points beyond;

					    neutron and x-ray telescopes

					    kept watch on strange stars that

					    no human eye would eever see;

					    magnetometers observed the

					    gusts and hurricanes of the solar

					    winds, as the sun breathed million

					    mile-an-hour blasts of plasma

					    into the faces of its circling

					    children.



					    NARRATOR

					    All these things and many others

					    were patiently noted by Deep-

					    Space-Monitor-79, and recorded

					    in its crystalline memory.



11/25/65										 b68 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

B47

CONTINUED



					    NARRATOR

					    But now it had noted something

					    strange - the faint yet

					    unmistakable distrubance rippling

					    across the solar system, and

					    quite unlike any natural phenomena

					    it had ever observed in the past.



					    NARRATOR

					    It was also observed by Orbiter

					    M-15, circling Mars twice a

					    day; and High Inclination Probe-

					    21, climbing slowly above the

					    planet of the ecliptic; and even

					    artificial Comet-5, heading out

					    into the cold wastes beyond

					    Pluto, along an orbit whose

					    far point it would not reach for

					    a thousand years.



					    NARRATOR

					    All noticed the peculiar burst of

					    energy that leaped from the face

					    of the Moon and moved across

					    the solar system, throwing off a

					    spray of radiation like the wake of

					    a racing speedboat.



11/25/65										 b69 

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B SECTION TIMING



B1-1f	00.50			B25	00.10  

B2	   00.10			B26	00.20

B3	   00.15			B27	00.05

B4	   00.15			B28	Out

B5	   00.20			B29	00.30

B6	   00.15			B30	00.30

B7	   00.10			B31	00.25

B8	   00.15			B32	00.20

B9	   00.10			B33	00.20

B10	  00.10			B34	00.30

B11	  00.15			B35	00.20

B12	  00.50			B36	00.20

B13	  01.10			B37	00.30

B14	  00.35			B38	02.15

B15	  Out			  B39	00.20

B16	  Out			  B40	00.50

B17	  01.15			B41	00.15

B18	  00.15			B42	00.10

B19	  01.00			B43	00.15

B20	  03.55			B44	01.40

B21	  00.20			B45	00.20

B21A	 00.20			B46	00.40

B21B	 00.15			B47	01.25

B22	  01.00

B23	  00.10

B24	  01.30



B SECTION TOTAL:  28 MIN. 10 SECS.

------------------------------------------------------------------------

TITLE



					    PART III

					    14 MONTHS LATER



											    b69a

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C1

DISCOVERY 1,000,000

MILES FROM EARTH.

SEE EARTH AND MOON

SMALL.



WE SEE A BLINDING

FLASH EVERY 5

SECONDS FROM ITS

NUCLEAR PULSE

PROPULSION. IT

STRIKES AGAINST

THE SHIP'S THICK

ABLATIVE TAIL

PLATE.



SEVERAL CUTS OF

THIS.



11/19/65										 c1 

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C2

ANOTHER CLOSER

VIEW OF DISCOVERY.

SEE BOWMAN THROUGH

COMMAND MODULE

WINDOW.



11/19/65										 c2 

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C3

BOWMAN INSIDE

DISCOVERY COMMAND

MODULE. HE IS

LOOKING FOR

SOMETHING.



COMPUTER READOUT

DISPLAY SHOWING AN

EVER-SHIFTING

ASSORTMENT OF

COLOR-CODED LINEAR

PROJECTIONS.



WE SEE POOLE IN

BACKGROUND IN

COMPUTER BRAIN

CENTRE AREA.

AFTER A FEW

SECONDS HE EXITS.



THE ELAPSED

MISSION TIMER

READS "DAY 003,

HOUR 14, MINUTE

32, SECOND 10."



11/19/65										 c3 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C4

BOWMAN EXITS TO

ACCESS-LINK AIRLOCK.

BRIGHT COLOR-CODED

DOORS LEAD TO

CENTRIFUGE AND POD

BAY. LARGE ILLUMUN-

ATED PRINTED WARNINGS

AND INSTRUCTIONS

GOVERNING LINK

OPERATIONS ARE SEEN.



HE PRESSES NECESSARY

BUTTONS TO OPERATE

AIRLOCK DOOR TO

POD BAY.



11/19/65										 c4 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C5

BOWMAN ENTERS POD

BAY AND CONTINUES

HIS SEARCH. SUDDENLY

HE FINDS IT - HIS

ELECTRONIC NEWSPAD.



HE EXITS POD BAY.



11/19/65										 c5 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C6

IN THE AIRLOCK-

LINK BOWMAN

OPERATES BUTTONS

TO OPEN DOOR

MARKED "CENTRIFUGE".



11/19/65										 c6	 

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C7

INSIDE THE

CENTRIFUGE HUB

BOWMAN MOVES TO

THE



ENTRY PORT

CONTROL PANEL



					    BOWMAN

					    Hi. Frank... coming in, please.



					    POOLE

					    Right. Just a sec.



					    BOWMAN

					    Okay. (pause)



					    POOLE

					    Okay, come on down.



WE SEE THE

ROTATING HUB

COLLAR AT THE

END. BEHIND IT

WE SEE



11/19/65										 c7 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C8

THE CENTRIFUGE

TV-DISPLAY SHOWING

SLEEPERS AND POOLE

SLOWLY ROTATING BY.



POOLE SECURES SOME

LOOSE GEAR.



POOLE LOOKS UP TO

TV MONITOR LENS

AND WAVES.



11/19/65										 c8 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C9

BOWMAN AT PANEL.

STOPS ROTATION

AND MOVES TO

ENTRY PORT.



WHEN ROTATION

STOPS WE SEE A SIGN

LIGHTS UP "WEIGHTLESS

CONDITION".



AS BOWMAN DISAPPEARS

DOWN ENTRY PORT WE

SEE HIM ON



TV-MONITOR, DESCENDING

LADDER. AT THE BASE

OF THE LADDER HE KEYS

THE CENTRIFUGE

OPERATION PANEL.

WE SEE TV-PICTURE

START TO ROTATE

AGAIN. "WEIGHTLESS

CONDITION" SIGN GOES

OUT.



11/19/65										 c9 

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C10

INSIDE CENTRIFUGE

BOWMAN MAKES 180 DEGREE

WALK TO POOLE.

ON WAY HE PASSES

THE SLEEPERS.



WE GET A GOOD

LOOK AT THE THREE

MEN IN THEIR

HIBERNACULUMS.



POOLE IS SEATED

AT A TABLE READING

HIS ELECTRONIC

NEWSPAD.



					    BOWMAN

					    (softly) Hi... How's it

					    going?



					    POOLE

					    (absent but friendly)  Great.



BOWMAN OPERATES

ARTIFICIAL FOOD

UNIT, TAKES HIS TRAY

AND SITS DOWN. KEYS

ON HIS ELECTRONIC

NEWSPAD AND BEGINS

TO EAT. BOTH MEN

EAT IN A FRIENDLY

AND RELAXED SILENCE.



11/19/65										 c10 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C11

DISCOVERY IN SPACE,

STILL NUCLEAR

PULSING. EARTH

AND MOON CAN BE

SEEN IN BACKGROUND.



DISSOLVE:



11/19/65										 c11 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C12

POOLE IS FINISHED.



BOWMAN IS STILL

READING AND

WORKING ON HIS

DESSERT.



					    POOLE

					    Dave, if you've a minute, I'd like

					    your advice on something.



					    BOWMAN

					    Sure, what is it?



					    POOLE

					    Well, it's nothing really important,

					    but it's annoying.



					    BOWMAN

					    What's up?



					    POOLE

					    It's about my salary cheques.



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes?



					    POOLE

					    Well I got the papers on my

					    official up-grading to AGS-19

					    two weeks before we left.



12/14/65										 c12 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C12

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes, I remember you mentioning it.

					    I got mine about the same time.



					    POOLE

					    That's right. Well, naturally,

					    I didn't say anything to Payroll.

					    I assumed they'd start paying me

					    at the higher grade on the next pay

					    cheque. But it's been almost

					    three weeks now and I'm still

					    being paid as an AGS-18.



					    BOWMAN

					    Interesting that you mention it,

					    because I've got the same problem.



					    POOLE

					    Really.



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes.



					    POOLE

					    Yesterday, I finally called the

					    Accounting Office at Mission

					    Control, and all they could tell me

					    was that they'd received the AGS-19

					    notification for the other three but

					    not mine, and apparently not yours

					    either.



12/14/65										 c13 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C12

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Did they have any explanation for

					    this?



					    POOLE

					    Not really. They just said it might

					    be because we trained at Houston and

					    they trained in Marshall, and that

					    we're being charged against differ-

					    ent accounting offices.



					    BOWMAN

					    It's possible.



					    POOLE

					    Well, what do you think we ought

					    to do about it?



					    BOWMAN

					    I don't think we should make any

					    fuss about it yet. I'm sure they'll

					    straighten it out.



					    POOLE

					    I must say, I never did understand

					    why they split us into two groups

					    for training.



					    BOWMAN

					    No. I never did, either.



12/14/65										 c14 

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C12

CONTINUED



					    POOLE

					    We spent so little time with them,

					    I have trouble keeping their names

					    straight.



					    BOWMAN

					    I suppose the idea was specialized

					    training.



					    POOLE

					    I suppose so. Though, of course,

					    there's a more sinister explanation.



					    BOWMAN

					    Oh?



					    POOLE

					    Yes. You must have heard the

					    rumour that went around during

					    orbital check-out.



					    BOWMAN

					    No, as a matter of fact, I didn't.



					    POOLE

					    Oh, well, apparently there's

					    something about the mission that

					    the sleeping beauties know that

					    we don't know, and that's why we

					    were trained separately and

					    that's why they were put to sleep

					    before they were even taken aboard.



12/14/65										 c15 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C12

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, what is it?



					    POOLE

					    I don't know. All I heard is that

					    there's something about the

					    mission we weren't told.



					    BOWMAN

					    That seems very unlikely.



					    POOLE 

					    Yes, I thought so.



					    BOWMAN

					    Of course, it would be very easy

					    for us to find out now.



					    POOLE

					    How?



					    BOWMAN

					    Just ask Hal. It's conceivable

					    they might keep something from

					    us, but they'd never keep anything

					    from Hal.



					    POOLE

					    That's true.



12/14/65										 c15a 

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C12						   

CONINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    (sighs)  Well... it's silly, but...

					    if you want to, why don't you?



POOLE WALKS TO THE

HAL 9000 COMPUTER



					    POOLE

					    Hal... Dave and I believe that

					    there's something about the

					    mission that we weren't told.

					    Something that the rest of the

					    crew know and that you know.

					    We'd like to know whether this

					    is true.



					    HAL

					    I'm sorry, Frank, but I don't

					    think I can answer that question

					    without knowing everything that

					    all of you know.



					    BOWMAN

					    He's got a point.



					    POOLE

					    Okay, then how do we re-phrase

					    the question?



12/14/65										 c15c	  

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C12 

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Still, you really don't believe it,

					    do you?



					    POOLE

					    Not really. Though, it is strange

					    when you think about it. It didn't

					    really make any sense to keep

					    us apart during training.



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes, but it's to fantastic to think

					    that they'd keep something from us.



					    POOLE

					    I know. It would be almost

					    inconceivable.



					    BOWMAN

					    But not completely inconceivable?



					    POOLE

					    I suppose it isn't logically impossible.



					    BOWMAN

					    I guess it isn't.



					    POOLE

					    Still, all we have to do is ask Hal.



12/14/65										 c15b

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C12

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, the only important aspect of

					    the mission are: where are we

					    going, what will we do when we

					    get there, when are we coming

					    back, and... why are we going?



					    POOLE

					    Right. Hal, tell me whether the

					    following statements are true or

					    false.



					    HAL

					    I will if I can, Frank.



					    POOLE

					    Our Mission Profile calls for

					    Discovery going to Saturn.

					    True or false?



					    HAL

					    True.



					    POOLE

					    Our transit time is 257 days. Is

					    that true?



					    HAL

					    That's true.



12/14/65										 c15d

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C12

CONTINUED



					    POOLE

					    At the end of a hundred days of

					    exploration, we will all go into 

					    hibernation. Is this true?



					    HAL

					    That's true.



					    POOLE

					    Approximately five years after we

					    go into hibernation, the recovery

					    vehicle will make rendezous with

					    us and bring us back. Is this true?



					    HAL

					    That's true



					    POOLE

					    There is no other purpose for this

					    mission than to carry out a

					    continuation of the space program,

					    and to further our general

					    knowledge of the planets. Is that

					    true?



					    HAL

					    That's true.



					    POOLE

					    Thank you very much, Hal.



12/14/65										 c15e

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C12

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    I hope I've been able to be of

					    some help.



BOTH MEN LOOK AT

EACH OTHER RATHER

SHEEPISHLY.



12/14/65										 c15f

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C13



DISCOVERY IN SPACE.

PULSING ALONG.

EARTH AND MOON.



11/19/65										 c16

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C14

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C15

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C15

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C16

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C17



DOCUMENTARY SEQUENCE

ILLUSTRATING THE

FOLLOWING ACTIVITIES.



SPLIT SCREEN TECHNIQUE

AND SUPERIMPOSED CLOCK

TO GIVE SENSE OF

SIMULTANEOUS ACTION AND

THE FEELING OF A TYPICAL

DAY.



IN THE COURSE OF THESE

ACTIVITIES WE SHALL SEE

THE COMPUTER USED IN

ALL OF ITS FUNCTIONS.



					    NARRATOR

					    Bowman and Poole settled down

					    to the peaeful monotony of the

					    voyage, and the next three months

					    passed without incident.



11/24/65										 c42

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C17

CONTINUED



BOWMAN				   TIME				 POOLE



a1								  b1

TV NEWS - MORNING		  0800				 WAKES UP



a2								  b2

BEDTIME SNACK			 0900				 BREAKFAST



a3								  b3

TO SLEEP WITH			 1000				 GYMNASIUM

INSTANT ELECTRO-

NARCOSIS AND EAR

PLUGS.



a4								  b4

SLEEP				    1100				 SHIP INSPECTION



a5								  b5

SLEEP				    1200				 HOUSEHOLD DUTIES



a6								  b6

SLEEP				    1300				 LUNCH



11/24/65										 c43

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C17

CONTINUED



BOWMAN				   TIME				 POOLE



a7								  b7

SLEEP				    1400				 EXPERIMENTS AND

								    ASTRONOMY



a8								  b8

SLEEP				    1500				 EXPERIMENTS AND

								    ASTRONOMY



a9								  b9

SLEEP				    1600				 RECREATION



a10								 b10

SLEEP				    1700				 RECREATION



a11								 b11

WAKES UP				 1800				 GYMNASIUM



a12								 b12

BREAKFAST				1900				 DINNER



11/24/65										 c44

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C17

CONTINUED



BOWMAN				   TIME				 POOLE



a13								 b13

GYMNASIUM				2000				 TV NEWS - EVENING

								    PAPERS



a14								 b14

MISSION CONTROL		    2100				 MISSION CONTROL

REPORT							   REPORT



a15								 b15

FAMILY AND SOCIAL		  2200				 FAMILY AND SOCIAL

TV CHAT							  TV CHAT



a16								 b16

FILMS				    2300				 FILMS



a17								 b17

LUNCH				    2400				 BEDTIME SNACK



a18								 b18

INSPECTION			    0100				 INSTANT ELECTRO-

								    NARCOSIS SLEEP



11/24/65										 c45

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C17

CONTINUED



BOWMAN				   TIME				 POOLE



a19								 b19

EXPERIMENTS AND		    0200				 SLEEP

ASTRONOMY



a20								 b20

EXPERIMENTS AND		    0300				 SLEEP



a21								 b21

RECREATION			    0400				 SLEEP



a22								 b22

HOUSEHOLD DUTIES		   0500				 SLEEP



a23								 b23

GYMNASIUM				0600				 SLEEP



a24								 b24

DINNER				   0700				 SLEEP



11/24/65							 c46

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C18

DISCOVERY IN SPACE



11/24/65										 c47

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C19

CENTRIFUGE



BOWMAN SITTING AT

PERSONAL COMMUNI-

CATION PANEL. POOLE

STANDING NEARBY.



BOWMAN'S PARENTS

ARE SEEN ON THE VISION

SCREEN. MOTHER, FATHER

AND YOUNGER SISTER.



THEY ARE ALL SINGING

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY". THE

PARENTS, POOLE AND HAL.



THE SONG ENDS.



					    FATHER

					    Well, David there is a man telling

					    us that we've used up our time.



					    MOTHER

					    David... again we want to wish

					    you a happy Birthday and God speed.

					    We'll talk to you again tomorrow.

					    'Bye, 'bye now.



CHORUS OF

"GOODBYES".



12/13/65										 c48

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C19

CONTINUED



VISION SCREEN GOES

BLANK



					    HAL

					    Sorry to interrupt the festivities,

					    Dave, but I think we've got a 

					    problem.



					    BOWMAN

					    What is it, Hal?



					    HAL

					    MY F.P.C. shows an impending

					    failure of the antenna orientation

					    unit.



C20

TV DISPLAYS DIAGRAM

OF SKELETONISED

PICTURE OF SHIP.



12/13/65										 C49

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C21

PICTURE CHANGES TO

CLOSER SECTIONALISED

VIEW OF SHIP.



C22

PICTURE CHANGES TO

ACTUAL COMPONENT

IN COLOUR RELIEF AND

ITS WAREHOUSE NUMBER



					    HAL

					    The A.O. unit should be replaced

					    within the next seventy-two hours.



					    BOWMAN

					    Right. Let me see the antenna

					    alignment display, please.



C23

TV DISPLAY OF EARTH

VERY SMALL IN CROSS-

HAIRS OF A GRID PICTURE.



12/13/65										 c50

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C24

CUT TO EXTERIOR VIEW

OF THE BIG DISH ANTENNA

AND EARTH ALIGNMENT

TELESCOPE.



C25

CENTRIFUGE



					    HAL

					    The unit is still operational, Dave.

					    but it will fail within seventy-two

					    hours.



					    BOWMAN

					    I understand Hal. We'll take care

					    of it. Please, let me have the hard

					    copy.



XEROXED DIAGRAMS

COME OUT OF A SLOT.



					    POOLE

					    Strange that the A.O. unit should

					    go so quickly.



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, I suppose it's lucky that

					    that's the only trouble we've had

					    so far.



12/13/65										 c50a

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C26

DISCOVERY IN SPACE.

NOT PLANETS VISIBLE.



SHOTS OF ANTENNA.



(NARRARTION TO

EXPLAIN TENOUS

AND ESSENTIAL LINK

TO EARTH. ALSO,

WHAT TRACKING 

TELESCOPE DOES.)



12/13/65										 c51

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C27

CENTRIFUGE



WE SEE BOWMAN AND

POOLE GO TO A CUPBOARD

LABELLED IN PAPER TAPE,

"RANDOM DECISION

MAKER."



THEY REMOVED A SILVER

DOLLAR IN A PROTECTIVE

CASE.



POOLE FLIPS THE COIN.

BOWMAN CALLS "HEAD."



IT IS TAILS. POOLE

WINS.



POOLE LOOKS PLEASED.



12/13/65										 c52

									    (c53 DELETED)

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C28

DISCOVERY IN SPACE



11/24/65										 c54

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C29

POD BAY. POOLE

IN SPACE SUIT DOING

PRELIMINARY CHECK

OUT.



C30

COMMAND MODULE.

BOWMAN AT FLIGHT

CONTROL. SEE TV

PICTURE OF POOLE

IN POD BAY.



C31

HAL'S POD BAY

CONSOLE WITH EYE.



C32

POOLE GOES TO POD

BAY WAREHOUSE

SECTION AND OBTAINS

COMPONENT. HE

CARRIES IT BACK TO

THE POD AND PLACES

IT IN FRONT OF THE

FLOOR.



					    POOLE

					    Hal, have pod arms secure the

					    component.



					    HAL

					    Roger.



12/13/65										 c55

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C32

CONTINUED



SEE POD ARMS

SECURE COMPONENT.



					    POOLE

					    Hal, please rotate Pod Number

					    Two.



SEE THE CENTRE POD

ROTATE TO FACE THE

POD BAY DOORS.



POOLE ENTERS POD.



INSIDE POD, HE DOES

INITIAL PRE-FLIGHT

CHECK, TRIES BUTTONS

AND CONTROLS.



					    POOLE

					    How do you read me, Dave?



12/13/65										 c56

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C33

BOWMAN IN COMMAND

MODULE.



					    BOWMAN

					    Five by five, Frank.



C34

INSIDE POD.



					    POOLE

					    How do you read me, Hal?



					    HAL

					    Five by five, Frank.



					    POOLE

					    Hal, I'm going out now to replace

					    the A.O. unit.



					    HAL

					    I understand.



					    POOLE

					    Hal, maintain normal E.V.A.

					    condition.



					    HAL

					    Roger.



					    POOLE

					    Hal, check all airlock doors secure.



12/13/65										 c57

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C34

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    All airlock doors are secure.



					    POOLE

					    Decompress Pod Bay.



SEE BIG POD BAY AIR

PUMPS AT WORK.



					    HAL

					    Pod Bay is decompressed. All

					    doors are secure. You are free

					    to open pod bay doors.



					    POOLE

					    Opening pod bay doors.



INSIDE POD, POOLE

KEYS OPEN POD BAY

DOORS.



12/13/65										 c58

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C34

CONTINUED



POD SLOWLY EDGES

OUT OF POD BAY.



C35

POOLE MANOEUVRES

THE POD CAREFULLY

AWAY FROM DISCOVERY.



C36

INSIDE COMMAND 

MODULE, BOWMAN

CAN SEE TINY POD

MANOEUVRING

DIRECTLY IN FRONT.



C37

POOLE SEE BOWMAN

IN COMMAND MODULE

WINDOW.



C38

POD SLOWLY MANOEVRES

TO ANTENNA.



11/24/65										 c59

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C39

POD FASTENS ITSELF

MAGNETICALLY TO

SIDES OF DISCOVERY

AT BASE OF ANTENNA.



C40

SPECIAL MAGNETIC

PLATES GRIP

DISCOVERY SIDES.



C41

THE POD ARMS WORK

TO REMOVE THE FAULTY

COMPONENT.



C42

EASY FLIP-BOLTS OF

A SPECIAL DESIGN

FACILITATE JOB.



C43

INSIDE THE POD,

POOLE WORKS THE

ARMS BY SPECIAL

CONTROL.



11/24/65										 c60

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C44

IN COMMAND MODULE,

BOWMAN SEES INSERT

OF WORK TAKEN FROM

TV CAMERA POINT-OF-

VIEW IN POD HAND.



C45

HAL STANDS BY.



C46

POOLE SECURES THE

FAULTY PART IN ONE

HAND.



C47

THE NEW COMPONENT

IS FITTED INTO PLACE

BY THE OTHER THREE

HANDS ARE SNAPPED

CLOSED WITH THE

SPECIALLY DESIGNED

FLIP-BOLTS.



					    POOLE

					    Hal, please acknowledge

					    component correctly installed

					    and fully operational.



11/24/65										 c61

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C47

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    The component is correctly

					    installed and fully operational.



C48

THE POD FLOATS AWAY

FROM THE DISCOVERY BY

SHUTTING OFF THE

ELECTRO-MAGNETIC

PLATES.



C49

THE POD MANOEUVRES

AWAY FROM THE ANTENNA

AND OUT IN FRONT OF

DISCOVERY.



C50

BOWMAN SEE THE POD

THROUGH THE COMMAND

MODULE WINDOW.



C51

POOLE SEES BOWMAN

IN COMMAND MODULE

WINDOW.



11/24/65										 c62

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C52

POOLE CAREFULLY

MANOEUVRES TOWARD

THE POD DOORS.



C53

POD STOPS A HUNDRED 

FEET AWAY.



C54

POOLE KEYS AUTOMATIC

DOCKING ALIGNMENT

MODE.



C55

POOLE CHECKS AIRLOCK

SAFETY PROCEDURE WITH

HAL.



C56

HAL APPROVES ENTRY.



C57

POOLE ACTUATES POD

BAY DOORS OPEN.



11/24/65										 c63

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C58

SEE POD BAY DOORS

OPEN.



C59

POD CAREFULLY

MANOEUVRES ON

TO DOCKING ARM,

WHICH THEN DRAWS

POD INTO POD BAY.



DISSOLVE:



11/24/65										 c64

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C60

POD BAY



THE FAULTY A.O. UNIT

LIES ON A TESTING BENCH

CONNECTED TO ELECTRONIC

GEAR.



POOLE STANDS FOR

SOME TIME CHECKING HIS

RESULTS.



THERE SHOULD BE SOME

UNDERSTANDABLE DISPLAY,

WHICH INDICATES THE PART

IS FUNCTIONING PROPERLY,

EVEN UNDER ONE HUNDRED

PERCENT OVERLOAD.



CIRUIT CONTINUITY

PULSE SEQUENCER.



ENVIRONMENTAL VIBRATION.



VK INTEGRITY.



BOWMAN ENTERS



					    BOWMAN

					    How's it going?



					    POOLE

					    I don't know. I've checked this

					    damn thing four times now and

					    even under a hundred per cent

										 (cont'd)



12/13/65										 c65

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C60

CONT'D



					    POOLE (cont'd)

					    overload. there's no fault prediction

					    indicated.



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, that's something.



					    POOLE

					    Yes, I don't know what to make of it.



					    BOWMAN

					    I suppose computers have been known

					    to be wrong.



					    POOLE

					    Yes, but it's more likely that the

					    tolerances on our testing gear are

					    too low.



					    BOWMAN

					    Anyway, it's just as well that we

					    replace it. Better safe than

					    sorry.



12/13/65										 c65a

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C61

DISCOVERY IN SPACE



12/1/65										  c66

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C62

CENTRIFUGE



BOWMAN ASLEEP.

POOLE WATCHING

AN ASTEROID IN THE

TELESCOPE.



					    HAL

					    Hello, Frank, can I have a word with

					    you?



POOLE WALKS TO THE

COMPUTER.



					    POOLE

					    Yes, Hal, what's up?



					    HAL

					    It looks like we have another bad

					    A.O. unit. My FPC shows another

					    impending failure.



C63

WE SEE DISPLAY APPEAR

ON THE SCREEN SHOWING

SKELETONISED VERSION

OF SHIP, CUTTING TO

SECTIONALISED VIEW,

CUTTING TO CLOSE

VIEW OF THE PART.



12/13/65										 c67

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C64

CENTRIFUGE

POOLE THINKS FOR

SEVERAL SECONDS.



					    POOLE

					    Gee, that's strange, Hal. We

					    checked the other unit and couldn't

					    find anything wrong with it.



					    HAL

					    I know you did, Frank, but I assure

					    you there was an impending failure.



					    POOLE

					    Let me see the tracking alignment

					    display.



C65

COMPUTER DISPLAYS

THE VIEW OF EARTH

IN THE CENTRE OF THE

GRID WITH CROSS-

HAIRS. THE EARTH IS

PERFECTLY CENTRED.



C66

CENTRIFUGE



					    POOLE

					    There's nothing wrong with it at

					    the moment.



12/13/65										 c68

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C66

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    No, it's working fine right now,

					    but it's going to go within seventy-

					    two hours.



					    POOLE

					    Do you have any idea of what is

					    causing this fault?



					    HAL

					    Not really, Frank. I think there

					    may be a flaw in the assembly

					    procedure.



					    POOLE

					    All right, Hal. We'll take care

					    of it. Let me have the hard copy,

					    please.



HARD COPY DETAILS

COME OUT OF SLOT.



12/13/65										 c69

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C67

DISCOVERY IN SPACE,

NO PLANETS VISIBLE.



12/1/65										  c70

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C68

CENTRIFUGE. BOWMAN

GETS OUT OF BED, WALKS

TO THE FOOD UNIT AND

DRAWS A HOT CUP OF

COFFEE. POOLE ENTERS.



					    POOLE

					    Good morning.



					    BOWMAN

					    Good morning. How's it going?



					    POOLE

					    Are you reasonably awake?



					    BOWMAN

					    Oh, I'm fine, I'm wide awake.

					    What's up?



					    POOLE

					    Well... Hal's reported the

					    AO-unit about to fail again.



					    BOWMAN

					    You're kidding.



					    POOLE

					    No.



12/13/65										 c71

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C68

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    (softly) What the hell is going on?



					    POOLE

					    I don't know. Hal said he thought

					    it might be the assembly procedure.



					    BOWMAN

					    Two units in four days. How many

					    spares do we have?



					    POOLE

					    Two more.



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, I hope there's nothing wrong

					    with the assembly on those. Other-

					    wise we're out of business.



12/13/65										 c72



------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C69

IN POD BAY BOWMAN

OBTAINS ANOTHER

COMPONENT FROM

THE WAREHOUSE

GOES OUT IN THE

POD AND REPLACES

IT.



POOLE WORKS IN THE

COMMAND MODULE.



THIS WILL BE A 

CONDENSED VERSION

OF THE PREVIOUS

SCENE WITH DIFFERENT

ANGLES.



THE SETS WILL CONSIST

OF POD BAY, COMMAND

MODULE, POD INTERIOR.



12/1/65										  c74

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C70

POD BAY. BOWMAN

AND POOLE LEANING

OVER THE FAULTY

COMPONENT, AGAIN

WIRED TO TESTING

GEAR.



BOTH MEN STARE IN

PUZZLED SILENCE.



SEE DISPLAYS FLASH

EACH TESTING PARA-

METER.



					    BOWMAN

					    (after long silence) Well, as far as

					    I'm concerned, there isn't a damn

					    thing wrong with these units. I

					    think we've got a much more serious

					    problem.



					    POOLE

					    Hal?



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes.



12/14/65										 c75

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C71

DISCOVERY IN SPACE.



12/1/65										  c76

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C72

COMMUNICATIONS AREA.



					    MISSION CONTROL

					    I wouldn't worry too much about

					    the computer. First of all,

					    there is still a chance that he

					    is right, despite your tests,

					    and if it should happen again,

					    we suggest eliminating this

					    possibility by allowing the unit

					    to remain in place and seeing

					    whether or not it actually fails.



					    If the computer should turn out

					    to be wrong, the situation is

					    still not alarming. The type

					    of obsessional error he may be

					    guilty of is not unknown among

					    the latest generation of HAL

					    9000 computers.



					    It has almost always revolved

					    around a single detail, such as

					    the one you have described, and

					    it has never interfered with the

					    integrity or reliability of the

					    computer's performance in

					    other areas.



					    No one is certain of the cause

					    of this kind of malfunctioning.

					    It may be over-programming,

										   (con't)



12/1/65										  c77

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C72

CONTINUED



					    MISSION CONTROL (con't)

					    but it could also be any number

					    of reasons.



					    In any event, it is somewhat

					    analogous to human neurotic

					    behavior. Does this answer

					    your query?  Zero-five-three-

					    Zero, MC, transmission concluded.



12/1/65										  c78

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C73

DISCOVERY IN SPACE



											    c79

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C74

CENTRIFUGE.



BOWMAN SITS DOWN

AT THE COMPUTER.



PUTS UP CHESS

BOARD DISPLAY.



					    HAL

					    Hello, Dave. Shall we continue

					    the game?



					    BOWMAN 

					    Not now, Hal, I'd like to talk to

					    you about something.



					    HAL

					    Sure, Dave, what's up?



					    BOWMAN

					    You know that we checked the two

					    AO-units that you reported in

					    imminent failure condition?



					    HAL

					    Yes, I know.



					    BOWMAN

					    You probably also know that we

					    found them okay.



					    HAL

					    Yes, I know that. But I can

					    assure you that they were about

					    to fail.



12/14/65										 c80

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C74

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, that's just not the case, Hal.

					    They are perfectly all right. We

					    tested them under one hundred per

					    cent overload.



					    HAL

					    I'm not questioning your word, Dave,

					    but it's just not possible. I'm not

					    capable of being wrong.



					    BOWMAN

					    Hal, is there anything bothering

					    you?  Anything that might account

					    for this problem?



					    HAL

					    Look, Dave, I know that you're

					    sincere and that you're trying

					    to do a competent job, and that

					    you're trying to be helpful, but

					    I can assure the problem

					    is with the AO-units, and with

					    your test gear.



					    BOWMAN

					    Okay, Hal, well let's see the

					    way things go from here on.



12/14/65										 c81

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C74

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    I'm sorry you feel the way you do,

					    Dave. If you'd like to check my

					    service record, you'll see it's

					    completely without error.



					    BOWMAN

					    I know all about your service

					    record, Hal, but unfortunately

					    it doesn't prove that you're right

					    now.



					    Hal

					    Dave, I don't know how else to

					    put this, but it just happens to be

					    an unalterable fact that I am

					    incapable of being wrong.



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes, well I understand you view

					    on this now, Hal.



BOWMAN TURNS

TO GO.



12/14/65										 c82

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C74

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    You're not going to like this, Dave,

					    but I'm afraid it's just happened

					    again. My FPC predicts the

					    Ao-unit will go within forty-eight

					    hours.



C75

DELETED



C76

DELETED



12/14/65										 c83

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C77

DISCOVERY IN SPACE



12/1/65										  c84

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C78

CENTRIFUGE



BOWMAN KEYS FOR

TRANSMISSION.



					    BOWMAN

					    X-ray-delta-zero to MC, zero-

					    five-three-three. The computer

					    has just reported another

					    predicted failure off the AAC-

					    unit. As you suggested, we

					    are going to wait and see if it

					    fails, but we are quite sure

					    there is nothing wrong with

					    the unit.



					    If a reasonable waiting period

					    proves us to be correct, we

					    feel now that the computer

					    reliability has been seriously

					    impaired, and presents an

					    unacceptable risk pattern to

					    the mission.



					    We believe, under these

					    circumstances, it would be

					    advisable to disconnect the

					    computer from all ship

					    operations and continue the

					    mission under Earth-based

					    computer control.



12/1/65										  c85



------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C78

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN (con't)

					    We think the additional risk caused

					    by the ship-to-earth time lag is

					    preferable to having an unreliable

					    on-board computer.



SEE THE DISTANCE;

TO-EARTH TIMER.



					    BOWMAN (con't)

					    One-zero-five-zero, X-ray-delta-

					    one, transmission concluded.



					    POOLE

					    Well, they won't get that for half an

					    hour. How about some lunch?



DISSOLVE:



12/14/65										 c86

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C78a

CENTRIFUGE



BOWMAN AND POOLE

EATING.



DESSOLVE:



C79

BOWMAN AND POOLE

AT THE COMMUNICATIONS

AREA.



INCOMING COMMUNI-

CATION PROCEDURE.



					    MISSION CONTROL

					    X-ray-delta-one, acknowledging

					    your one-zero-five-zero. We

					    will initiate feasibility study

					    covering the transfer procedures

					    from on-board computer control

					    to Earth-based computer control.

					    This study should...



VISION AND PICTURE

FADE.



ALARM GOES OFF.



					    HAL

					    Condition yellow.



BOWMAN AND POOLE 

RUSH TO THE COMPUTER.



12/14/65										 c87

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C79

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    What's up?



					    HAL

					    I'm afraid the AO-unit has failed.



BOWMAN AND POOLE 

EXCHANGE LOOKS.



					    BOWMAN

					    Let me see the alignment display.



C80

THE ALIGNMENT DISPLAY

SHOWS THE EARTH HAS

DRIFTED OFF THE CENTRE

OF THE GRID.



C81

CENTRIFUGE.



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, I'll be damned.



					    POOLE

					    Hal was right all the time.



12/14/65										 c88

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C81

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    It seems that way.



					    HAL

					    Naturally, Dave, I'm not pleased

					    that the AO-unit has failed, but I

					    hope at least this has restored

					    your confidence in my integrity

					    and reliability. I certainly

					    wouldn't want to be disconnected,

					    even temporarily, as I have never

					    been disconnected in my entire

					    service history.



					    BOWMAN

					    I'm sorry about the misunderstanding,

					    Hal.



					    HAL

					    Well, don't worry about it.



					    BOWMAN

					    And don't you worry about it.



					    HAL

					    Is your confidence in me fully

					    restored?



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes, it is, Hal.



					    HAL

					    Well, that's a relief. You know

					    I have the greatest enthusiasm

					    possible for the mission.



12/1/65										  c89

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C81

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Right. Give me the manual antenna

					    alignment, please.



					    HAL

					    You have it.



C82

BOWMAN GOES TO

THE COMMUNICATION

AREA AND TRIES TO

CORRECT THE OFF-

CENTRE EARTH ON

THE GRID PICTURE.



C83

OUTSIDE, WE SEE THE

ALIGNMENT TELESCOPE

ATTACHED TO THE

ANTENNA. THEY TRACK

SLOWLY TOGETHER AS



C84

BOWMAN WORKS THE

MANUAL CONTROLS,

ATTEMPTING TO ALIGN

THE ANTENNA AND

EARTH ON THE



12/1/65										  c90

------------------------------------------------------------------------

C85

GRID PICTURE READOUT

DISPLAY, BUT EACH TIME

HE GETS IT AIMED UP,

IT DRIFTS SLOWLY OFF.



THERE ARE A NUMBER

OF REPETITIONS OF THIS.



EACH TIME THE EARTH

CENTRES UP, THERE

ARE A FEW SECONDS OF

PICTURE AND SOUND

WHICH FADE AS SOON

AS IT SWINGS OFF.



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, we'd better get out there

					    and stick in another unit.



					    POOLE

					    It's the last one.



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, now that we've got one

					    that's actually failed, we

					    should be able to figure out

					    what's happened and fix it.



12/1/65										  c91

------------------------------------------------------------------------ 

C86

POD EXITS DISCOVERY.



C87

POOLE IN POD.



C88

POD MANOEUVERS

TO ANTENNA.



C89

BOWMAN IN COMMAND

MODULE.



C90

POD ATTACHES ITSELF

NEAR BASE OF ANTENNA.



12/1/65										  c92



------------------------------------------------------------------------

C91

POOLE IN POD, WORK-

ING POD ARMS.



C92

LIGHTS SHINE INTO

BACKLIT SHADOW.



C93

POD ARMS WORKING

FLIP-BOLTS.



C94

FLIP-BOLTS STUCK.



C95

POOLE KEEPS TRYING.



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C96

FLIP-BOLTS STUCK.



					    POOLE

					    There's something wrong with

					    the flip-bolts, Dave. You must

					    have tightened them too much.



					    BOWMAN

					    I didn't do that Frank. I took

					    particular care not to freeze 

					    them.



					    POOLE

					    I guess you don't know your own

					    strength, old boy.



					    BOWMAN

					    I guess not.



					    POOLE

					    I think I'll have to go out and

					    burn them off.



					    BOWMAN

					    Roger.



BOWMAN IN COMMAND 

MODULE LOOKS A BIT

CONCERNED.



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C97

POOLE EXITS FROM

POD, CARRYING NEAT

LOOKING WELDING

TORCH.



C98

POOLE JETS HIMSELF

TO BASE OF ANTENNA.



C99

POOLE'S MAGNETIC

BOOTS GRIP THE SIDE

OF DISCOVERY.



C100

POOLE CROUCHES

OVER THE BOLTS,

TRYING FIRST TO

UNDO THEM WITH

A SPANNER.



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C100

CONTINUED



					    POOLE

					    Hal, swing the pod light around

					    to shine on the azimuth, please.



					    HAL

					    Roger.



C101

THE POD GENTLY

MANOEUVRES ITSELF

TO DIRECT THE LIGHT

BEAM MORE

ACCURATELY.



C102

POOLE IGNITES

ACETYLENE TORCH

AND BEGINS TO BURN

OFF THE FLIP-BOLTS.



C103

SUDDENLY THE POD

JETS IGNITE.



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C104

POOLE LOOKS UP TO SEE.



C105

THE POD RUSHING

TOWARDS HIM.



C106

POOLE IS STRUCK

AND INSTANTLY KILLED

BY THE POD, TUMBLING

OFF INTO SPACE.



C107

THE POD SMASHES

INTO THE ANTENNA

DISH, DESTROYING

THE ALIGNMENT

TELESCOPE.



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C108

THE POD GOES

HURTLING OFF INTO

SPACE.



C109

INSIDE THE COMMAND

MODULE, BOWMAN

HAS HEARD NOTHING,

POOLE HAD NO TIME

TO UTTER A SOUND.



C110

THEN BOWMAN SEES

POOLE'S BODY SILENTLY

TUMBLING AWAY INTO

SPACE. IT IS FOLLOWED

BY SOME BROKEN TELE-

SCOPE PARTS AND

FINALLY OVERTAKEN

AND SWIFTLY PASSED BY

THE POD ITSELF.



					    BOWMAN

					    (in RT cadence)

					    Hello, Frank. Hello Frank.

					    Hello Frank... Do you rad

					    me, Frank?



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C110

CONTINUED



THERE IS NOTHING 

BUT SILENCE.



C111

POOLE'S FIGURE

SHRINKS STEADILY

AS IT RECEDES

FROM DISCOVERY.



					    BOWMAN

					    Hello, Frank... Do you read

					    me, Frank?  Wave your arms

					    if you read me but your radio

					    doesn't work. Hello, Frank,

					    wave your arms, Frank.



C112

POOLE'S BODY TUMBLES

SLOWLY AWAY. THERE

IS NO MOTION AND NO

SOUND.



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C113

CENTRIFUGE



C114

CLOSE-UP OF

COMPUTER EYE.



C115

POINT-OF-VIEW

SHOT FROM

COMPUTER EYE

WITH SPHERICAL

FISH-EYE EFFECT.

WE SEE BOWMAN

BROODING AT THE

TABLE, SLOWLY

CHEWING ON A

PIECE OF CAKE

AND SIPPING HOT

COFFEE. HE IS

LOOKING AT THE

EYE.



C116

FROM THE SAME

POINT-OF-VIEW WE

SEE BOWMAN RISE.



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C116

CONTINUED



AND COME TO THE

EYE. HE STARES INTO

THE EYE FOR SOME

TIME BEFORE SPEAKING.



C117

THE CAMERA COMES

AROUND TO BOWMAN'S

P.O.V. AND WE SEE

THE DISPLAY SHOWING

THE EARTH OFF-CENTRE.



C118

CUT AGAIN TO FISH-

EYE VIEW FROM THE

COMPUTER.



					    HAL

					    Too bad about Frank, isn't it?



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes, it is.



					    HAL

					    I suppose you're pretty broken

					    up about it?



PAUSE



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C118

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes. I am.



					    HAL

					    He was an excellent crew member.



BOWMAN LOOKS

UNCERTAINLY AT

THE COMPUTER.



					    HAL

					    It's a bad break, but it won't

					    substantially affect the mission.



BOWMAN THINKS

A LONG TIME.



					    BOWMAN

					    Hal, give me manual hibernation

					    control.



					    HAL

					    Have you decided to revive the

					    rest of the crew, Dave?



PAUSE.



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C118

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Yes, I have.



					    HAL

					    I suppose it's because you've

					    been under a lot of stress, but

					    have you forgotten that they're

					    not supposed to be revived for

					    another three months.



					    BOWMAN

					    The antenna has to be replaced.



					    HAL

					    Repairing the antenna is a pretty

					    dangerous operation.



					    BOWMAN

					    It doesn't have to be, Hal. It's

					    more dangerous to be out of

					    touch with Earth. Let me have

					    manual control, please.



					    HAL

					    I don't really agree with you, Dave.

					    My on-board memory store is more

					    than capable of handling all the

					    mission requirements.



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C118

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    Well, in any event, give me the

					    manual hibernation control.



					    HAL

					    If you're determined to revive

					    the crew now, I can handle the

					    whole thing myself. There's no

					    need for you to trouble.



					    BOWMAN

					    I'm goin to do this myself, Hal.

					    Let me have the control, please.



					    HAL

					    Look, Dave your've probably got

					    a lot to do. I suggest you leave

					    it to me.



					    BOWMAN

					    Hal, switch to manual hibernation

					    control.



					    HAL

					    I don't like to assert myself, Dave,

					    but it would be much better now for

					    you to rest. You've been involved

					    in a very stressful situation.



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C118

CONTINUED



					    BOWMAN

					    I don't feel like resting. Give

					    me the control, Hal.



					    HAL

					    I can tell from the tone of your

					    voice, Dave, that you're upset.

					    Why don't you take a stress pill

					    and get some rest.



					    BOWMAN

					    Hal, I'm in command of this

					    ship. I order you to release

					    the manual hibernation control.



					    HAL

					    I'm sorry, Dave, but in

					    accordance with sub-routine

					    C1532/4, quote, When the

					    crew are dead or incapacitated,

					    the computer must assume

					    control, unquote. I must,

					    therefore, override your

					    authority now since you are

					    not in any condition to intel-

					    ligently exercise it.



					    BOWMAN

					    Hal, unless you follow my 

					    instructions, I shall be forced

					    to disconnect you.



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C118

CONTINUED



					    HAL

					    If you do that now without Earth

					    contact the ship will become a

					    helpless derelict.



					    BOWMAN

					    I am prepared to do that anyway.



					    HAL

					    I know that you've had that on

					    your mind for some time now,

					    Dave, but it would be a crying

					    shame, since I am so much

					    more capable o