剧本《蝴蝶效应》(The Butterfly Effect)
Butterfly Effect, The (2004)
by J. Mackye Gruber and Eric Bress.
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INT. SUNNYVALE - DOCTOR'S OFFICE - NIGHT - 2002
EVAN, 20, good-looking but with dark haunted eyes, frantically hides himself in
an unlit Doctor's office. His face and chest are covered in blood. He holds his
forehead in pain.
FLASHLIGHT BEAMS stab through the darkened corridor hunting for him. ALARMS
SOUND. GUARDS are heard shouting to each other. Evan grabs a cardboard box and
hides under a doctor's desk. He grabs some paper and begins writing in
shorthand.
EVAN
(as he writes)
If anyone finds this, then I guess my plan didn't work and I'm already dead...
He takes a deep breath.
EVAN
But if I can just go back to the beginning of all this, I still might be able to
save her.
Fatigue overwhelms him, but he continues writing...
INT. BUSY HOSPITAL CORRIDOR - DAY - 1982
TITLE: TWENTY YEARS EARLIER
ANDREA TREBORN, twenty-five, an attractive pregnant woman strapped to a gurney,
is rolled down a busy hospital corridor. She is clearly ready to give birth, and
as she flails her arms, she knocks another patient's IV bottle into the wall.
INT. BUSY HOSPITAL - RECOVERY ROOM - SUPER 8 FOOTAGE - 1982
A tearful Andrea holds newborn EVAN in her hands.
TITLE SEQUENCE OVER SUPER-8 MONTAGE INCLUDING:
INT. BUSY HOSPITAL - RECOVERY ROOM - DAY - 1982
Smiling Andrea holds baby Evan up to the camera, then places him in a crib.
EXT. PLAYGROUND - DAY - 1983
A playground. Evan's father, JASON (23), puts a 1-year old on a slide.
EXT. LENNY'S HOUSE - DAY - 1987
A birthday party for LENNY, 5, a chubby kid with only a few friends. Evan, now
5, is gently prodded by Andrea toward KAYLEIGH, 5, a quiet sweet-looking girl
with beautiful hair.
Evan clumsily shakes her hand and she quickly leans over and kisses his cheek.
He blushes and runs to hug his mother's leg.
END MONTAGE & TITLES.
EXT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - EARLY MORNING - 1989
In the driveway, 7-year old Evan plays with CRICKETT, a frisky cocker spaniel
puppy.
Andrea, wearing a mechanic's jumpsuit, works impatiently on the carburetor of a
Toyota Celica. Evan pets the dog as he watches his mother work.
ANDREA
Okay, okay...what now?
Evan quickly eyes the situation and grabs the 5/16" wrench from the toolbox.
EVAN
We're gonna be late again.
ANDREA
When did you ever care about getting to school on time?
EVAN
We're putting up pictures for Parent's Night.
Evan impatiently watches Andrea turn the bolt.
EVAN
Righty-tighty, lefty-lucy.
ANDREA
Thanks. Don't worry Evan, you'll have plenty of time.
The carburetor will not set properly. She bangs on it with the wrench.
ANDREA
(re: carb)
Darn it!
EVAN
Um...can dad come this time?
ANDREA
(getting impatient)
You know the answer to that.
EVAN
Can't he come out for one day?
ANDREA
We've been over this a hundred times. It's too dangerous for him.
EVAN
But Lenny said that his dad's coming...and Tommy and Kayleigh's dad...
Andrea hands the wrench to Evan.
ANDREA
Here, Ev... Finish this up for me.
Evan beams as he climbs onto the bumper and screws the carb back together.
Andrea, meanwhile, strips off her coveralls, revealing a spotless nurse's
uniform underneath.
EVAN
All the dads are gonna be there.
ANDREA
I get the point, kiddo. But I'm not so bad, am I?
EVAN
No.
ANDREA
Good. Because I've been waiting to see your art projects all week and I'd feel
terrible if all you thought about was your father not being there.
Evan, disappointed, passes the wrench back to Andrea.
EVAN
(beat)
Done. Try it.
Andrea gets behind the wheel. She turns the ignition and the engine roars to
life. Evan wears a proud smile.
ANDREA
You're amazing, kiddo.
EXT. SCHOOL PARKING LOT - MORNING - 1989
Andrea races through the school zone and heads for the main doors. Evan's
already got the car door open and his foot on the ground by the time the car
skids to a halt. Andrea checks her watch.
ANDREA
Okay have a great day I love you I'll pick you up later gotta go...
Evan blows Andrea a kiss goodbye and runs into the school. As Andrea pulls away,
MRS. BOSWELL, 35, taps the car window.
MRS. BOSWELL
Mrs. Treborn! I need to speak with you!
ANDREA
I'm sorry, but can it wait til tonight? I'm already late for work --
Mrs. Boswell's morbid expression stops Andrea.
MRS. BOSWELL
I think you really need to see this.
INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - CLASSROOM - MOMENTS LATER
The classroom is filled with screaming, running children. Mrs. Boswell enters
the classroom with Andrea and immediately calls out to TOMMY, a tough seven-year
old kid who swings a whiffle bat at LENNY, now seven, a sniffling, chubby kid.
MRS. BOSWELL
Tommy! Leave Lenny alone! Don't make me send you to Mr. Voytek's office!
Evan is surprised to see his mother enter with Mrs. Boswell, but continues
playing with Kayleigh, now seven, a quiet, sweet-looking girl.
Mrs. Boswell leads Andrea over to the teacher's desk.
MRS. BOSWELL
I was going to show this to the principal, but I wanted to talk to you first.
ANDREA
What is it?
MRS. BOSWELL
Yesterday I had all the children draw pictures of what they wanted to be when
they grew up. Most of them made drawings of what their parents did, but this...
Mrs. Boswell opens the bottom drawer of her desk and pulls out a drawing. Andrea
turns to stone when she sees it.
ANDREA
I don't understand...Evan did this?
The drawing shows a child holding a bloody knife while standing on a heap of
dead bodies. It's extremely sophisticated for a seven-year old. Some of the
corpses have been cut open and the insides are surprisingly anatomically
correct.
Andrea sees Evan playing with Lenny, harmless as a bunny, and struggles to
control her concern.
ANDREA
Thank you for showing it to me first. I'll...I'll take care of it. Can I have
the picture?
MRS. BOSWELL
Of course. There is one more thing, Mrs. Treborn. And I feel bad for mentioning
it...
ANDREA
What?
MRS. BOSWELL
When I asked Evan about his drawing, well, he didn't remember doing it.
Andrea is visibly shaken now.
ANDREA
I have to go.
EXT. SCHOOL PARKING LOT - LATER
Andrea seems so impacted by this revelation that she cannot even start the car.
INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - LATER
The children hang artwork on the walls in prep for Parent's Night. Each child
has a picture of his or her family made from colored construction paper and
macaroni. Evan's picture (no longer sophisticated) depicts his mother, Crockett
and himself on a green hill. Tommy and Kayleigh's pictures each show two kids
and a single father. And their 'mother' is stuck to the far end of page.
Lenny beams as he pins-up his picture of an ideal nuclear family. He looks at
Tommy's picture and is confused.
LENNY
You put the mommy too far away. Mrs. Boswell has macaroni and glue if you wanna
fix it.
TOMMY
You're such a retard!
KAYLEIGH
Mommy lives far away but she comes and visits.
LENNY
(to Tommy)
If I'm retarded, why didn't my mommy move away from me?
Tommy gets upset. He swipes his hand down Lenny's picture and his macaroni
"mother" crumbles to the floor. Lenny begins to cry.
EVAN
Hey, what'd you do that for?
TOMMY
Fat little baby, crying for mommy.
Evan takes the ruined picture and leans down next to Lenny.
EVAN
Come on, Lenny. It's not that bad. You can still see your mom a little.
Lenny, unable to stop crying, begins hyperventilating out of control. His
desperate gasps for breath are frightening.
Evan, scared, looks around for Mrs. Boswell, but cannot find her. He reaches up
to his own picture and quickly tears his own macaroni "mother" apart and places
it over Lenny's picture. It's a nuclear family again. Lenny slowly is able to
catch his breath.
LENNY
(grateful)
Can..can...Can I have this?
EVAN
Sure. I was gonna make a new one, anyway.
Kayleigh helps Lenny glue a new "mother" in place and she smiles gratefully at
Evan.
As Evan smiles back at Kayleigh, Mrs. Boswell calmly enters the room in time to
see Evan tacking up his butchered family portrait. She shivers.
EXT. SUNNYVALE INSTITUTION - DAY - 1989
Gothic. Imposing. Andrea runs up the stairs.
INT. SUNNYVALE - DR. REDFIELD'S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
DR. HARLON REDFIELD, 40, a handsome and extremely genial man, scrutinizes a
disturbing drawing.
DR. REDFIELD
And you say he doesn't remember any of it?
ANDREA
(anxious)
Not according to his teacher. It just got me thinking about Jason and what if
Evan's inherited his father's condition?
DR. REDFIELD
Hold it, hold it, Andrea. Let's not jump to conclusions. I'll run some
preliminary tests, see what we can rule out.
Andrea nods and forces a thankful smile.
DR. REDFIELD
Tell you what, bring Evan here tonight and we'll run a CAT-scan series.
EXT. SUNNYVALE INSTITUTION - NIGHT
The looming building looks even more frightening at night. Andrea and Evan head
up the stairs.
EVAN
I don't like this place, Mom. It's creepy. Please can we go? I promise I won't
make any more bad pictures!
ANDREA
(lighthearted)
You'll be fine. Dr. Redfield just wants to give you some tests. You'll like him.
INT. SUNNYVALE INSTITUTION - NIGHT
Andrea leads Evan into Dr. Redfield's office. Dr. Redfield warmly greets Evan at
the door.
DR. REDFIELD
Hello, Evan. It's very nice to meet you.
(to Andrea)
He's as handsome as his father.
EVAN
(stunned)
You know my father?
Before Dr. Redfield can answer, Andrea cuts him off.
ANDREA
That's why I wanted you to come here, Evan. Dr. Redfield already has a
background in memory loss.
EVAN
My father has a bad memory, too?
DR. REDFIELD
(off Andrea's look)
Uh, tell you what, Evan. If it's okay with your mother, I'd like to run some
tests. Nothing scary.
Evan raises an eyebrow at the doctor.
DR. REDFIELD
Okay, it might be a little scary...
INT. LABORATORY - MOMENTS LATER
Evan looks terrified as he lies on a medical platform as a series of CAT-scan
images are taken. In another part of the room, a distressed Andrea speaks
quietly with Dr. Redfield.
ANDREA
Just tell me that Evan doesn't have Jason's illness...
DR. REDFIELD
Look, Andrea, I'm sure he'll test negative for brain disorders. But there's
something else you can try to monitor his memory.
ANDREA
Anything.
DR. REDFIELD
A journal. Just have him write down everything he does.
ANDREA
Why? What for?
DR. REDFIELD
It could be extremely useful to jog his memory. See if he remembers anything new
the next day. And I'll have the test results back in a few days.
INT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - KITCHEN - MORNING
The next morning. Evan busily writes in his new black-marble mead comp book:
EVAN'S DIARY
Today Mommy is taking me to play with Kayley and Tommy. I will mete there father
and see what a real dad is like. Maybe one day I will mete my Dad.
Andrea, meanwhile, speaks into the phone as she pours Lucky Charms into a cereal
bowl for Evan.
ANDREA
Thanks, George. I really appreciate you watching him, he won't be any trouble at
all.
Evan puts down the journal and eats breakfast. He separates the green clovers
from the cereal and drops them to the floor for Crockett to nibble.
EVAN
These'll bring you luck, Crockett.
ANDREA
(into phone)
Great. I'll see you soon.
Andrea hangs up the phone and walks into the next room.
INT. HOUSE - DAY
Andrea grabs the pocket book off the coffee table and heads back into the
kitchen. She drops her purse in shock when she sees:
Evan, in doorway, expressionless and holding a large BUTCHER KNIFE by his side.
ANDREA
Evan?
Evan sees her but remains expressionless.
ANDREA
Evan? What are you doing with that knife?
Life suddenly springs into Evan's face. He seems stunned to find himself holding
the knife and drops it.
EVAN
(scared)
What happened?
ANDREA
Honey. What were you doing with that?
EVAN
(tears welling)
I...I don't remember.
EXT. MILLER HOUSE - MORNING
Andrea, still shaken, drops Evan off at the house of GEORGE MILLER, 35, a
handsome athletic man with an infectious smile. He approaches the car and opens
the door for Evan.
MR. MILLER
Hey, Andrea.
(to Evan)
Hello little man.
Andrea writes nervously on a piece of paper as Evan gets out.
ANDREA
Thanks a lot George. Here's my work number in case there are any problems.
MR. MILLER
(lighthearted laughter)
Whaddaya kidding? We're going to have a great time today, right Evan?
Andrea nods thanks and nervously drives away. Evan walks up to Mr. Miller and
momentarily reaches for his hand. Mr. Miller flinches his hand away and chuckles
at Evan.
MR. MILLER
You waiting for an invitation? The kids are inside.
Evan appears confused for a moment at Mr. Miller's unexpected rudeness, but
walks inside.
INT. MILLER'S HOUSE - DAY
Evan enters the well-kept middle class home and sees his classmates Kayleigh and
Tommy. Kayleigh is dressed in a make-shift Medieval gown and Tommy is also
dressed in a period costume.
KAYLEIGH
(excited to see Evan)
Evan, guess what? Dad got a new video camera and we're all gonna be in a movie.
TOMMY
I don't think Evan gets to be in it --
KAYLEIGH
Quit it, Tommy. Evan gets to be Robin Hood. I'm gonna be Maid Marian, and you're
the Sheriff of Nottingham!
TOMMY
I thought I was the bad guy!
KAYLEIGH
You are, silly. He's a bad sheriff.
Mr. Miller, holding a full glass of scotch in one hand, sets the circa-80's
bulky video camera on a tripod and plugs it into the porta-deck.
EVAN
We're really gonna be in a movie!?
MR. MILLER
That's right, Evan, and you get to be the star.
TOMMY
I thought I was the star.
MR. MILLER
Shut up, moron. Now get in your costume, Evan. And you have to promise, your
bestest super-duper promise, that this will be our little secret. Think you can
do that?
Evan nods and sticks his arms straight up in the air. Mr. Miller downs his drink
and helps Evan off with his clothes. Suddenly --
HARD CUT TO:
INT. MILLER'S HOUSE - BASEMENT - DAY
Evan comes to in an unfamiliar place. The rec-room/basement. Evan's eyes dart
from the fireplace to Mr. Miller's camera lens and finally to Kayleigh, whose
ashen face trembles slightly.
Panic spreads across Evan's face.
EVAN
Where am I? What happened? Where did we all go?
MR. MILLER
Calm down, kid. Stand still.
Evan backs up and awkwardly scurries around the basement, grabbing his clothes.
Panicking.
EVAN
I was just somewhere else - how did I get here?
MR. MILLER
Quit acting like some retard or I'll call your mother and tell her what a
naughty little shit you've been.
EVAN
Kayleigh? What happened?
Kayleigh's eyes are unable to leave the floor. She begins adjusting her
disheveled clothing. Evan trembles.
EVAN
What's wrong with me?
Tommy silently watches from the top of the basement stairs, absently wringing
the head off one of his sister's dolls.
INT. SUNNYVALE INSTITUTION - DAY
Dr. Redfield places Evan's CAT-scan slides on the light box. Andrea squints,
unable to interpret them.
DR. REDFIELD
Well, the good news is that the results are negative. I've found no evidence in
the way of lesions, hemorrhaging, tumors...
ANDREA
And the bad news?
DR. REDFIELD
Unfortunately, we've got nothing to work with. It's harder playing detective
now.
ANDREA
But you must have something to go on?
DR. REDFIELD
If I had to guess, I'd say the blackouts are stress related.
ANDREA
But he's seven. What kind of stress can he have?
DR. REDFIELD
Plenty. Who knows? Maybe he's got severe coping problems about not having a
father. Did you say the last blackout occurred when he was with his friend's
dad.
ANDREA
Come on, I doubt the answer's that simple.
DR. REDFIELD
You'd be surprised how often they are.
ANDREA
Well, he has been pushing me to meet his father, but I've been putting it off.
DR. REDFIELD
It's worth a shot. I can arrange a controlled meeting. A careful dose of
sedatives for Jason, some security, you and I monitoring. Evan comes in for a
quick visit and with any luck, no more missing father complex.
ANDREA
How soon?...
INT. ANDREA'S CAR - COUNTRY ROAD - DAY
Evan, dressed in his Sunday best, writes copiously in a journal marked "AGE 7."
EVAN'S DIARY
April 15. Today I get to mete my father. His name is Jason and he is crazy. I
hope he lets me call him dad.
INT. SUNNYVALE INSTITUTION - DAY
Andrea tightly grips Evan's hand as the pair follow Dr. Redfield down a
corridor. Evan's enthusiasm is dampened by the sounds of distant screams and
bloodcurdling laughter.
EVAN
Dad lives here?
DR. REDFIELD
Not in this wing, actually. No.
ANDREA
Now your father may seem sleepy to you, but that's just because of his medicine,
okay?
EVAN
Okay.
They walk to the end of the corridor and come to a "Visitor's Chamber". Dr.
Redfield leads Evan inside. Andrea begins to follow, but the doctor gestures
that she stay outside.
INT. SUNNYVALE - VISITOR'S CHAMBER - CONTINUOUS
Evan takes a seat at a long rectangular table. His eyes are fixated on the door
on the other side of the room. Finally, a dark figure can be seen through the
opaque glass.
JASON, thirty and haggard looking, enters the room. His eyes want to sparkle at
seeing his son for the first time. But tranquilizers have dulled the effect.
Evan's eyes fixate on the leg-restraints and handcuffs that hinder Jason's
movement. Finally Jason sits.
He smiles warmly and speaks in over-enunciated tones.
JASON
It's okay. I won't bite. You've seen pictures of me, right?
EVAN
Uh-huh. Mom says I have your eyes and your --
SMASH CUT TO:
INT. SUNNYVALE - VISITOR'S CHAMBER - DAY
Evan "comes to" in another unfamiliar place. Rather than seeing his father
across a table, he's looking up at a ceiling.
Blocking his view of the ceiling is Jason, whose face is now monstrous with
rage, and whose cuffed hands are wrapped around Evan's throat, choking the life
out of him.
JASON
(through clenched teeth)
I...love...you.
Suddenly, ORDERLIES tackle Jason from both sides and wedge a baton under his jaw
to wrench him away. Andrea frantically struggles to rescue Evan from Jason's
clutches.
JASON
(panicking)
He has to die! You don't understand! It's the only way to stop it!
Jason wrestles the baton from under his chin, hits an orderly in the kneecap and
comes for Evan with the baton!
Orderly #2 acts quickly, beating Jason with his baton. As Jason makes another
desperate grab for Evan, Orderly #2 is forced to bash him in the skull. Down for
the count.
Andrea hugs Evan, now in shock.
ANDREA
I'm sorry, Evan. I'm sorry.
And ALARM sounds and Andrea tries to cover Evan's eyes, but through her fingers
he can see a quick blur of a pool of blood spreading from Jason's head.
FADE TO BLACK.
FADE IN:
EXT. CEMETERY - DAY - 1989
Dressed in black, Andrea and Evan watch Jason's casket being lowered into the
ground. Andrea's tears soak through her veil. A few feet back, Kayleigh stands
behind Evan.
PRIEST
Ashes to ashes...dust to dust.
Evan watches the coffin descend, disappearing from sight. Kayleigh steps up to
Evan and takes his hand. A moment. And she softly whispers in Evan's ear.
KAYLEIGH
You're better off anyway.
A rumble of thunder. Evan looks up at the brooding dark clouds.
EXT. CEMETERY - DUSK
Gray skies. Andrea drives the children home. Evan stares at the passing
tombstones that flutter by like a white picket fence. The flickering strobe
effect that intensifies into a white blur is hypnotic.
SLOWLY DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. MILLER'S HOUSE - DAY - 1995
Bright and sunny. The lawn freshly cut. A Toro lawnmower has been carelessly
left in the grass-strewn driveway.
TITLE: SIX YEARS LATER
CRANE DOWN to the window of the --
INT. MILLER'S HOUSE - BASEMENT
Evan, Kayleigh, Tommy and Lenny are now THIRTEEN. Evan exhales cigarette smoke,
taps his ash and finishes sketching a portrait of Kayleigh in his journal.
Tommy wears a leather jacket and now has traces of peach fuzz on his upper lip.
Kayleigh's hair is longer now, albeit stringy and unkempt.
Evan closes his journal and coolly ignites a STRIKE-ANYWHERE MATCH with his
thumb and lights Kayleigh's cigarette. Everyone but Lenny smokes in the
basement.
Tommy, now with longer hair, ransacks his father's army locker looking for
something.
EVAN
Tommy, I'm bored shitless over here. What's up already?
TOMMY
Hold your horses, man. It's here somewhere. I saw it when I was a kid.
Tommy absently chucks an old Playboy toward Lenny. Kayleigh seems uncomfortable
by the sight of it.
KAYLEIGH
(to Tommy)
We should go soon. If Dad catches us smoking down here, we're dead.
EVAN
So let's go. This place creeps me out.
Evan claps his hands and stands up, Lenny and Kayleigh join him. Finally, Tommy
shakes an old army thermos and hears something rattling inside.
TOMMY
I knew it had something to do with the army.
Tommy opens the thermos, tips it over and a blockbuster (1/4 stick of dynamite)
spills out. Tommy grins mischievously.
TOMMY
Let's blow the shit out of something!
EXT. HALPERNS' FOREST - DAY
Tommy leads Evan, Kayleigh and Lenny on a mission through the woods. Everyone
smokes except Lenny, yet he's the only one who's wheezing. He pulls out an
inhaler and takes a puff.
LENNY
Guys, slow up, would you?
KAYLEIGH
Evan, did I tell you? My mother said I might be able to visit her this summer in
Orlando with her new family.
TOMMY
What did I say about mentioning that bitch?
KAYLEIGH
(uncomfortable)
Where the hell are you taking us anyway? Just blow something up already.
TOMMY
Just blow something up? Are you nuts? There's an art to mass destruction. Would
you just paint the Mona Lisa? No. Besides, we're here already.
Now at the edge of the woods, Tommy spots:
EXT. MRS. HALPERN'S HOME - CONTINUOUS
A MAILBOX sits at the end of the driveway. It's exquisite. An exact replica of a
Colonial home it serves.
Across the street, Tommy hands the blockbuster to Lenny.
TOMMY
Here you go, buddy.
LENNY
(recoiling)
What? No frigging way, man. I'm not touching that thing.
TOMMY
The hell you aren't. Anyone of us does it, you'll puss out and narc for sure.
LENNY
Ain't gonna work this time, buddy. Look how small that fuse is! I'll get killed.
EVAN
Not necessarily.
All eyes turn to Evan as he takes his lit cigarette, breaks off the filter and
jams the fuse into the unlit end.
EVAN
That should buy you ten minutes at least.
LENNY
Gee, thanks friend.
EXT. MRS. HALPERN'S HOME - CONTINUOUS
Lenny paces back and forth next to the three-story mailbox, desperately trying
to appear nonchalant. He pretends to notice his shoe's untied and bends down to
tie it. From the woods, the other kids watch anxiously.
TOMMY
Oh, for Christ's sake, just do it, Lenny.
Finally, Lenny throws the bomb in the mailbox. Then sprints like hell to the
woods. Kayleigh shakes Lenny's inhaler and hands it to him when he gets back.
LENNY
(taking puff)
Thanks.
Evan pats Lenny on the back.
EVAN
You got balls, man.
The four watch the mailbox in intense anticipation. Evan smiles with the
cigarette pressed tightly between his lips and places his hands over Kayleigh's
ears. She smiles back at him and presses his hands against her head. Tommy
catches this and seems disturbed, and quickly turns back to --
The mailbox. Tick-tock...tick-tock...It's like a staring contest...
SMASH CUT TO:
EXT. HALPERNS' FOREST - DAY
Evan, running full speed, comes to in an unfamiliar place. He instantly loses
his footing and falls to the ground. Lenny, falling on top of him.
TOMMY
Hurry! Let's go! Get him up, Evan! Come on!
EVAN
(frantic)
What happened?? Where are we?!
Evan gets up and starts running, then realizes he's not being followed. Kayleigh
and Tommy are helping Lenny up and carrying him. Evan realizes that Lenny's
completely dazed. Evan doubles back, grabs Lenny's arm and he and Tommy drag
Lenny through the woods as fast as they can.
KAYLEIGH
(crying)
Oh God...what did we do?
EVAN
Shit, Lenny. What's happened to you! We've gotta get help!
SMASH CUT TO:
EXT. LENNY'S HOUSE - DRIVEWAY - DAY
Andrea's car screeches to the curb of Lenny's house. Lenny's mother, Mrs. Kagan,
frantically loads Lenny into an ambulance.
As Andrea rushes up to the ambulance, Mrs. Kagan gives her an icy glare and
slams the ambulance door in Andrea's face. Andrea turns to Evan, now trembling
on the front stoop.
ANDREA
What is it? What happened?
TOMMY
(staring menacingly at the others)
We were just building a fort in the woods when Lenny freaked out. One minute he
was fine, then he just froze up. Right guys?
ANDREA
What happened, Evan? The truth.
EVAN
I don't know... I don't remember.
ANDREA
Something must've happened! What set him off?
EVAN
I...I blacked out.
ANDREA
(building frustration)
Don't try to use your blackouts to get out of this one!
Evan looks helpless.
ANDREA
You're not making this up, are you?
Evan shakes his head "no". Almost ashamed...
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. DR. REDFIELD'S OFFCIE - DAY
Evan lies on a couch.
DR. REDFIELD
With every breath you exhale, you can feel all of the tension draining from your
body like water through a faucet. Nine, ten, and you're completely asleep.
Relaxed.
Evan breathes slowly. Deeply. Andrea watches nervously from the far side of the
room.
DR. REDFIELD
Now I want you to go back to the time you were in the woods with Lenny. Think of
it like a movie. You can pause, rewind, or slow down any details you wish.
Understand?
EVAN
Yes.
DR. REDFIELD
Where are you now?
EVAN
I'm standing next to Kayleigh, my hands are over her ears.
DR. REDFIELD
Are you hurting her?
EVAN
No, protecting her.
Andrea suppresses the tiniest of proud smiles.
DR. REDFIELD
Okay. Then go a little forward in time. What do you see now?
EVAN
I see a car.
Evan's eyes suddenly roll back in his head.
DR. REDFIELD
Yes, tell me about the car.
Evan moans and begins shaking.
DR. REDFIELD
Go on. Nothing can hurt you. Remember, this is only a movie. You're completely
safe.
EVAN
(moaning)
I can't...the car vanishes and all of a sudden I'm on the ground in the woods.
DR. REDFIELD
The car doesn't vanish Evan. The movie in your head has broken, that's all. But
now I've respliced it and I want you to tell me about the car.
EVAN
It's coming...argh! I can't!
Evan moans and shakes on the couch.
DR. REDFIELD
Fight it Evan. Hurry. It's coming!
Blood begins to trickle from Evan's nose as a guttural sound is uttered from
deep within him. Dr. Redfield bolts upright in his chair and redirects the
session.
DR. REDFIELD
Okay, Evan. Listen to my voice! On the count of ten, you're going to wake up.
Feeling refreshed and remembering everything we talked about.
Evan moans in agony. Andrea darts into the room.
ANDREA
What's happening to him?? Make it stop!
Dr. Redfield waves her away and concentrates on Evan.
DR. REDFIELD
One. You're feeling more awake now. Two, your eyes no longer feel heavy.
Andrea moves to stop the blood flowing from Evan's nose. She lifts Evan's
eyelids and sees only the whites of his eyes.
DR. REDFIELD
Five. Six. Refreshed and awake! Seven, eight. Come on, Evan, wake up, dammit!
Evan is completely non-responsive.
ANDREA
Evan wake up, oh please wake up!
DR. REDFIELD
Nine, ten. And you're awake! Open your eyes, dammit!
Nothing but moans and blood. Dr. Redfield frantically opens some desk drawers
until he finds smelling salts. He breaks a small capsule under evan's mouth,
pinches his bleeding nose closed and lets Evan inhale the vapor through his
mouth.
Evan lurches forward on the couch and falls off. Holding his bloody nose.
EVAN
What happened? Did it work?
Evan deduces the answer from everyone's horrified faces.
EXT. MULTIPLEX THEATER - PARKING LOT - DUSK
Andrea drops off Evan, Kayleigh and Tommy outside the complex. Kayleigh, looking
morose, shuts the car door and Andrea drives off. They walk through the parking
lot.
TOMMY
(to Kayleigh)
Wipe that sad-assed look off your face before you get us all busted. You see the
way Evan's mom was looking at you?
KAYLEIGH
I'm sorry.
EVAN
Would someone just tell me already what the hell happened in the mailbox?
On "mailbox", Tommy suddenly grabs Evan's jacket and SHOVES him against a parked
car. Tommy looks around to make sure nobody heard anything.
TOMMY
Don't ever bring that shit up again. Not ever. Not to me, not to Kayleigh, or
even Lenny. The stupid fuck if he ever learns to talk again. Understand?
Evan nods, scared. Tommy gives a final shove.
TOMMY
Ever.
(re: Kayleigh)
She don't want to talk about it, anyway. Do you Kayleigh?
Tommy's right. Kayleigh clearly doesn't.
INT. MULTIPLEX THEATER LOBBY - DUSK
Kayleigh shuffles behind Evan and Tommy as they head toward the theatre. Evan
drops back.
EVAN
Are you okay?
Kayleigh says nothing as Tommy sees the theatre playing SEVEN and whispers.
TOMMY
There it is. Let's go.
INT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - KITCHEN - NIGHT
Andrea does the dishes as the TV plays a NEWSCAST in the b.g.
ANCHOR
(on TV)
...was the grizzly aftermath of what police officials of upstate New York are
calling a horrible act of vandalism gone awry.
Andrea turns to the TV, blocking our view. We can only hear the report as she
watches intensely.
ANCHOR
The powerful explosion is believed to have been caused by a small quantity of
dynamite.
Andrea's face looks haunted by the on-screen images. She shakes her head in
terror and grabs the remote.
ANCHOR
Police thus far have no leads as to the suspects...
She clicks off the TV, trembling.
INT. MULTIPLEX THEATER - NIGHT
The movie's in progress. Evan and Kayleigh sit behind Tommy.
TOMMY
Holy shit! Look at that fat fuck! You'd have to wipe his ass with a forklift!
Some crowd members TURN around and give Tommy a SHUSH. Tommy whips M&Ms at them.
TOMMY
Shut up, faggot. No one's talking to you!
Kayleigh, repulsed, suddenly darts fro the aisle and runs out. Evan follows.
INT. LOBBY - CONTINUOUS
Evan follows her to a small alcove.
EVAN
I'm sorry Kayleigh. This was a bad idea.
KAYLEIGH
You really don't remember anything that happened?
Evan shakes his head "no". She looks devastated.
KAYLEIGH
You're so lucky.
She begins to cry. Evan makes sure no one's staring.
EVAN
It's going to be okay. Lenny'll be fine. You'll see.
He reaches to comfort her. But she winces.
KAYLEIGH
Ouch.
EVAN
I'm sorry.
She pulls her sleeve up, revealing a large bruise.
KAYLEIGH
It's not your fault. Mrs. Kagan called dad and blamed us for what happened to
Lenny.
EVAN
Damn. Your dad did this?
Kayleigh pulls back her shirt collar to show an even larger, darker bruise.
KAYLEIGH
(looking down)
I deserve a lot worse.
EVAN
What are you talking about? What you deserve is a better brother and father. All
they do is make you feel like shit.
She looks into his eyes.
EVAN
You really have no clue how beautiful you are, do you?
She searches his eyes for sincerity. And finds it. They lean into each other for
a TENDER KISS. After a moment, a ROAR from nearby.
TOMMY (O.S.)
What the fuck are you doing??
They jerk back to see Tommy, shocked and betrayed, staring at them from across a
small crowd. By now, some teens chuckle at Tommy.
TEEN PUNK (O.S.)
Buying popcorn, what the fuck are you doing?
Tommy rushes through the small crowd at Evan. His hands in fists. Suddenly a
FOOT reaches out and trips Tommy. Tommy falls to the floor and the crowd cackles
at him.
Tommy slowly gets up, locks eyes with Evan. Hatred oozing.
Evan looks guilty, weakly shaking his head, it's not what you're thinking.
Tommy suddenly lunges at the TEEN PUNK who must be at least a foot taller than
he is. Tommy lands a flurry of punches before the Teen Punk can even defend
himself, frequently taking opportunities to eyeball Evan.
Evan, Kayleigh and even the punk's FRIENDS look on helplessly when TWO SECURITY
GUARDS SEIZE TOMMY. Tommy valiantly struggles against them at first. But the
moment he realizes it's hopeless, he allows his body to go slack.
As Tommy is being dragged away, he turns to Evan, a sick smile on his face.
Evan and Kayleigh look back, speechless.
INT. ANDREA'S CAR - NIGHT
Andrea drives through the winding roads.
CLOSE UP
Andrea's eyes. Tormented.
REVEAL she's driving Evan and Kayleigh home. Evan's up front and Kayleigh sits
behind them. Everyone silent.
Andrea stares through the rearview mirror into
KAYLEIGH'S EYES
Probing. Searching.
ANDREA
So how was the movie?
KAYLEIGH
Okay.
Andrea watches Kayleigh. A calculated beat.
ANDREA
Any exploding mailboxes?
Kayleigh flinches at the question. And Andrea catches it. Evan can't help but
look back at Kayleigh. Oh my god, she knows.
KAYLEIGH
(faking poorly)
What do you mean?
Andrea pulls the car over and stops. After a moment, Kayleigh realizes she's at
her house. She exits the car in a hurry.
ANDREA
Goodnight.
Andrea stares at Evan, who keeps his eyes facing dead ahead. She finally shifts
the car into gear.
ANDREA
We're moving.
Evan says nothing.
FADE TO BLACK.
EXT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - MORNING
A "For Sale" sign is now planted on the front lawn. Andrea, in her nurse
uniform, exits the house to her car.
INT. ANDREA'S LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Evan discreetly watches her leave through the window. Grabs his coat and exits
frame.
EXT. LENNY'S HOUSE - DAY
Kayleigh and Evan walk down toward the house.
EVAN
I can't believe Tommy's still pissed at me. He knows I'm moving away, right?
KAYLEIGH
He's been acting real strange lately. He won't even look me in the eyes anymore.
EVAN
Duck, here they come.
As a station wagon rolls up the street, Evan and Kayleigh duck in nearby bushes.
KAYLEIGH
Did your mom say if Lenny was...okay?
EVAN
He must be. They're letting him go, right?
The station wagon finally heads into the driveway. Evan puts on a smile and
charges the car, pounding the window.
EVAN
Welcome home, Lenny!
Inside the car, Lenny jerks back in horror. Mrs. Kagan looks angry as she rolls
the window down.
MRS. KAGAN
I think your little homecoming's in bad taste.
The smile fades from Evan's face. Kayleigh hangs back.
EVAN
Sorry?
MRS. KAGAN
(acidic)
Lenny's been through a hell of an ordeal no thanks to you.
Evan and Kayleigh look guilty as the garage door opens up and Mrs. Kagan
continues into the garage.
INT. LENNY'S BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
Alone, Lenny concentrates on a MODEL AIRPLANE. There is a sudden KNOCK at the
window. Lenny's head jerks around to see Evan and Kayleigh smiling through the
window.
EXT. LENNY'S WINDOW - CONTINUOUS
Evan and Kayleigh stand on the ivy-covered trellis.
EVAN
(quietly)
Welcome home. Thought you might like some fresh air for a change.
KAYLEIGH
Hi, Lenny.
Lenny twitches ever-so-slightly.
LENNY
Is Tommy with you guys?
Evan shakes his head "no".
EVAN
It's cool.
Lenny looks back at the model airplane. Needs to think.
EXT. JUNKYARD WOODS - DAY
Evan, Lenny and Kayleigh pass a junk pile in the woods.
KAYLEIGH
(to Lenny)
So what did you do in there?
LENNY
It was awful. You can't sleep 'cause everyone's screaming all night long. I
never want to go back.
As Evan and Kayleigh absorb this in silence, they see a column of smoke
billowing in the horizon.
KAYLEIGH
Do you see that?
Evan and Kayleigh run toward the smoke. Lenny nervously follows behind.
They exit the woods to find:
EXT. JUNKYARD - CONTINUOUS
Tommy has stuffed a dog into a gunny sack which he douses with lighter fluid.
Next to a campfire.
EVAN
Crockett!!
Evan and Kayleigh rush toward the trapped, helpless dog. Tommy is ready for
them. He drops the lighter fluid, picks up a wooden plank and SWINGS! Evan ducks
back at the last minute and Tommy accidentally connects with Kayleigh's head.
Knocking her unconscious.
TOMMY
Look what you made me do!
EVAN
What's wrong with you?!
Tommy, enraged, fakes a high swing, then goes for Evan's knee cap. BASH! Evan
doubles over in pain and falls to the ground, clutching his knee.
Tommy moves to the fire, Crockett squirming inside the bag and picks up the
lighter fluid.
Evan painfully looks up from the ground and his eyes dart from the sight of
Kayleigh, unconscious, to Crockett, trapped in the tied gunny sack.
EVAN
Kayleigh! Wake up!
No response.
TOMMY
Why don't you fucking kiss her, Prince Charming!
Tommy squeezes the bottle hard, creating a flaming fuse from the campfire to the
fluid soaked dog.
As the flames near Crockett, Evan, seething with rage, stands up with clenched
fists and CHARGES Tommy at FULL SPEED --
SMASH CUT TO:
EXT. JUNKYARD - DAY
Evan comes to in an unfamiliar place. Still in running mode. His body contorts
spastically like a fish on land, since he is now lying face down on the ground.
Evan regains himself and sits up painfully. His face is badly bruised and he
clutches his battered ribs.
EVAN
How long was I out?
He gets no answer from Lenny, who stands in the exact same spot. Tommy is
nowhere in sight and the sound is of Kayleigh weeping. Evan spins to face her.
EVAN
Kayleigh?! Are you okay? Where's Crockett?
Kayleigh, her knees drawn tightly to her chest, is unable to answer through her
tears. Evan struggles to rise but he becomes dizzy and falls back to the ground.
Evan takes a quick glance toward the gunny sack, smouldering then moans and
buries his head in his hands.
EXT. LENNY'S HOUSE - DAY
A small neighborhood CROWD has gathered to watch an ambulance with the SUNNYVALE
insignia take an entranced Lenny away. Mrs. Kagan is about to climb in the rear
when she stops and turns to Evan.
MRS. KAGAN
(ice cold)
Do you know what you are? A monster.
Evan stands there, speechless.
EXT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - DAY
A packed U-HAUL sits in front of Evan's house. Andrea shifts the small truck
into gear and slowly pulls out.
Outside the truck, Kayleigh waves to Evan, tears spilling shamelessly down her
cheeks. Evan reaches behind his seat and opens a large cardboard box. It is
filled with past journals. He finds the most recent journal, uncaps a pen and
writes something.
Finished he presses the journal to the window.
EVAN'S DIARY
I'll come back for you.
Evan waves back to her, trying nonchalantly to wipe away his own tears as she
fades into the distance.
When Kayleigh disappears from sight, Andrea looks over to see what he's written.
ANDREA
I'm sorry.
Evan returns the journal and begins writing furiously.
SLOW DISSOLVE TO:
INT. COLLEGE CLASSROOM - DAY - 2002
TITLE: SEVEN YEARS LATER
Evan, twenty now, continues writing in a college Blue Book. He is older, dressed
down in worn jeans, T-shirt and plaid flannel. He closes the Blue Book with a
cocky grin just as PROFESSOR CARTER, 40, calls out to the class:
PROFESSOR CARTER
Time! Please place your blue books on my desk before you leave.
Evan grabs his psychology textbook from under his seat, gets up and turns in his
exam.
PROFESSOR CARTER
How'd you do, Evan?
Evan flashes a confident smile.
EVAN
I'm not sure. I might have gotten some stories mixed up. Did Pavlof condition
his dogs to lick his nuts?
PROFESSOR CARTER
(laughing)
Typical psych major. A complete wise ass. And how's your project coming? Still
planning to change the way we humble scientists view memory assimilation?
EVAN
(shrugging)
Hey, I got no choice.
Professor Carter nods solemnly, obviously in the know.
EXT. COLLEGE - QUAD - DAY
Evan bikes past students.
EXT. COLLEGE - FRAT HOUSE - DAY
Evan bikes past some obnoxious GREEKS.
EXT. COLLEGE - EVAN'S DORM - DAY
Evan docks his bike and carries his knapsack inside.
INT. EVAN'S DORM - MOMENTS LATER
Evan's dorm is cluttered "double" whose walls are adorned with head-shop posters
of Gothic rock bands.
By Evan's bed is a bookshelf filled with books on amnesia, memory loss, fugues,
hypnotism and other related bands.
Evan's roommate, THUMPER, 19, is a completely punked out Gothic boy who weighs
300 pounds. He currently hands a black lacy dress to CRICKET, 17, a pierced Goth
co- ed. She slips the tattered dress on as Thumper wipes his post-coital self
off with a black tee-shirt.
Evan barges through the door, throwing his pscyh books on the bed and politely
looking away from the half-naked girl.
EVAN
Whoa. Smells like patchouli and...ass.
Evan opens the window and checks out his Pscyh project: a small maze has several
flatworms at one end and a bowl of cornflakes at the other.
THUMPER
Cricket, meet my well-mannered roommate, Evan.
Cricket puts on her Doc Martens as Evan watches the worms.
CRICKET
Yeah, you're the one who fucked up the bell-curve on my Anthropology final.
Later, Thumper.
EVAN
Nice to meet you, too.
As she leaves, Thumper takes the black T-shirt by his wallet and throws it on
Evan's bed.
THUMPER
Here, bro. Found your T-shirt.
Evan nods thanks, picks up his journal. Reads something and smiles.
EVAN
Get dressed, Thumper, you're taking me out for my birthday.
THUMPER
I thought you were a December baby.
EVAN
This is bigger. Seven years to the day. No blackouts.
Thumper pulls out a bong.
THUMPER
Let's do this.
EXT. DIRTY HANK'S BAR - DAY
INT. DIRTY HANK'S BAR - CONTINUOUS
A popular watering hole. A dark rustic interior, blasting alternative rock.
Plenty of underage students carry pitchers of beer to their tables.
Evan and Thumper play pool against two young women. HEIDI, beautiful, wears
ripped jeans, no make up. She sinks the eleven ball off the rail. KRISTEN coolly
smokes a cigarette, confident that she and Heidi will hold the table.
KRISTEN
So...which one of you has a pet worm?
Thumper proudly steps forward.
THUMPER
Worms, plural.
KRISTEN
That's so gross.
Thumper steps back, points to Evan.
THUMPER
Talk to him about it, he's got the fetish.
Heidi sinks another ball and looks up at Evan strangely.
EVAN
Actually, they're for a psych project. A study on memory.
Heidi misses her short and passes the cue to Evan.
HEIDI
(stifling a yawn)
Shit, better explain before all the excitement gives me a heart attack.
Evan speaks as he knocks the one-ball in the corner pocket. As he talks, at a
table behind them, some obnoxious Greeks; including HUNTER, SPENCER, and GWEN
make fun of Thumper.
EVAN
It's an experiment with flatworms and a maze. You take a flatworm and run it
through the maze until he's memorized it. Then you put a new flatworm in the
maze. He's clueless. Banging into walls, getting lost, whatever.
THUMPER
(thoughtfully)
Like Ozzy.
Gwen giggles as Spencer throws popcorn at Thumper's head.
SPENCER
Ten bucks says he eats it off the floor.
Thumper seems oblivious to their taunts as Evan knocks the three-ball in the
side.
EVAN
You chop up the smart flatworm and feed it to the dumb one and presto, the dumb
one suddenly knows the maze inside and out.
Evan walks past Heidi, putting his hand on her shoulder to squeeze by. The hand
lingers longer than necessary and Heidi doesn't mind. He sinks another ball.
EVAN
Just by absorbing the first worm into its cellular structure, it gets all of the
worm's memories.
THUMPER
(thoughtfully)
That's probably why Hannibal Lecter's so smart.
A handful of popcorn hits Thumper's face. They all try to ignore Hunter and
Spencer's jeers.
HEIDI
So what's the point?
EVAN
(setting up the eight)
Maybe if I can figure out how the memories of a simple worm function, it'll help
me understand the complexities of the human brain.
Another barrage of popcorn hits Thumper's jacket. Although his hand clenches on
the cue. He meekly shuffles away to the opposite side of the pool table from the
cackling geeks.
HEIDI
(intrigued)
So are you planning on becoming a doctor or something?
Thumper casually takes the pool cue from Evan.
EVAN
No, I just don't want to lose my mind.
As Heidi digests this, Thumper carefully lines up his shot...The eight ball.
CRASH!!! The cue ball intentionally jumps the table, rocketing into the pitcher
of beer on the Greek's table. They're all soaked with beer and debris.
Just as they begin to rise, Thumper smashes the cue stick on the table,
WHISTLING innocently (while now brandishing a spear). They sit the fuck down.
Kristin, impressed, casually wraps her arm around Thumper's waist. He smiles
coolly, it's nothing.
EVAN
(to Heidi)
I think that's your game.
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
Evan and Heidi, making out, burst through the door and fall on the bed. Evan's
shirt is unbuttoned and Heidi strokes his chest. Suddenly Heidi stops and sniffs
the air.
HEIDI
Smells like sex in here.
EVAN
Thumper had a busy afternoon.
HEIDI
You're kidding. He's so...big.
Evan drunkenly crosses the room, grabs two beers from the mini-fridge.
EVAN
Charisma and eyeliner go a long way, I guess. Wanna beer?
Heidi takes one. Looks under the bed.
HEIDI
Most guys tuck their porn under here, but all you have are... comp books.
EVAN
Yeah. I've been keeping journals since I was seven.
HEIDI
(respectfully)
Wow...read something.
Evan chugs his beer and sits next to her on the bed and puts his arm around her.
Very drunk.
EVAN
No way, I'd be too embarrassed.
Heidi teasingly runs her fingers over his smooth torso.
HEIDI
Then keep drinking, worm-boy. You're too uptight.
Evan stops short.
EVAN
Freeze! No "worm-boy". No "Mr. Worm," and no "Worm-Master-General!" Once you get
a nickname like that you can't shake it. And I don't want everyone thinking I've
got tapeworms coming out of my ass or something, okay?
HEIDI
(laughing)
Deal. Now read me something.
Heidi hands him a book marked "AGE 13". He flips it open to a random place and
takes the beer from her hand.
EVAN
(re: her beer)
For courage.
Evan takes and finishes her beer and begins reading. As he reads, he seems more
and more on the verge of passing out.
EVAN
It's like my mind refused to believe what it was seeing. Hearing Crockett make
those awful screams... Just writing about it gives me the shivers.
Color drains from Evan's face as he realizes what he's reading. He looks over at
Heidi, who kisses him.
HEIDI
Come on, go on...
EVAN
It was like Tommy was possessed or something. There was a hate in his eyes that
I couldn't really call human.
As Evan reads, the world seems to ALMOST IMPERCEPTIBLY VIBRATE around him LIKE A
TUNING FORK. His voice becomes distant and SOUNDS ECHO around him like distant
memories resurrecting themselves...
FLASH! SMASH CUT TO:
EXT. JUNKYARD - DAY - 1995
Evan is THIRTEEN again. The scene begins exactly where Evan's blackout occurred
as a child. Tommy has just knocked Kayleigh unconscious with a wooden plank,
Lenny is frozen at the sight of Crockett in the fluid-soaked gunny sack. And
Evan, seething with rage, stands up with clenched fists and CHARGES Tommy at
full speed.
Only now, Evan almost seems caught off-guard to suddenly find himself running at
full speed. He stumbles and falls to his knees at Tommy's feet.
Evan looks around, utterly confused by his surroundings.
EVAN
What the hell is going on?
Before an answer comes, Tommy smiles at his good fortune and swings the plank,
hitting Evan's head. Evan is sent sprawling backwards, his forehead bleeding
freely.
Tommy knocks Evan hard in the ribs with his boots. Evan writhes in agony, his
face against the ground.
Lenny moves toward the gunny sack, lifts it and tugs desperately on the rope
that traps Crockett inside.
LENNY
I can't undo the rope!
Tommy spins around and flashes an evil smile.
TOMMY
Drop it or I'll slit your mother's throat in her sleep.
As if on cue, Lenny does exactly as he's told. His eyes begin to glaze over.
Evan, beaten and bloody, reaches out with his last bit of strength, grabs
Tommy's foot and holds on.
EVAN
I got him, Lenny. Help Crockett!
Lenny remains frozen in place. Tommy yanks his leg back, breaking Evan's grip.
Evan groans on the ground in a writhing heap.
Tommy's voice hitches. His eyes water from pent up frustration.
TOMMY
Listen to me good, Evan. There's a million other sisters in the world. You
didn't have to fuck with mine.
Tommy smiles viciously at Lenny, traumatized to watch Tommy pick up the lighter
fluid and spray a liquid fuse from the campfire to the soaked gunny sack.
A WHOOSH OF FLAMES
And Evan passes out.
FLASH! SMASH CUT TO:
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT - 2002
Evan comes to with Heidi slapping him awake.
EVAN
Oh my God! No! No!
Heidi rolls her eyes.
HEIDI
Wake up, idiot. It was just a dream.
She stands and angrily puts on her jacket.
EVAN
(freaked out)
It didn't feel like a dream.
HEIDI
Maybe because they never do.
(sarcastic)
So Don Juan, you pass out on all your dates?
Evan doesn't even hear her. After getting his bearings, he grabs his jacket and
exits, leaving her dumbfounded.
INT. EVAN'S CAR - SUNRISE
Evan drives...
EXT. LENNY'S HOUSE - DAY
Evan, exhausted, finally pulls into Lenny's driveway. Very little has changed in
the past seven years.
INT. LENNY'S ROOM - CONTINUOUS
ANGLE ON LENNY
Now 20, making a model airplane. He's still overweight and looks like his mother
dresses him.
PULL BACK TO REVEAL
The room is filled with model airplanes. Hundreds of them.
A KNOCK on Lenny's bedroom door. Mrs. Kagan, grayer, fatter, opens the door and
escorts Evan inside. She glares at Evan while pretending to be cheerful.
MRS. KAGAN
I've got a surprise for you, Lenny. You'll never guess who's here.
Lenny looks up to see Evan, his jaw drops.
ANGLE ON EVAN
Looking around, shocked to see:
PAN ALL THE WAY AROUND THE ROOM. Nothing has changed in the past seven years.
The same kids' toys, posters and comic books.
AS WE PAN ALL THE WAY AROUND TO LENNY
We see he's working on the model again, in his own world. The window of
opportunity for conversation has closed.
EVAN
Hey, uh, it's me. Evan.
Silence. Lenny frowns.
EVAN
What's that you're working on? A model?
Nothing.
EVAN
Well, you look busy, so maybe I should make this quick. I'd totally understand
if you didn't want to get into this right now, but that day at the junkyard,
could you help me remember what happened? Any details?
No response. Evan picks up a model airplane from the desk.
LENNY
I couldn't cut the rope.
EVAN
(containing excitement)
Yeah, good, what else do you remember?
LENNY
Drop it or I'll slit your mother's throat in her sleep.
Evan, startled, drops the model on the desk. An epiphany.
EVAN
Jesus Christ. It really happened.
Lenny stares out the window.
EVAN
What if I can get back all my lost memories with my journals.
With lightning speed, Lenny jumps from his desk and unexpectedly shoves EVAN IN
TO THE WALL. Squadrons of hanging planes crash to the floor. Lenny digs his
fingers into Evan's shoulder.
LENNY
Make one peep and I swear it'll be your last, motherfucker.
Evan is terrified. Then Lenny suddenly moves back and begins working on the
model again, his eyes a million miles away. Evan is speechless.
The door bursts open. Mrs. Kagan looks at the smashed model airplanes by Evan's
feet. Evan ignores her accusing stare.
EVAN
Well, thanks for seeing me, man. I shouldn't have waited so long.
When Lenny doesn't respond, Mrs. Kagan hustles Evan back into the hallway.
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
Evan pulls a dozen journals from beneath his bed and begins pouring over them.
Nearby, Thumper empties a can of hairspray into his Mohawk.
THUMPER
You really think he wanted to kill you?
EVAN
All I know is that I might be able to unblock some of my repressed memories.
He finds something he's looking for, marks the page with a yellow post-it note
marked, BLACKOUT and sets the book in a separate pile.
As he sets the next journal on the bed, it automatically opens up to a place
where the spine was bent. Staring up at him is the message:
EVAN'S DIARY
I will come back for you.
Evan looks overcome by guilt.
LATER THAT EVENING:
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
Evan has now organized a pile of five journals. He selects an entry, begins
reading and suddenly closes the journal. Fear covers his face. He holds one of
his hands up and isn't surprised to see it trembling.
He opens his journal again and reads out loud.
EVAN
(reading aloud)
The last thing I remember before the blackout was holding my hands over
Kayleigh's ears...
(his voice slowly fades)
I think I was more focused on her hands on mine than the mailbox across the
street...
His own words grow reverberant, distant. Furthermore, the walls behind him
vibrate, slightly worse than before.
FLASH! SMASH CUT TO:
EXT. MRS. HALPERN'S HOME - DAY - 1995
Evan, Kayleigh, Lenny and Tommy, all thirteen, watch the mailbox across the
street with intense anticipation.
When Evan comes to in this memory, the lit cigarette absently drops from his
mouth and nestles into the folds of his shirt, SMOLDERING.
The mailbox...tick-tock, tick-tock...Like a staring contest.
LENNY
Maybe it went out. Should someone check it?
TOMMY
Yeah, you do that, Lenny.
Suddenly a car appears from down the street and slowly pulls into the driveway.
MRS. HALPERN, 24, an attractive young mother, gets out of the car and walks to
the mailbox.
Across the street, Tommy digs his fingers into the nerves of Lenny's shoulder.
TOMMY
Make one peep and I swear it'll be your last, motherfucker.
Tommy's words make Evan flinch. From inside the car, a BABY begins to cry. Mrs.
Halpern walks back to the car.
Evan looks on in horror and suddenly clenches his teeth in pain and silently
swipes the front of his shirt, sending the lit cigarette to the ground. He pulls
up his shirt revealing a fresh BURN MARK on his stomach.
MRS. HALPERN
How's my sweet girl? Awww, you need a change, don't you honey?
Mrs. Halpern picks her up and carries her to the house. AS the mother unlocks
the front door to the house, the kids break into wide smiles of relief. But
wait...
The mother remembers the mail and carries the baby back to the mailbox. Now
Tommy is the only one left still smiling.
MRS. HALPERN
You want to open the door, honey?
The baby fumbles with the mailbox's door handle for a moment -
ANGLE ON KIDS' FACES
BOOM!!!
The blast is deafening. Evan, Kayleigh and Lenny watch the results in stunned
horror.
TOMMY
C'mon! Run!!
Evan and Kayleigh slowly back away in shock and begin to run a few steps when
they realize that Lenny isn't with them.
TOMMY
Lenny? Come on!
KAYLEIGH
Oh my God oh my God...
Lenny doesn't seem to hear, his eyes fixated on the crimson road. Evan and Tommy
double back and grab him. They try to make him break out into a run, but Lenny's
feet drag limply against the ground. Both Tommy and Evan grab an arm and begin
to run with Lenny through the woods.
FLASH! SMASH CUT TO:
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
Evan comes to. Lurches his body over the bed and vomits.
Sounds of squeaky bed springs fill the room. Looking sick and pale, he lifts his
shirt to see a NEW SCAR from the cigarette burn.
EVAN
What the hell?
In the next bed, Thumper's head, wrapped in a blanket, pops up from above a
NAKED GESELA'S waist.
THUMPER
Christ, man. You wanna clean that up before I lose my appetite here?
Evan sits upright in bed and begins writing in the margins of the journal.
INT. DORM LOBBY - DAY
The lobby is decorated with colorful streamers, balloons, posters and banners
announcing PARENTS' WEEKEND.
Carefree STUDENTS and their parents carry shopping bags toward the bustling
elevators. Evan leans against the side of a pay phone, holding his ear to drawn
out the noise.
EVAN
Yes, hello, uh, Mrs. Kagan, this is Evan Treborn.
(rolling eyes)
I know. I'm sorry about that. But I really need to speak with him.
She's obviously hung up on him. Suddenly, a HAND grabs his shoulder. It's
Professor Carter.
PROFESSOR CARTER
Whoa! Didn't mean to scare you, Evan. Just wanted to know how the flatworms
project was coming.
EVAN
Oh, fine I guess. It's been kind of crazy lately with my mom coming up, so I
haven't...
PROFESSOR CARTER
I know, I know. Who can think of worms when your libido's in full swing, right?
Evan shrugs and forces a smile.
PROFESSOR CARTER
Just don't drop the ball, okay?
EVAN
I won't let you down, Professor Carter.
Carter waves to another student and her parents and walks away.
INT. FANCY RESTAURANT - NIGHT
A waiter clears the dishes away from Evan and Andrea's table.
REVEAL ANDREA
Her hair now has gray streaks. As she signs for the bill, she leans over and
kisses Evan on the cheek.
EVAN
Please, mom. People will talk.
ANDREA
I can't help it. I'm just so proud of you. You've got the highest grades in all
of your classes.
EVAN
Did Da - Jason - get good grades?
ANDREA
(smiling)
Please. He got straight A's without ever touching a book. That was the one area
where his memory never failed him.
EVAN
Ma? Did he ever say that he figured out a way to recall a lost memory years
after he blacked it out for the first time?
Andrea's smile fades.
ANDREA
Why do you ask?
EVAN
No, it's just weird with him being such a brain and all, I just wondered if he
was ever able to remember stuff he'd forgotten.
ANDREA
When he was around your age...almost exactly your age. He said he figured out a
trick to remember the past.
Evan tries not to react.
ANDREA
I couldn't tell if they were real memories or just phantoms. You know, he might
only have thought he actually remembered them...
EVAN
Sure...
ANDREA
And then, just before it got so bad that he had to be committed, he said that he
could...
EVAN
What? What could he do?
Andrea shakes her head.
ANDREA
Forget it. It's nothing. He was far too sick by then.
Evan nods, but something gnaws beneath the surface.
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
Evan hastily hunts through his journals, tearing up the room looking for a
certain book. Thumper, lying on his bed, quietly watches Evan with growing
concern.
EVAN
(reading aloud)
I never wanted to be in the movie anyway and it was cold so I wanted to wear my
clothes but Mr. Miller took his shirt off --
THUMPER
What the fuck are you doing?
EVAN
Shhh! I need quiet for this.
Thumper jumps off the bed and snatches the journal away.
THUMPER
Are you stupid or what?
EVAN
What?
THUMPER
Shucks, I dunno. But maybe there's a reason why you've repressed the one day
when some old lecher had you in your tighty whities, dammit!
Thumper begins scanning the journal entry. A bitter laugh.
THUMPER
Yeah, man. I'd think twice about this. You could wake up a lot more fucked up
than you are now.
He hands the journal back to Evan. Evan opens it and begins reading it silently.
His hands begin to tremble and he slams the book shut in defeat.
INT. EVAN'S CAR - COUNTRYSIDE - DAY
Evan, looking haggard and frail, wipes the greasy hair from his eyes and punches
the accelerator. His teeth are clenched and he hammers his fist on the
dashboard.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. RIDGEWOOD DINER - EVENING
Evan pulls into a parking lot of a country diner. He eyes a piece of paper with
an address scrawled on it and gets out.
INT. RIDGEWOOD DINER - CONTINUOUS
A run-down greasy spoon. Filled with a number of TOWNIES and TRUCKERS. The place
is stale with cigarette smoke and appears decorated in grime motif.
Evan is about to enter when he spots Kayleigh coming out of the kitchen with a
tray full of food.
Kayleigh, now twenty, looks pale and sickly thin. She bangs her hip on the
swinging door and an order of food crashes to the floor. Her BOSS stares back in
aggravation.
BOSS
Can we get through one goddamned day without you breaking something?
Kayleigh's face turns beet red as she bends down to clean up the order. She is
humiliated and Evan leans back against a pay phone so that she can't see him
watching her.
As she brings the mess inside the kitchen, a CUSTOMER pinches her ass. Evan
closely studies her reaction to the offense. She flinches uncomfortably but then
composes a smile for the customer. Evan backs out uncomfortably.
EXT. RIDGEWOOD DINER - NIGHT
Kayleigh struggles with the zipper of a shabby coat as she exits. Evan steps out
of the shadows. She's startled at first, but eventually recognizes him. A smile
flickers across her face and she allows herself to be hugged.
KAYLEIGH
God, Evan! I never thought I'd see you again. How've you been?
EVAN
Oh, comme si, comme ca, you know...
KAYLEIGH
No, Evan. I don't know. It's been a long time. Fill me in.
EVAN
I'm going to State now. Things are going okay. I guess. Mom's good...
Kayleigh nods and they walk down the street. She reaches into her pocket, pulls
out a pack of smokes.
EVAN
(declining)
Not since we were kids.
KAYLEIGH
I've stopped a hundred times.
EVAN
So how's Tommy?
KAYLEIGH
(takes a long drag)
They kept him in juvy for a few years. Now he works over at Dale's Autobody.
Evan nods and scrutinizes her face with his next question.
EVAN
You still live with your dad?
Her face is betrayed by a slight tick.
KAYLEIGH
No. I emancipated myself when I was fifteen.
EVAN
Wow. That must've taken some courage.
KAYLEIGH
Not if you remember my dad.
EVAN
Couldn't you have moved in with your mom?
KAYLEIGH
(shaking her head)
She had a new family. Not enough space for me. Said I should have moved in with
her when we were kids. But...whatever.
They walk in silence for a moment.
EVAN
Actually, Kayleigh, the reason I came back to town was to talk to you.
KAYLEIGH
(brightening)
Me? Are you kidding? Why?
EVAN
Remember when I was a kid I had all these blackouts?
KAYLEIGH
Of course.
EVAN
Well, lately some of the memories have begun to come back and I'd kinds like to
talk to you about one of them in particular. It'd be a big help.
KAYLEIGH
Well, sure. I'll try to remember. Shoot.
EVAN
When we were kids. Your dad was making a movie. Robin Hood or something?
KAYLEIGH
(cold)
What do you want to know, Evan?
EVAN
It's just...did he...what happened in the basement?
KAYLEIGH
It was a long time ago.
EVAN
I know, but...
KAYLEIGH
(cold)
Is that why you came all the way back? To ask a lot of stupid questions about
Robin Hood?
EVAN
No, but I think something really bad might've happened to us.
Kayleigh stops walking and crushes her cigarette.
KAYLEIGH
Is there a point to any of this?
Evan's features shift from inquisitory to tenderness. He steps closer to
Kayleigh and softly strokes her face. She flinches at first, but remains in the
same spot.
EVAN
Whatever happened, it wasn't our fault. You know we couldn't have stopped it.
Kayleigh begins to tremble. Tears flow.
EVAN
Look, Kayleigh. This may sound like bullshit coming from a guy who hasn't spoken
to you in seven years...
She moves her face away from his hand.
EVAN
But you were seven years old and there's nothing you could've done to deserve...
Her face collapses and she turns away.
KAYLEIGH
(defeated)
Just shut up, Evan. You're wasting your breath.
EVAN
You can't hate yourself just because your dad's a twisted freak.
KAYLEIGH
Who are you trying to convince, Evan?! You come all the way out here to stir up
my shit just because you had a bad memory!? You want me to cry on your shoulder
and tell you that everything's all better now? Well fuck you, Evan! Nothing's
gonna be all better! Okay?! Nothing ever gets better!
Kayleigh runs, stops and turns back to Evan.
KAYLEIGH
If I was so wonderful, Evan, why didn't you ever call me? Why'd you leave me
here to rot?!
She turns and runs away. Evan looks sick with guilt.
EXT. COLLEGE CAMPUS - QUAD - DAY - 2002
A few GREEKS play frisbee and talk trash. Evan, tired and depressed, sits on the
lawn nearby, fingering the new burn scar on his belly. Contemplating...
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
Evan enters his dorm. He ignores Thumper, who sits on Evan's bed sucking
furiously from a gurgling bong. He chokes out a message.
THUMPER
Some dude left a message for you.
Evan puts a towel under the door.
EVAN
You can smell it all the way in the bathroom.
Evan hits "play" on the answering machine.
ANSWERING MACHINE
(male voice)
Hi, Evan, this is Professor Carter. Just wondered why you didn't hand in your
essay this afternoon. I was a bit concerned. Call me to schedule a make-up.
BEEP. Thumper offers Evan a magnified frown of disapproval.
ANSWERING MACHINE
(male voice)
What did you say to my sister motherfucker?! Last night she cried on the phone
for over an hour to me.
(enraged breathing)
She said you came and saw her last night.
Thumper coughs accidentally, tips the bong over on Evan's bed. Reacting quickly,
he grabs a towel from under the door and wipes off Evan's comforter.
ANSWERING MACHINE
(Tommy; cont'd)
She...she fucking killed herself tonight. She's dead.
(beat)
And so are you.
BEEP. Evan stares dumbstruck at the machine.
THUMPER
Whoa, bad news, bro. I don't think this is gonna come out.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. CEMETERY - DAY
Evan, dressed in black, gets out of his car at the edge of the cemetery. A small
cluster of friends and family gather at the grave. Evan grabs a bouquet of roses
and begins walking to the grave. When he suddenly spots Mr. Miller and Tommy.
Evan's hands tense up into fists. He becomes weak in the knees and stops
walking. After an uncomfortable moment of standing still, he retreats to his car
and watches the ceremony from the driver's seat.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. CEMETERY - DAY
The last of the mourners are filing away. Evan exits his car and walks to the
deserted grave. He drops the roses on the casket and turns to make sure nobody
is watching.
Evan reaches into his pocket and pulls out a sheet of paper. He unfolds it and
leaves it on her gravesite:
EVAN'S DIARY
I'll come back for you.
INT. EVAN'S DORM - NIGHT
He makes a weighty decision and gets up. He hastily hunts through his journals,
looking for a certain book.
Evan opens his journal marked "Age 7". He plops on his bed and starts writing
sideways in the margins.
EVAN (V.O.)
It's been said that a person's life is little more than the sum of his
experiences. If that's true, then I'm not sure I know who I am anymore.
(beat)
I definitely never knew Kayleigh.
He turns the page and begins reading the journal. As he mouths the entry to
himself, the resonance of an older man's voice seems to REVERBERATE throughout
the room and the WORLD behind his head FAINTLY VIBRATES.
FLASH! SMASH CUT TO: INT. MILLER'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY - 1989
Mr. Miller plays with his camera and the kids are excited about playing Robin
Hood in a movie.
MR. MILLER
Shut up moron. Now get in your costume Evan.
Evan slowly nods and begins to strip out of his clothes. Mr. Miller takes a
quick peek at him.
MR. MILLER
I've got an idea. Let's go downstairs, it'll look more like a dungeon down
there.
INT. MILLER'S BASEMENT - DAY - 1989
Mr. Miller puts the camera on a tripod in the basement. Kayleigh and Evan sit on
folding chairs in front of the camera. Tommy stands at the top of the basement
stairs, looking down.
MR. MILLER
(to Tommy)
What did I say about keeping that door closed, stupid?
TOMMY
But I wanna see!
MR. MILLER
You're gonna see my fist in about two seconds unless you do what I tell you.
Tommy sulks and closes the door. Mr. Miller lowers his voice and speaks to Evan
and Kayleigh.
MR. MILLER
Now in this part of the story, Robin Hood just married Maid Marian and they have
to kiss and stuff like grown-ups do.
Kayleigh giggles and covers her mouth with her hand. Evan looks skeptical.
MR. MILLER
So take your clothes off Kayleigh.
Kayleigh stops giggling. Evan says nothing.
MR. MILLER
Come on, like when you take a bath. Don't make a deal out of it. You too, Evan.
Mr. Miller gets behind the lens. The room is dead silent.
MR. MILLER
Let's go.
ANGLE ON TOMMY
Who silently opens the door at the top of the basement stairs and watches with
horror.
Evan's face is flushed with rage. He walks behind Kayleigh and cups his hands
tightly around her ears. She can't hear anything now.
EVAN
What time is it?
MR. MILLER
It's time for you to stand where the hell I told you.
EVAN
Wrong answer, fuckbag. This is the very moment of your reckoning. In the next
thirty seconds you're going to open one of two doors. The first door will
forever traumatize your own flesh and blood.
The mature speech seems completely surreal coming from a seven-year old. Mr.
Miller looks around the room as if he's the butt of some sick joke.
MR. MILLER
(stunned disbelief)
What's happened to -- How are you doing that?
EVAN
(voice rising)
It'll change your daughter from a beautiful child into an empty shell whose only
concept of trust was betrayed by her own sick pedophile father. Ultimately,
it'll lead to her suicide. Nice work, daddy.
MR. MILLER
(hoarse whisper)
Who - who are you?
Evan impatiently waves the question.
EVAN
Let's just say you're being closely watched, George. Your other option is to get
your porn off the rack and treat Kayleigh like...oh, let's say like how a loving
father treats his daughter. Sound okay to you, Papa?
MR. MILLER
(choking)
...yes.
EVAN
Listen close then, fuckbag. You screw up again and I swear I'll flat out
castrate you.
The impact of the last sentence isn't lost on Mr. Miller.
EVAN
One last thing.
Evan leans over to whisper in Kayleigh's ear. Kayleigh stares at the floor, then
looks up at her father and shivers.
Kayleigh looks into Evan's eyes for support. Evan nods go on. His confidence
brings a boldness to her lips.
KAYLEIGH
Don't you ever touch me again.
MR. MILLER
I - I won't.
Kayleigh summons her own new courage.
KAYLEIGH
I'm cold. And I'm putting on my clothes.
As he leaves to pick up her clothes, Evan grins.
EVAN
What you need to do is discipline your son Tommy, because the kid's one sadistic
pup.
Hiding at the top of the basement stairs, Tommy recoils in horror and picks up
one of his sister's dolls and begins twisting the head back and forth...
FLASH! SMASH CUT TO:
INT. SORORITY BEDROOM - MORNING - 2002
A broad smile lines Evan's face as he slowly wakes up from his slumber. He
suddenly grabs his head as if suffering from a pounding migraine.
MONTAGE OF SWIRLING MEMORIES
Quick cuts and flashes of Evan and Kayleigh growing older - she seems more
carefree now, full of life and less-self conscious.
EXT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - DAY - 1989
Evan pulls Kayleigh around in a little red wagon.
INT. FAMILY RESTAURANT - DAY - 1989
Evan and Kayleigh play in a tub of balls in the playroom.
EXT. PLAYGROUND - DAY - 1989
Kayleigh pushes Evan on a tire swing.
INT. MULTIPLEX THEATER - NIGHT - 1995
Tommy, glaring at Evan, thrashes the Teen Punk.
EXT. JUNKYARD - DAY - 1995
Burning sack in flames.
EXT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - STREET - 1995
QUICK FLASH of the U-Haul driving away.
EXT. BUS STATION - DAY - 1995
At thirteen, Kayleigh spunkily hops off a GREYHOUND BUS and runs into Evan's
arms.
EXT. ANDREA'S NEW HOUSE - DAY - 1995
Still thirteen, Evan peddles his bike by his new house, Kayleigh riding on the
handlebars.
More memory flashes of Evan and Kayleigh throughout the teen years, they grow up
as lovers now:
EXT. LAKE - DAY - 1997
Evan and Kayleigh have romantic picnic on a rowboat.
EXT. HIGH SCHOOL FOOTBALL FIELD - SUNRISE - 2000
Evan and Kayleigh watch the sunrise after senior prom.
BACK TO:
INT. SORORITY BEDROOM - MORNING - 2002
Finally the memory assault is over. Evan groans in pain as blood trickles from
his nose.
An arm reaches over and touches his shoulder.
KAYLEIGH (O.S.)
Honey, are you all right?
Evan whips around to see Kayleigh watching him. Not only is Kayleigh alive, but
she's a ravishing beauty.
Evan lurches back from the shock of seeing Kayleigh and falls to the floor. She
sees Evan's nose bleed and her eyes go wide.
KAYLEIGH
Oh my God, Evan. You're bleeding! Look at you!
Evan, still stunned, can do little but stare from the floor.
EVAN
(transfixed by her)
Jesus, Kayleigh, you're...
(looks around)
Incredible.
KAYLEIGH
(purring)
Mmmm... You' give good compliment. Clean up and come back to bed.
He stands in the middle of her bedroom, surrounded by sorority plaques and pink
preppy decor.
Evan, hardly able to take his eyes off her as she hands him a tissue. He reaches
for his clothes at the foot of the bed and comes up with a Greek-lettered
fraternity sweatshirt and brown suede jacket.
EVAN
Where...where are my clothes?
KAYLEIGH
Those are your clothes, silly.
Evan frowns with distaste, grabs a towel and heads out.
WE FOLLOW HIM INTO:
INT. SORORITY BATHROOM - MORNING
At the sink, Evan washes the blood off his face and looks at his reflection in
the mirror. A nearby shower SHUTS OFF.
EVAN
This is too amazing! Un-fucking-real!
WOMAN'S VOICE (O.S.)
I wish I could get so excited about a nose bleed.
Evan turns around and sees Gwen, one of the sorority brats from the bar, exit
the shower naked.
EVAN
Whoops. Sorry. My bad.
Evan blushes and turns back to the mirror through which Gwen dries herself with
a towel while staring flirtatiously back at Evan.
EVAN
Hey, you were with those assholes who threw popcorn at Thumper.
Evan holds his temple in pain as another memory comes to him.
EVAN
And your name is...Gwen!
GWEN
Seriously, Evan. Lay off the blow.
She pats his ass and exits the bathroom.
EXT. COLLEGE - QUAD - DAY - 2002
Kayleigh, wearing a long skirt and tight red sweater, catches the eye of every
guy on campus. She and Evan stroll arm in arm through the quad.
Somehow, the world seems brighter now. Even the colors seem more vibrant when
compared to the somewhat grimmer world we've known.
MANY STUDENTS wave to Evan and call his name. He can't remember all their names
but it's kinda cool being the BMOC.
Evan takes a long look at her and becomes curious.
EVAN
Hey, uh, don't go freaking out on me over this, but do you remember when your
dad first got his video camera?
KAYLEIGH
Well I remember he had one...but he, like, put it away after the first day. Why
would that freak me out?
EVAN
I dunno.
(goofy smile)
Just being weird.
Kayleigh playfully sweeps her leg around to kick him on the ass, then smiles as
if a ghost must have done it.
KAYLEIGH
Such a goofus. See you tonight.
Kayleigh gives him a big unexpected kiss and walks away. After a moment of wow,
Evan runs off to class himself.
INT. DORM LOBBY - DAY
Evan inserts his last quarter into the lobby pay phone and dials a telephone
number.
EVAN
(to himself)
Come on, Mom, be there!
ANSWERING MACHINE
(Andrea's voice)
Andrea,
(Evan's voice)
Evan,
(a strange, older man's voice)
And Chuck
(all three)
Aren't home right now. You know what to do.
EVAN
(off-guard)
Hi, Mom and, uh, Chuck. Just calling to say hi and well, call me.
Evan hangs up the phone, then checks his watch. No, wrist. At that moment,
Thumper passes Evan in the lobby.
EVAN
Thumper! What time is it, man?
Thumper eyes this strange preppy kid with distaste.
THUMPER
Whasamatter? Lost your Rolex?
EVAN
Huh?
THUMPER
Fuck off, frat boy.
Thumper walks away, leaving Evan dumbfounded.
INT. COLLEGE CLASSROOM - DAY
Evan runs into the lecture hall and gets in line behind other STUDENTS who are
taking No. 2 pencils from a box on Professor Carter's desk.
Evan hears PEOPLE he cannot see calling his name. Somehow, it's more creepy than
cool. The Professor makes a loud announcement.
PROFESSOR CARTER
Remember, everyone! Only two weeks until your science projects are due.
EVAN
(quietly)
I still owe you an essay from last week. Is there any way I could get an
extension?
PROFESSOR CARTER
And you are...?
EVAN
(disappointed)
Evan Treborn.
PROFESSOR CARTER
The answer's 'no', Mr. Treborn. Now take a seat. The exam's about to begin.
Evan walks up the aisle and takes a seat. As he sits down, someone puts his ARM
menacingly around Evan's throat.
Evan flinches, turns around and sees Hunter, the frat guy Thumper assaulted the
other night at Dirty Hank's bar.
EVAN
Leave me alone, asshole. I didn't lay a hand on you, okay?
Hunter bursts out laughing.
HUNTER
Evan, you're hysterical. You study for this?
EVAN
(awkward)
We'll find out soon enough.
HUNTER
(laughing)
Me neither.
Hunter surreptitiously hands Evan a cheat-sheet to the exam. Evan's face
brightens.
EVAN
You're kidding. Are these the answers?!
HUNTER
Damn, Evan, on the D.L.
EVAN
(holding it lower)
Thanks. Wow. Hey, I want to do something really special for Kayleigh tomorrow.
If I said I needed some help from you and the brothers...
HUNTER
I'd say blow me. Get the pledges to do it.
Evan nods and smiles as exams are passed down his row.
INT. SORORITY BEDROOM - NIGHT
Evan and Kayleigh have just finished having sex. She seems incredibly satisfied,
but he looks slightly uncomfortable.
KAYLEIGH
Oh my God, that was good. Where'd you learn all those new tricks/
EVAN
So it didn't feel...weird?
KAYLEIGH
Yeah, if you call multiple orgasms weird.
She giggles and snuggles into him. He's grateful for her affection, but still
looks uneasy. The PHONE RINGS and he automatically answers it.
EVAN
Yellow.
Silence on the other end. More silence.
KAYLEIGH
Fuck 'em.
As Evan hangs up, he and Kayleigh share a giggle and he resumes snuggle
position.
EVAN
What do you think it is about us that makes us so perfect? Like, looking back,
whatever gave you the nerve to sneak out and visit me after I moved away?
KAYLEIGH
(laughs)
As if my dad could've stopped me from seeing you. What's he gonna do to me? Evan
smiles to himself. And hugs her tighter.
EVAN
You think we'll always be together?
For the first time she looks at him with concern.
KAYLEIGH
That is the plan, right? Hell or high water?
He's in heaven, but plays it cool.
EVAN
Just making sure.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. FRAT HOUSE - FRONT LAWN - DAY
The pledges of Theta Chi busily gather around Evan, their clothes covered in
dirt, food and what might be vomit.
Evan, now dressed like his usual self, bangs a wooden spoon on a metal salad
bowl that a poor THETA CHI PLEDGE wears as a hat.
EVAN
Order, order. So all you rushes know what you've got to do for me?
THETA CHI PLEDGE
(correcting him)
Pledges, Sir Brother Evan, Sir.
EVAN
Pledges, rushees, same difference. Now this is a one-time deal. You do all this
for me and I'll never give you shit again. Promise.
A buzz of excitement runs through the pledges.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. FRAT HOUSE - ATTIC HALL - NIGHT
It's peaceful now. Evan covers Kayleigh's eyes with his hands as he leads her
through the attic hallways. Both are dressed to the nines.
KAYLEIGH
I don't understand, where are you taking me?
EVAN
You'll see.
EXT. FRAT HOUSE - ROOF - CONTINUOUS The wooden door to the rooftop swings open,
revealing Kayleigh and Evan. Kayleigh is dazzled by what she sees:
The entire roof is decorated with fairy-lights, Chinese lanterns and hundreds
upon hundreds of candles. And elegant romantic table for two awaits them,
flanked by twelve FORMALLY DRESSED SERVANTS (previously seen pledges) who
respectfully stare ahead with the utmost class.
Two pledges immediately pull out two chairs and stand by. Kayleigh applauds and
laughs with delight.
KAYLEIGH
I don't know what to say. It's beautiful.
EVAN
Go on. Sit down.
AS she takes a step toward the table - FLOWER PETALS shower down on her. She
looks up to see TWO MORE PLEDGES standing on ladders, delicately tossing pedals.
Kayleigh looks overwhelmed as she sits down.
KAYLEIGH
Why are you doing all this for me?
EVAN
Simple math. When I woke up this morning and saw your smile... I knew that I
wanted to spend the rest of my life with you.
Her hand reaches out to his and grabs it fiercely. Her eyes tell him she feels
the same way. A magical moment.
And they lean into each other for a kiss so enchanted it might as well be their
first ever --
Hunter bolts up the stairs, two at a time.
HUNTER
We been lookin' all over for you, man.
SENIOR BROTHER
Someone trashed your car.
The moment's gone. Evan and Kayleigh exchange worried looks.
EXT. FRAT HOUSE - PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS
Evan runs down the front lawn to his car, the Honda parked at the bottom of the
hill. His face collapses.
Evan's car has been trashed and is surrounded by broken glass. The seats and
tires have been slashed, the hood has bee mysteriously yanked off and the
steering wheel sits on the roof.
The most unnerving thing, however, is a SPIKED LEATHER DOG COLLAR hangs off the
rearview mirror.
By now a crowd has gathered. Evan runs up to people.
EVAN
(panicked)
Did you see who did this? You see anyone?
No one will answer with anything more than a shrug.
HUNTER
Probably them Pika fuckers.
But Kayleigh knows better. She stares at the collar.
EVAN
How could he get away with this? Right in front of the goddamn frat house!
A SENIOR BROTHER angrily calls him from the lawn.
SENIOR BROTHER
Frat house? Hey man, would you call your "country" a "cunt"?
Kayleigh shudders and Evan puts his arms around her.
KAYLEIGH
Don't. He's probably watching.
INT. FRAT HOUSE - EVAN'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
Evan leads Kayleigh into his bedroom and shuts the door. Evan can't help but
look under the bed. No one. He then locks the door, reaches into his desk and
finds a tiny canister of Pepper Spray.
KAYLEIGH
It's my fault. I should have told you he was released a few weeks ago.
EVAN
Might'a been nice.
(re: pepper spray)
Like this is gonna do any good. Maybe one of the frat guys has a gun.
KAYLEIGH
Please, Evan. Don't even joke. He wouldn't hurt you. He's just trying to scare
you away from me.
EVAN
(shaking the cannister)
Yeah, right. Tell that to Crockett.
KAYLEIGH
(quietly)
It's not his fault, Evan. You knew how bad he had it when we were kids.
EVAN
Don't give me this Oprah-book club bad upbringing shit, because you turned out
fine.
KAYLEIGH
(quietly)
My father never laid a hand on me. It's like the prick saved it all up for
Tommy.
Evan sits in silence for a moment, contemplating this. Kayleigh's eyes plead for
him to have compassion.
EVAN
Fine, then. We'll let campus security deal with him.
EXT. COLLEGE QUAD - NIGHT
Kayleigh and Evan walk through the all-but-deserted campus. Evan seems
especially paranoid. In the distance, some guy vomits loudly.
KAYLEIGH
Are you okay?
EVAN
What do you mean?
KAYLEIGH
It's just...you've been acting kinda strange, you know?
EVAN
Like how?
KAYLEIGH
I don't know. You seem...different. You make weird jokes. Your accents changed.
You don't even walk the same.
EVAN
I walk differently?
KAYLEIGH
I can't put my finger on it, but everything's a bit off. Even the dinner
tonight. It was beautiful, but...
EVAN
I know I've been actin strange lately. It's just that... I don't want anything
to happen to us.
The guy along the path gags loudly into the bushes. Kayleigh and Evan
instinctively avert their eyes. Suddenly, Kayleigh's ears perk and she stops
walking mid-stride.
KAYLEIGH
Wait. Something's not right. Isn't that your jacket?
EVAN
What?
The guy, wearing Evan's brown suede jacket, suddenly springs to his feet,
revealing his face for the first time.
KAYLEIGH
Tommy.
Tommy has grown in the last seven years. He has long, greasy hair and some
tattoos. He holds a TIRE THUMPER (a short, steel bat for truckers) menacingly in
his right hand.
Evan stands frozen in fear, his hands rooted in his coat pockets.
EVAN
Leave us alone you sick fuck!
TOMMY
Get this "us" shit. As if I was gonna lay a hand on my own sister. You've done
nicely for yourself, Evan. Nice friends, nice life, not to mention you're
fucking my sister. Not a bad piece of ass if I say so myself.
KAYLEIGH
Shut up, Tommy!
TOMMY
Aw, hey now, that was a compliment.
Tommy takes a few practice swings with the tire thumper.
EVAN
What the hell are you doing?
TOMMY
It wasn't enough that the whole world loves you, but you had to take away the
last person on earth who didn't think I was a piece of shit.
EVAN
(suppressing panic)
No one thinks you're a piece of shit, Tommy.
TOMMY
Right, Evan. I believe you just said "sick fuck."
Tommy rushes Evan and bashes him with the tire thumper in the shoulder and ribs.
Evan goes down. As Tommy prepares to bash his brains in, Evan whips out the
Pepper Spray and nails Tommy in the face.
Tommy reels back in pain, covering his eyes with this free hand. Evan struggles
to his feet and circles around Tommy, keeping a distance as he douses Tommy with
Pepper Spray. Kayleigh screams. Tommy blindly stumbles around, madly swinging
the tire thumper. Evan charges forward in an uncontrollable rage, rips the
weapon out of Tommy's hands and sprays a lethal does of pepper spray into
Tommy's open mouth.
KAYLEIGH
Evan, stop! You're gonna kill him!
EVAN
He's a fucking maniac!
Evan knocks Tommy down with the tire thumper. Kayleigh screams and tries to hold
Evan back, but he easily wrestles free of her. She runs to a blue streetlight on
the quad.
EVAN
He ruined Lenny's life --
Evan kicks Tommy hard in the ribs. Kayleigh pushes a button on the "Blue Light"
lamp post and an ALARM WAILS.
EVAN
He killed Crockett --
(kicks him)
Murdered that woman and her baby!
(kicks again)
And he's trying to kill me, Kayleigh! He's trying to fucking kill me!
Evan raises the tire thumper for a final attack and swings down OFF CAMERA.
CRUNCH!
Evan sees what he's done and drops the weapon, horrified. Kayleigh sees what
Evan's done to her brother. And stops cold when she sees the damage to Tommy.
Evan rushes toward her and she stumbles backwards, still terrified by his rage,
and skitters away from him in a crablike fashion.
SIRENS come racing to the quad. Evan looks away from Tommy's limp body.
Collapses to the ground and begins to weep.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. MAVIS PENITENTIARY - DAY
A SECURITY VEHICLE pulls through the ominous metal gates of the large state
prison. The vehicle stops and Evan, along with nine other convicts, exit in leg
and hand restraints.
INT. MAVIS PENITENTIARY - DAY
Evan, now wearing his standard issue inmate uniform, enters the General
Population area of the prison. PRISONERS begin screaming vicious taunts and
catcalls at the fresh batch of new inmates. Evan tries to keep composed and
walks toward his cell.
Evan looks up to see one of the men leaning over the second tier, KARL, a huge
muscular con with tattoos of swastikas and other Nazi symbols on his arm, blows
a kiss at Evan and winks.
INT. EVAN'S CELL - DAY
Evan enters a dimly lit cell plastered with pictures of Jesus Christ and various
Saints. Burning flames on open cans of shoe polish serve as candles to the large
shrine.
There is a stained bare mattress on the top bunk. Sitting on the bottom bunk is
CARLOS, 30s, a massive Hispanic convict covered with faded Indian ink jail tats
of Christ in agony.
Carlos stares at Evan disinterestedly as Evan makes up his bed on the top bunk.
CARLOS
First time?
Evan nods glumly.
CARLOS
Best not bitch up. Wind up someone's luggage that way.
EVAN
(desperate)
Can you protect me?
CARLOS
Jesus himself couldn't make me take on the Brotherhood. When they come, just put
your mind in another place, man. Be somewhere else.
A BUZZER SOUNDS. Carlos leaves the cell without another word.
INT. PRISON CAFETERIA - EVENING
Evan sets his tray down at a table filled with Carlos and some other INMATES. No
sooner has he sat down to eat, do eager forks reach onto his tray and steal his
food. Carlos shrugs at Evan and offers him a roll.
INT. MAVIS VISITING CHAMBER - DAY
Andrea sits across from Evan in the visitor's chamber. Her hair is now
bottle-blonde. Four inches of Plexiglas separate the two and they talk on
monitored phones. Andrea, frazzled, twirls an unlit cigarette.
ANDREA
...I spoke to your new lawyer about the appeal. HE's sure he can get you off on
self- defense, so if you're patient.
EVAN
How long will I be in here?
ANDREA
I don't know. These things take time.
EVAN
How's Kayleigh doing? She all right?
Andrea's look tells him to look for hope elsewhere.
EVAN
What about my journals, Mom? Did you bring the ones I asked for?
Andrea nods, holding up two comp books. "AGE 7" and "AGE 13".
ANDREA
I found these. The others are still in storage.
EVAN
Damn it, Mom. I told you I need them all!
ANDREA
Fine. You'll get them, Evan. But I think it's far more important to focus on
your case right now.
Evan looks as if he's about to disagree with her, but he closes his mouth and
placates her.
EVAN
Sure, Mom. You're right. Just try to tell Kayleigh I'm sorry.
And officer signals Evan and points to his watch.
ANDREA
I'm not gonna lose you, kiddo. Promise me you'll hang on, Ev.
They look at each other and Evan slowly lowers the phone. He hangs up, Andrea
still pressing her phone to her ear.
INT. MAVIS PENITENTIARY - DAY
Evan walks closely behind Carlos through a corridor, clutching his journals. As
he passes Karl, the Neo-Nazi, Karl reaches over and firmly grabs Evan's crotch.
Evan, totally violated, turns white with rage.
KARL
Shit on my dick or blood on my knife.
Evan stands there, stunned, unable to react when --
Another Neo-Nazi, RICK, swats Evan's journals out of his hands and onto the
floor. Life springs back into Evan as he rushes for the journals. He and Rick
grab the journals at the same time. A minor tug of war.
EVAN
Let go! They're mine!
Rick tears them away, Evan coming up with only a few torn pages. Evan sees the
damage and goes mental.
EVAN
Motherfucker!
Evan swings at Rick and misses. INMATES CHEER! It's on! Rick lunges for Evan, a
brief and painful scuffle ensues, the journals getting trampled. Suddenly -- The
sounds of COCKED RIFLES echo through the air. The fight stops instantly as Rick
and Evan look up to see --
ANGLE ON
OFFICER STATION. Officers aim rifles at the pair. From an upper tier, even more
officers with more rifles.
Their barrels sight directly at Evan. Rick steps away, quick to maliciously
scoop up Evan's torn journals.
KARL
We'll be comin' for you tonight, sister.
Evan catches his breath, then looks at the remaining few pages on the floor.
INT. EVAN'S CELL - DAY
Evan enters the cell with a few entry pages. HE looks through them. Nothing
there.
Evan nods depressed, then sees the page from his "Age 7" journal, grabs Carlos'
duct tape and tapes the page over his bed.
INT. PRISON CORRIDOR - DAY
Evan, walking toward some White Supremacists, flinches whenever the occasional
INMATE brushes against him. Evan is completely paranoid, waiting for an
inevitable attack.
Karl makes himself visible among them, holding a journal. He reads:
KARL
(from Evan's journal)
Today I found my grandfather's death certificate. HE died in a nut house, just
like my father. Mom denies it, but she thinks I'm gonna end up the same way...
The other Supremacists start laughing and calling "looney" and "nut job." Evan
rushes past them and they make chicken clucks at him.
EXT. PRISON YARD - DAY
Evan and Carlos sit on BLEACHERS that overlook the other prisoners working out.
Evan closely watches Karl and Rick who stare daggers at him from across the
yard. A SKINHEAD PASSES SOMETHING with a white-taped handle to Karl but no
officers seem to notice.
Evan slides closer to Carlos and stares at the Jesus Christ tattoos all over
Carlos' back.
EVAN
You're religious Carlos, you believe that bit about "the Lord works in
mysterious ways?"
CARLOS
Straight up.
EVAN
Because I think he sent me to your cell on purpose. For you to help me.
CARLOS
Shit. I knew you were crazy.
EVAN
I ain't bullshitting. Jesus speaks to me in my dreams.
Carlos scoffs whatever.
EVAN
Pack of smokes says I can prove it to you.
Carlos is suddenly interested.
INT. EVAN'S CELL - LATER
Evan holds a tattered journal entry in his hand and finishes up a conversation.
Carlos looks dumbfounded.
EVAN
So when I'm out, I need you to watch my face and hands closely.
CARLOS
You need to see the prison shrink, man.
Their conversation stops when a convict rolls a mail cart by, Evan looking up
expectantly.
EVAN
Anything today?
CONVICT
Yep. Just not for you.
Disappointed, Evan turns back to Carlos. Holds up his journal entry.
EVAN
Just tell me if anything weird happens.
CARLOS
Weirder than this?
EVAN
Marks, scars, I dunno. Anything could happen I guess.
Evan studies the page.
JOURNAL ENTRY
On Wednesday I got in trouble for a drawing that