WITNESS
WITNESS
Screenplay by
EARL W. WALLACE
WILLIAM KELLEY
from a
story by
WILLIAM KELLEY
REVISED DRAFT
APRIL 23, 1984
1 EXT. LANCASTER COUNTY, PA. COUNTRYSIDE - DAY
(TITLE SEQUENCE)
The faces of several young children are presented in
CLOSEUP, as they walk TOWARD US across a ploughed
field. On the SOUND TRACK, the haunting SOUNDS OF A
GREGORIAN FUNERAL CHANT. The CAMERA PANS UP to the
faces of older brothers and sisters, then to parents
and grandparents. These are not familiar faces, but
faces from another age, strong and open. All are
dressed in the distinctive clothing of the Amish.
2 EXT. COUNTRY LANE - DAY
Through the last traces of early morning mist another
group of black-clad figures make their way down a lane.
3 EXT. COUNTRY LANE - DAY
An Amish buggy, black and highwheeled, stark against
the landscape, appears, a spirited chestnut in the
traces.
Framed in the glass window of the narrow buggy is the
stern figure of an Amish man in black topcoat and
flatbrimmed hat, his bonneted wife in muted colors,
the face of a boy, attired like his father, peering
out.
The horse's breath smokes on the frosty air, the buggy
CREAKS on its springs, and there's the rhythmic CLIP-
CLOP OF HOOVES on the pavement.
4 ANOTHER LANE
Two Amish buggies reach a crossroads, join a procession
of three others. They disappear as the lane wends
through a leafless thicket of hickory.
5 VALLEY
A BIG SHOT... now the procession numbers almost a dozen
buggies... it is headed toward a distant farmhouse.
6 BARNYARD
Where literally dozens of carriages are parked. The
horses have been taken from the traces, removed to the
shelter of the barn.
7 EXT. LAPP FARMHOUSE - FRONT PORCH
As the black clad mourners begin to move into
the
house (women and children presumably first).
8 INT. LAPP FARMHOUSE
the coffins the upper half open. We see that
the worse
has been dressed in white linen, a piece of
white linen
partially covering the bearded face.
END TITLE SEQUENCE.
9 INT. LAPP FARMHOUSE
Partitions have been removed, making the
central rooms of the farmhouse a spacious hall. The place is
packed, a hundred-fifty or more Amish, all sitting in
absolute silence on rows of wooden benches.
A wooden coffin rests on a bench in the f.g.,
and near it the close relatives of the deceased occupy a
special Place.
RACHEL LAPP
A young woman of perhaps twenty-seven. Her
face is pale and drawn. In happier circumstances,
although there haven't been too many of late in Rachel's
life, we would see a robust, sensual woman of full
figure, spirit and intelligence.
Eight-year-old SAMUEL LAPP flits next to his
mother; he
would appear stunned, possibly not entirely
comprehend-
ing events.
And the patriarch, ELI LAPP; his stubborn,
weathered -
yet not unkind - features grief-stricken.
THE MOURNERS
Their faces...
CLOCK
as it begins to CHIME nine a.m.
FAVORING PREACHER
as he removes his hat. As one, the men in the
congre-
gation remove their hats also.
9 CONTINUED:
Then the preacher begins to speak in a formal
German
dialect:
(SUBTITLES OVER)
PREACHER
... a brother has been called home.
God has spoken through the death of
our neighbor, Jacob Lapp...
THE FAMILY
where Rachel, Samuel and Eli are sitting- SOUNDS
of emo-
tion and grief not quite suppressed are heard
throughout as:
PREACHER
... husband of Rachel, father to
Samuel, son of Eli.
(and)
His chair is empty, his bed is
empty, his voice will be heard no
more. He was needed in our
presence, but God needs such men,
too. That one should be taken so
suddenly. Treat sorrow. Still, we
would not wish him back. Rather we
should prepare ourselves to follow him.
TIGHTENING to the Lapps, and...
10 EXT. CEMETERY
The mourners have gathered about the grave,
standing in
silence as four pallbearers are lowering the
coffin
into the pit. The many buggies are aligned in the
b.g.
As the pallbearers begin to shovel soil and gravel
into
the grave, the Preacher begins to read a hymn in
German
... a slow atonal litany which seems to hang
forever on
the frosty air.
RACHEL
TIGHTENING to her as the hymn continues...
CUT TO:
11 INT. LAPP FARMHOUSE 11
where the Amish have gathered for the traditional
post
funeral, midday meals.
11 CONTINUED: 11
Long tables are laden with customary Amish fare
... crocks of soup, hams, fowl, fried boiled eggs
and pickled beets, preserves
and an infinite variety of pies and pastries.
RACHEL
Where she sits among women, accepting their
condolences.
DANIEL HOCHSTETLER
A brawny-armed, ruggedly-handsome, raffish looking
Amishman.
There is something atypical about his face a slightly
sardonic set of
mouth, a bold eye, a prominent set of jaw. Not exactly
what old Jacob
Ammann had in mind, maybe, but a well set-up man
nonetheless, and at
ease among men. He's among a group of men including old
STOLTZFUS,
the local healer, FISHER, BIEILER and Bieiler's stout
young son, Tom.
STOLTZFUS
Lapp was a good farmer.
None better.
BEILER
But not the man to buy a horse
for you.
(and)
Hochstetler, wasn't it your
father
sold him that horse with a
ruptured testicle?
TOM
(grins)
Told him it was a bee sting
made
him limp that way.
HOCHSTETLER
(amused)
That horse had one good ball.
That's all it takes.
The others chuckle. But Hochstetler's
attention is still on Rachel.
RACHEL
as Hochstetler looms on the horizon, plants
himself like a tree in front of her.
11 CONTINUED: (2) 11
At ease as he was with the men, he's a bit awkward at this.
All the women, very much aware of Hochstetler's availability, tune in as
Rachel looks up.
HOCHSTETLER
I was sorry to hear about Jacob.
Let us hope he walks close with
God.
RACHEL
I'm sure he does, Daniel.
12 FIELDS, LAPP FARM - DAY 12
It is some time after the funeral and the Lapp family is hard at work
breaking ground for the spring ploughing. The death of Jacob has
increased the work load on; all three - Samuel maneuvers a four-mule
team while Rachel and old Eli work nearby, further breaking up the
earth. Rachel looks up from the back-breaking labor as several figures
approach - it's Daniel Hochstetler and two of his brothers. Without a word
they fall in beside Eli and Rachel and take up various tasks associated with
the work in hand. Daniel works close beside Rachel.
12A EXT. COUNTRY ROADS, LANCASTER COUNTY - DAY 12B
A few BRIEF SHOTS of a lone buggy containing the Lapp family take
us from the 18th century into the 20th century the reassuring RATTLE
OF THE CARRIAGE WHEELS on quiet backroad, to the ROAR OF
TRAFFIC as the buggy waits patiently for a chance to cross a busy
interstate highway.
12B EXT. HIGHWAY, LANCASTER COUNTY - DAY 12B
A huge tractor trailer rig hovers over the frail buggy as it trots down
the interstate. The camera cranes up to reveal a procession of vehicles
behind the truck for a chance to overtake it.
13 OMITTED 13
14 EXT. PLATFORM, LANCASTER STATION - DAY 14
Daniel Hochstetler moves through the crowd on the plat-form, Rachel
turns surprised, as he approaches, a faint color coming to her cheek.
RACHEL
Daniel?
14 CONTINUED: 14
HOCHSTETLER
I...I was at the feed store.
And I saw your horse, so...
There is an embarrassment between them broken by the
arrival of the train.
HOCHSTETLER
(continuing)
You will come back soon?
Samuel can barely contain his excitement as he drags at
his mother's hand.
SAMUEL
Quickly, Mothers Quickly!
Rachel embraces Eli.
ELI
You be careful out among them
English.
She turns to Hochstetler.
RACHEL
I need time, Daniel.
14A EXT. CARPARK, LANCASTER STATION - DAY 14A
Daniel Hochstetler leaps into the driving seat of his open
wagon and with a flick of the reins and a whoop
sets his horse off at a fast trot.
14B EXT. TRAIN - DAY 14B
The ENGINE gives a WARNING BLAST before creeping slowly
forward.
15 OMITTED 15
16 INT. TRAIN (MOVING)
16
as Samuel spots something out of the window that causes
him to light up.
SAMUEL
Look, Mama...l
17 HIS POV THROUGH WINDOW 17
A road runs parallel to the train track, and Hoch-
stetler in his wagon urges his horse almost to the
gallop as he attempts to keep pace with the train.


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